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I love it! Awesome! Can’t wait for next chapter! Anffawtqthnaflgxlgxhdkyxkctdjrxjteyysidfyyodkgxigdiixixgigxkdigxkgsgi Uccuuv igufuuf jcuufyffy igufvuhgiviugvi juicigivi
Definitely, it is a story that I recommend reading, even if it is not one of those that releases a chapter weekly or daily, it is a very good and interesting story, thanks for this work of art author
Really good concept. Easy to follow along and not have to wonder where the author is trying to go with it. Only problem I have is I need more ove it and in a timely matter!!!
this was absolutely incredible the story developed perfectly and i am in love with the personalty's of the chariktors the story is amazing i hope for more like this
Very good novel, highly recommended............................................................................................................................
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Good chapter author. Great to see update. Cant wait to see how tom dies and whether the knights anyonominity will be revealed or not after the war ended and would love to see pov from dumbles and some members of order of chicken.
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This had alot of potential, It was witty, a little funny, it had the right mix of seriousness and gag references, as well. Too bad, it seems like it's abandoned.
15 Chapters in and I think it's okay to do a review now.. The story and writing is good, the pacing is decent.. The fight scenes are well done as well.. The MC is not OP so it's good, he's having a hard time fighting when it comes to an Army of Death Eaters or a high ranked one (Bellatrix).. The only massive problem I have in this story is the upcoming romance between Harry and Susan because it feels forced, it feels like J.K Rowling herself wrote the romance.. The author in chapter 15 pulled the "Harry is my Family" card when it comes to Hermione so they don't feel any romantic feelings towards each other despite the loyalty that Hermione showed from Book 1-5 (The story starts at the end of book 5 btw).. Susan's interest in Harry was sudden and feels like Ginny, it happens right after Harry saved her and her aunt which feels more like a reward from a quest rather than a natural love.. Susan gives the 'white knight crush' vibe after the MC saved her (which canon harry hates) so I don't know why the author did that? I would've honestly prefer Hermione or Daphne as a love interest so there's any interesting that is happening to romance, I hate sudden attraction when I'm reading a story.. But if you don't care about the romance then I recommend this story..
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The Story is rather well written. And the power structure does seem to be rather well balanced. But I fear this is also one of those seemingly randomly abandoned fics here WN.
This story is great, give it a shot and read it!🤘 The writing style is superb and very intriguing. The story is progressing nicely, i just wished there was romance but probably in the future this route will develop. The chaptesr are long which is great also. The only flaw is the update frequency which is not regular but i guess it is because it takes time to write and spell proof the long chapters.
Please more. Hope they kill all the death eaters brutually. Please more. Hope they kill all the death eaters brutually.Please more. Hope they kill all the death eaters brutually.
ネタバレを明かす awesome chapter and glad to see you updating. I read the notes on the previous chapter. Really sad to hear that. My condolence to you..............
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It's very well done in terms of fanfiction. Each chapter is long enough to feel substantial and the characters are portrayed well enough to feel natural and comparable to the originals. The story has enough intrigue and power progression to hold my interest and the mc is growing well enough to feel strong without being overpowered. I just hope the author keeps up the good work and updates regularly. Thanks for the cool story author!
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Hope it's Hermione we get with and hope you make more chapters sooner, and hopefully longer chapters you make them be so that we don't have to have that dreadful cliffhanger.
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Great chapter and story. Hope next chapter is fast. But i understand the slow nature of updates as the chapters are long and great. Keep it up author.
This is truthfully much better then I expected it to be. Once I started reading it it sucked me right in and I read everything out all in one sitting. I look foreword to more and I hope the story maintains this level of excellence.
Reviewed at Chapter 11 This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfictions I have ever read. The MC is actually calm, smart and does lots of planning before doing anything and the beat thing is that he tries to make use of every resource at his disposal. He has the six paths of reincarnation (katekyo hitman reborn) as his cheat but its not OP from the start. He has to work hard in order to master his powers. The way he was given the powers in the afterlife was great. The grammar is very good and the writing is very structured. All in all 5 out of 5. Keep up the great work author. Need more fanfictions like this. Can't wait for more chapters.
well...so far so good...the author's got some unique ideas...this is the first time I'm seeing an aspect of katekyo hitman reborn being used in another universe...and it's done quite well...I love Harry Potter fanfics with a passion and I believe this one has a lot of potential....other than that writing quality is great and chapters are also of good size, so that's a bonus...now if only we could get more chapters that would make this novel perfect
this story is too good. the mc is great. he doesn't hesitate to kill.///////////////////////////........................................................................................
Nice writing. Interesting idea with the powers of the mc and the way the author goes about the reincarnation is different from the aways used trunk-sama or god. Hope there is some romance and Harry doesn’t get op overnight. Is there going to be a harem?
Loving this so far. story Improving by chapters. Cant wait for more. Loving this so far. story Improving by chapters. Cant wait for more.Loving this so far. story Improving by chapters. Cant wait for more.
