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If you're looking for another Star wars fanfic, here ya go. If you're looking for a... rather sensible? Star wars fanfic.... it is gonna be a Hit or miss. 50/50 the whole half and half! If you're looking for a... rational MC? Eh.
excellent story, the plot is developing quite nicely, and its a proper story with actual good deep and juicy lore!! and its not one of the ecchi trash where the mc is constantly going after sexual partners! its an honest to god lore friendly star wars AU, with reincarnation as a premise ^-^
not a fan of the mc he is pretty much a masochist enjoys pain? It just starts off with a torture scene then the mc just joins them meh not the kind of character i can really connect to ........
Very enjoyable story so far. The beginning was a little odd but past that everything is pretty good. The story is well written and IMMERSIVE.And updates are stable with great joy and anticipation I am waiting for continuance of books performance.
This is One of if not the best star war fanfics after the first Couple of chapters the story really pikes up and so far its really interesting and new so to the author you are doing a great job and I'm really enjoying the story so far.
una historia muy interesante me gustaria verle crear su propio seguidores como el imperio eterno la antigua republica tenia a darth revan satele shan i otros si necitas justifica r la creacion de un ejercito puedes utilizar las forjas estelares i deberias añadir romance satele shanXmc
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if i read Properly this is a Knights of the old Republic Storyline not many people are doing it I hope to see it continue good luck author..
The first chapter is....rushed. But I'm trying my best! If anyone has any feedback, I'd love to hear it. I'm not going to shy away from criticism.
If you're looking for another Star wars fanfic, here ya go. If you're looking for a... rather sensible? Star wars fanfic.... it is gonna be a Hit or miss. 50/50 the whole half and half! If you're looking for a... rational MC? Eh.
excellent story, the plot is developing quite nicely, and its a proper story with actual good deep and juicy lore!! and its not one of the ecchi trash where the mc is constantly going after sexual partners! its an honest to god lore friendly star wars AU, with reincarnation as a premise ^-^
not a fan of the mc he is pretty much a masochist enjoys pain? It just starts off with a torture scene then the mc just joins them meh not the kind of character i can really connect to ........
Very enjoyable story so far. The beginning was a little odd but past that everything is pretty good. The story is well written and IMMERSIVE.And updates are stable with great joy and anticipation I am waiting for continuance of books performance.
This is One of if not the best star war fanfics after the first Couple of chapters the story really pikes up and so far its really interesting and new so to the author you are doing a great job and I'm really enjoying the story so far.
una historia muy interesante me gustaria verle crear su propio seguidores como el imperio eterno la antigua republica tenia a darth revan satele shan i otros si necitas justifica r la creacion de un ejercito puedes utilizar las forjas estelares i deberias añadir romance satele shanXmc
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if i read Properly this is a Knights of the old Republic Storyline not many people are doing it I hope to see it continue good luck author..
The first chapter is....rushed. But I'm trying my best! If anyone has any feedback, I'd love to hear it. I'm not going to shy away from criticism.