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Wow! Very well written! Thought went Into every last detail. This is not a sunday read but needs attention to follow, so I think alot of people that love fantasy will like this book. Well done.
First of all, prologue introduces world. Each chapter is long. Characters are pretty well thought out and make sense. Plot is good. No irrational actions, so far they just go with the flow/survive with close ones. Pretty good read, not action packed, but cool world/history and I enjoy reading how everything plays out. 😊
A very interesting and captivating read 💕💖 Hooked right into the story and makes me wanting to read more~ Writing style is good with nice narration. Didn't find any grammar issues and have nice flow to the story ❤️❤️ I can see a lot of potential and looking forward to the plot development! Great work! All the best 💗
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amazingly written and the world created was so captivating and original! the author has done a good job at conveying the intircacies of palace life. kudos to the author! 💖💖💖
This novel is so lit! This is the kind that I need to learn to. With grammar at its finest and narration quality on the top. This is so good that I got goosebumps when I read it. Thank you for giving me such experience and I liked your story. Kudos and Peace ✌️
Hey, I'm Ms. Jornaliza, an editor at Goodnovel, a writing platform that helps authors get a reliable and long-term income through their books. We are currently approaching authors who have a nice plot, synopsis, writing structure, style, and strong characters to sign their stories with us. If your story is approved, you will be receiving an attractive monthly update bonus and premium coins share income monthly till your contract with us lasts. If you are interested in joining us email me at msjornaliza.goodnovel@gmaill@gmail.com
This is refreshing, Well thought of and a very captivating story. It has this sense of power in it making you feel like its really happening.The description is great, the characters are splendid. I’ll recommend this to everyone. Kudos to you author .
A wonderful example of world-building. The author has created a fully-realized magical realm in which to set their adventure. The translation could use a little work to fix some grammar and word issues, but otherwise, this is solid.
A really well thought out novel. Well written and well executed. Really recommend people give this novel a oppurtunity.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
You've done a really good job. It's just that in the first chapter, you mixed your past and present tense. Your writing quality is good, it's just that you sometimes miss capital letters when needed and a few punctuation errors. Otherwise, the story is really good, as is the character design and world background. Good job.
Aye this is great! :D I absolutely love the opening hehe! It's written in a way that makes me feel as if I was reading a fairy tale, but a dark one at that :D After reading the opening, there's no way I won't check out the rest of the chapters hehe! And I did not regret doing so :3 The world is masterfully crafted, and I like how each character have their own upbringing, personalities, and stuff, so it feels like they really are inhabitants there :3 Also, the use of the system sure makes things interesting hehe! The only thing that may need more attention would be the punctuation and capitalization, tho, but it's very very minor! :D Like, some sentences don't end with any punctuation, but it's not a lot :3 and sometimes shouting dialogues end with a dot/comma instead of an exclamation mark, but hey it's still a great read! :3 Great work, author! <3
I gotta admit, your story is very interesting. The plot really draws a person in the book. Even with two chapters, I can easily say your story has potential! I hope you continue the story! I'll be looking forward to it!
I'm really loving the vibe I'm getting from this novel. :D Love how amazing the story was put together and how smoothly the events flow. I would definitely recommend reading this, amazing job XD
If you didn't check this book, you gonna regret. Give it a go and you'll find it hard to put it away. Good work author. [img=update][img=update]
I really love a good fantasy. This was well written. I have only read up to chapter 5 but have added this this to my library as i want to continue to read. I would reccomend giving this a read.
I've always loved fantasy books, and this one on webnovel suits me well, the world description is awesome and the story is brilliant, author has really done a good job
I think the introduction into the story was well done and just everything was nicely blended together. I really recommend it to people who like that mystery vibe.
the book is really great.. easy to read and the characters were formulated into something that the readers would love. my only concern was the compacted paragraphs that can be cut down into smaller paragraphs.. just for the convenience of other readers that are reading from their mobile phones... nonetheless, the story is good
I've read up to chapter three, it is thought- provoking and riveting. Chapter one can hook anyone with the suspense. Good job, keep up the good work. ❤️❤️❤️
This book is great really my cup of tea.. thrilling adventures with just the right blend of fantasy and romance... good luck hope you succeed
Hello! I've read the first three chapters of your book and I can tell that you really do have the potential of being a writer. I was looking up to more details, like narration and description to make me feel 'more' a lot engross about the story, Hmm, yeah, I feel like you lack description, but I love how you've described them accurately without further ados. Grammatical errors can be corrected so there is no need to be concerned about it too, much. Yes. The first chappy was good, but I was a little confused? Maybe it's because I'm sleepy or something. Anyways, I will give a new review after reading all the chapters. Happy Writing Author!
ISS gUDD! I like how the author builds up tension from the first chapter!! It felt really nice reading it. Also its my honor to write the first review!!
Wow, okay, this novel actually captivated me. It's going into my reading list for sure, Thumbs up and keep up the good work. I also just love that the title has Mt. Tai in it.