I love it! Awesome! Can’t wait for next chapter! Anffawtqthnaflgxlgxhdkyxkctdjrxjteyysidfyyodkgxigdiixixgigxkdigxkgsgi Uccuuv igufuuf jcuufyffy igufvuhgiviugvi juicigivi
Definitely, it is a story that I recommend reading, even if it is not one of those that releases a chapter weekly or daily, it is a very good and interesting story, thanks for this work of art author
Really good concept. Easy to follow along and not have to wonder where the author is trying to go with it. Only problem I have is I need more ove it and in a timely matter!!!
this was absolutely incredible the story developed perfectly and i am in love with the personalty's of the chariktors the story is amazing i hope for more like this
Very good novel, highly recommended............................................................................................................................
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Good chapter author. Great to see update. Cant wait to see how tom dies and whether the knights anyonominity will be revealed or not after the war ended and would love to see pov from dumbles and some members of order of chicken.
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This had alot of potential, It was witty, a little funny, it had the right mix of seriousness and gag references, as well. Too bad, it seems like it's abandoned.
15 Chapters in and I think it's okay to do a review now.. The story and writing is good, the pacing is decent.. The fight scenes are well done as well.. The MC is not OP so it's good, he's having a hard time fighting when it comes to an Army of Death Eaters or a high ranked one (Bellatrix).. The only massive problem I have in this story is the upcoming romance between Harry and Susan because it feels forced, it feels like J.K Rowling herself wrote the romance.. The author in chapter 15 pulled the "Harry is my Family" card when it comes to Hermione so they don't feel any romantic feelings towards each other despite the loyalty that Hermione showed from Book 1-5 (The story starts at the end of book 5 btw).. Susan's interest in Harry was sudden and feels like Ginny, it happens right after Harry saved her and her aunt which feels more like a reward from a quest rather than a natural love.. Susan gives the 'white knight crush' vibe after the MC saved her (which canon harry hates) so I don't know why the author did that? I would've honestly prefer Hermione or Daphne as a love interest so there's any interesting that is happening to romance, I hate sudden attraction when I'm reading a story.. But if you don't care about the romance then I recommend this story..
ネタバレを明かす The Story is rather well written. And the power structure does seem to be rather well balanced. But I fear this is also one of those seemingly randomly abandoned fics here WN.
This story is great, give it a shot and read it!🤘 The writing style is superb and very intriguing. The story is progressing nicely, i just wished there was romance but probably in the future this route will develop. The chaptesr are long which is great also. The only flaw is the update frequency which is not regular but i guess it is because it takes time to write and spell proof the long chapters.
Please more. Hope they kill all the death eaters brutually. Please more. Hope they kill all the death eaters brutually.Please more. Hope they kill all the death eaters brutually.
ネタバレを明かす awesome chapter and glad to see you updating. I read the notes on the previous chapter. Really sad to hear that. My condolence to you..............
5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars 5 Stars
It's very well done in terms of fanfiction. Each chapter is long enough to feel substantial and the characters are portrayed well enough to feel natural and comparable to the originals. The story has enough intrigue and power progression to hold my interest and the mc is growing well enough to feel strong without being overpowered. I just hope the author keeps up the good work and updates regularly. Thanks for the cool story author!
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Hope it's Hermione we get with and hope you make more chapters sooner, and hopefully longer chapters you make them be so that we don't have to have that dreadful cliffhanger.
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Great chapter and story. Hope next chapter is fast. But i understand the slow nature of updates as the chapters are long and great. Keep it up author.
This is truthfully much better then I expected it to be. Once I started reading it it sucked me right in and I read everything out all in one sitting. I look foreword to more and I hope the story maintains this level of excellence.
Reviewed at Chapter 11 This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfictions I have ever read. The MC is actually calm, smart and does lots of planning before doing anything and the beat thing is that he tries to make use of every resource at his disposal. He has the six paths of reincarnation (katekyo hitman reborn) as his cheat but its not OP from the start. He has to work hard in order to master his powers. The way he was given the powers in the afterlife was great. The grammar is very good and the writing is very structured. All in all 5 out of 5. Keep up the great work author. Need more fanfictions like this. Can't wait for more chapters.
well...so far so good...the author's got some unique ideas...this is the first time I'm seeing an aspect of katekyo hitman reborn being used in another universe...and it's done quite well...I love Harry Potter fanfics with a passion and I believe this one has a lot of potential....other than that writing quality is great and chapters are also of good size, so that's a bonus...now if only we could get more chapters that would make this novel perfect
this story is too good. the mc is great. he doesn't hesitate to kill.///////////////////////////........................................................................................
Nice writing. Interesting idea with the powers of the mc and the way the author goes about the reincarnation is different from the aways used trunk-sama or god. Hope there is some romance and Harry doesn’t get op overnight. Is there going to be a harem?
Loving this so far. story Improving by chapters. Cant wait for more. Loving this so far. story Improving by chapters. Cant wait for more.Loving this so far. story Improving by chapters. Cant wait for more.
This is amazing, and you, good sir/mam, are a fantastic author.