Wow! Very well written! Thought went Into every last detail. This is not a sunday read but needs attention to follow, so I think alot of people that love fantasy will like this book. Well done.
First of all, prologue introduces world. Each chapter is long. Characters are pretty well thought out and make sense. Plot is good. No irrational actions, so far they just go with the flow/survive with close ones. Pretty good read, not action packed, but cool world/history and I enjoy reading how everything plays out. 😊
A very interesting and captivating read 💕💖 Hooked right into the story and makes me wanting to read more~ Writing style is good with nice narration. Didn't find any grammar issues and have nice flow to the story ❤️❤️ I can see a lot of potential and looking forward to the plot development! Great work! All the best 💗
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amazingly written and the world created was so captivating and original! the author has done a good job at conveying the intircacies of palace life. kudos to the author! 💖💖💖
This novel is so lit! This is the kind that I need to learn to. With grammar at its finest and narration quality on the top. This is so good that I got goosebumps when I read it. Thank you for giving me such experience and I liked your story. Kudos and Peace ✌️
Hey, I'm Ms. Jornaliza, an editor at Goodnovel, a writing platform that helps authors get a reliable and long-term income through their books. We are currently approaching authors who have a nice plot, synopsis, writing structure, style, and strong characters to sign their stories with us. If your story is approved, you will be receiving an attractive monthly update bonus and premium coins share income monthly till your contract with us lasts. If you are interested in joining us email me at msjornaliza.goodnovel@gmaill@gmail.com
This is refreshing, Well thought of and a very captivating story. It has this sense of power in it making you feel like its really happening.The description is great, the characters are splendid. I’ll recommend this to everyone. Kudos to you author .
A wonderful example of world-building. The author has created a fully-realized magical realm in which to set their adventure. The translation could use a little work to fix some grammar and word issues, but otherwise, this is solid.
A really well thought out novel. Well written and well executed. Really recommend people give this novel a oppurtunity.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
You've done a really good job. It's just that in the first chapter, you mixed your past and present tense. Your writing quality is good, it's just that you sometimes miss capital letters when needed and a few punctuation errors. Otherwise, the story is really good, as is the character design and world background. Good job.
Aye this is great! :D I absolutely love the opening hehe! It's written in a way that makes me feel as if I was reading a fairy tale, but a dark one at that :D After reading the opening, there's no way I won't check out the rest of the chapters hehe! And I did not regret doing so :3 The world is masterfully crafted, and I like how each character have their own upbringing, personalities, and stuff, so it feels like they really are inhabitants there :3 Also, the use of the system sure makes things interesting hehe! The only thing that may need more attention would be the punctuation and capitalization, tho, but it's very very minor! :D Like, some sentences don't end with any punctuation, but it's not a lot :3 and sometimes shouting dialogues end with a dot/comma instead of an exclamation mark, but hey it's still a great read! :3 Great work, author! <3
I gotta admit, your story is very interesting. The plot really draws a person in the book. Even with two chapters, I can easily say your story has potential! I hope you continue the story! I'll be looking forward to it!
I'm really loving the vibe I'm getting from this novel. :D Love how amazing the story was put together and how smoothly the events flow. I would definitely recommend reading this, amazing job XD
If you didn't check this book, you gonna regret. Give it a go and you'll find it hard to put it away. Good work author. [img=update][img=update]
I really love a good fantasy. This was well written. I have only read up to chapter 5 but have added this this to my library as i want to continue to read. I would reccomend giving this a read.
I've always loved fantasy books, and this one on webnovel suits me well, the world description is awesome and the story is brilliant, author has really done a good job
I think the introduction into the story was well done and just everything was nicely blended together. I really recommend it to people who like that mystery vibe.
the book is really great.. easy to read and the characters were formulated into something that the readers would love. my only concern was the compacted paragraphs that can be cut down into smaller paragraphs.. just for the convenience of other readers that are reading from their mobile phones... nonetheless, the story is good
I've read up to chapter three, it is thought- provoking and riveting. Chapter one can hook anyone with the suspense. Good job, keep up the good work. ❤️❤️❤️
This book is great really my cup of tea.. thrilling adventures with just the right blend of fantasy and romance... good luck hope you succeed
Hello! I've read the first three chapters of your book and I can tell that you really do have the potential of being a writer. I was looking up to more details, like narration and description to make me feel 'more' a lot engross about the story, Hmm, yeah, I feel like you lack description, but I love how you've described them accurately without further ados. Grammatical errors can be corrected so there is no need to be concerned about it too, much. Yes. The first chappy was good, but I was a little confused? Maybe it's because I'm sleepy or something. Anyways, I will give a new review after reading all the chapters. Happy Writing Author!
ISS gUDD! I like how the author builds up tension from the first chapter!! It felt really nice reading it. Also its my honor to write the first review!!
Wow, okay, this novel actually captivated me. It's going into my reading list for sure, Thumbs up and keep up the good work. I also just love that the title has Mt. Tai in it.