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Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $100 advance by joining the contest.
I was hooked on this story right for. the beginning practically at the edge of my seat. I couldn't stop reading, my need for more winning out in the end. The author has done a very good job writing, keep it up.👍
Can we talk about the content here? like, it's so insanely good! I loved your concepts and world background! The characters were very clearly explained! want to see more from you! keep it up!
A breathtakingly fast paced book that grabs your interest and refuses to let go.Deeply moving with clear,fresh insights on mental health.Absolutely gripping,can't wait for more!
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Nice work, the book is intriguing and interesting. Keep it up, The character development and the world build-up is very on point and well established. Keep it up.
the book is really amazing! the way the author describes each character and the scenery around. my favorite part about this book is the feeling of being the character itself, something very difficult to accomplish most of the time. The writing quality is amazing! and I haven't come across any spelling or grammatical errors ☺the story development is so intriguing and is honestly a really good story. the character design is good! my favorite part was the world background, I literally had images in my head while reading it the update stability is doable, this book is amazing. highly recommended!!! am enjoying the story this far ❤💪
This is amazingly beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️ this book is an inspiration to me and others out there it's fabulous....this book changed my mind and heart it was touching .... the author of this book is a genius for having the inspiration to write and publish the book keep it up
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An amazing story I can say I love everything about this story. A great job and I suggest readers a should read this book. It is truly amazing.
Great storyline👏👏👏 very throughout and good structured story. The storyline is really impressive. Dear author your writing is really captivating. I loved the plot idea so much. The mystery and superstitions everything is intriguing.👍👍👍 The choices of words are appropriate and accurate. I love your book dear author.👏👏👏👍
I love your book. The storyline is quite interesting and makes me stunned while reading it. I read it carefully so I can understand your character. Keep up the good work
it is well written and this story is a page turner, every chapter engrossed me even more. Tho I spotted few errors but it is well written. Kudos to you writer!
This should really be recommended! The novel did a great job making the reader engrossed of the main character's world. And the writing, it's flawless. Such a masterpiece!
wow, I am not into fantasy books , but this is one if the books that I will recommend , it's a must read book . It's absolutely enchanting , keep up the good work 👏
I'm in absolute awe of this book, the story has s deep and amazing, I like the deepness and the trend the story, and the grammar is completely flawless, at least from the chapters I've read, I'd definitely recommend this book
I'm obsessed with the way you write. It's so clean and flows so smoothly, which enhances the already amazing plot. Yes, the plot is phenomenal. I don't read too many fantasy novels, but this might change that.
This story is very interesting, I'm currently reading it I would say this story is very unique , it makes me wonder what will happened in the ending ... I like it a 5 star for this splendid story~💗
I'm a sucker for stories like this... this is amazing. Captivating plot, excellent storytelling skills, very unique story as well. I hope to see more of Will's growth as he builds in confidence and surety in himself while he masters his unique talents. Good work, author! This has struck a chord with me.
This novel is great! I love the plot, the characters. You’re such a talented author. Congratulations for such an amazing work! Guys i recommend this book to you.
I like this novel a lot and it is one of a kind. I recommend all of you to give it a go and I know that you will not be disappointed. Every scenario is so intriguing. I hope that author can provide us more stories like this.
There's no don't you are an excellent writer. from the plot, the selection of words and story progress is just wonderful. I looking forward to reading more and yes, I recommend this. it's such a great read so write on.
Well, the more I read the more craving I get. I want to capture every moment in this book because it's simply great and we'll designed and fully detailed. Thanks dear author for your excellent piece. I'm definitely adding this☺️
Wow!!! This blew my mind, I never thought I would read a book so real on spirituality and reality too, the writer did a great job describing every bit of the scenarios played out. I love the fear and faith fight, that's epic.
Beautifully written literature! As a fan of the supernatural, I think this is one of the best I've read here so far. The narration is so interesting, it makes you continue to ask for more, the characters are well rounded, especially the main character. Kudos to the author. I'm adding this to my library for sure.
I really love this book. Even though I have only read up to where the chapters are blocked off. I love the interactions, the mystery the suspense, the superstitions. everything just grabs the reader's attention and you end up walking into a wall from the creative emitting from the book. p.s the main character is my spirit animal
this is an amazing story... the themes present in the story are captivating and the plot in itself is truly intriguing ... so keep up the good work and keep going!!!
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ネタバレを明かす Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $100 advance by joining the contest.
I was hooked on this story right for. the beginning practically at the edge of my seat. I couldn't stop reading, my need for more winning out in the end. The author has done a very good job writing, keep it up.👍
Can we talk about the content here? like, it's so insanely good! I loved your concepts and world background! The characters were very clearly explained! want to see more from you! keep it up!
A breathtakingly fast paced book that grabs your interest and refuses to let go.Deeply moving with clear,fresh insights on mental health.Absolutely gripping,can't wait for more!
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Nice work, the book is intriguing and interesting. Keep it up, The character development and the world build-up is very on point and well established. Keep it up.
the book is really amazing! the way the author describes each character and the scenery around. my favorite part about this book is the feeling of being the character itself, something very difficult to accomplish most of the time. The writing quality is amazing! and I haven't come across any spelling or grammatical errors ☺the story development is so intriguing and is honestly a really good story. the character design is good! my favorite part was the world background, I literally had images in my head while reading it the update stability is doable, this book is amazing. highly recommended!!! am enjoying the story this far ❤💪
This is amazingly beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️ this book is an inspiration to me and others out there it's fabulous....this book changed my mind and heart it was touching .... the author of this book is a genius for having the inspiration to write and publish the book keep it up
♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
An amazing story I can say I love everything about this story. A great job and I suggest readers a should read this book. It is truly amazing.
Great storyline👏👏👏 very throughout and good structured story. The storyline is really impressive. Dear author your writing is really captivating. I loved the plot idea so much. The mystery and superstitions everything is intriguing.👍👍👍 The choices of words are appropriate and accurate. I love your book dear author.👏👏👏👍
I love your book. The storyline is quite interesting and makes me stunned while reading it. I read it carefully so I can understand your character. Keep up the good work
it is well written and this story is a page turner, every chapter engrossed me even more. Tho I spotted few errors but it is well written. Kudos to you writer!
This should really be recommended! The novel did a great job making the reader engrossed of the main character's world. And the writing, it's flawless. Such a masterpiece!
wow, I am not into fantasy books , but this is one if the books that I will recommend , it's a must read book . It's absolutely enchanting , keep up the good work 👏
I'm in absolute awe of this book, the story has s deep and amazing, I like the deepness and the trend the story, and the grammar is completely flawless, at least from the chapters I've read, I'd definitely recommend this book
I'm obsessed with the way you write. It's so clean and flows so smoothly, which enhances the already amazing plot. Yes, the plot is phenomenal. I don't read too many fantasy novels, but this might change that.
This story is very interesting, I'm currently reading it I would say this story is very unique , it makes me wonder what will happened in the ending ... I like it a 5 star for this splendid story~💗
I'm a sucker for stories like this... this is amazing. Captivating plot, excellent storytelling skills, very unique story as well. I hope to see more of Will's growth as he builds in confidence and surety in himself while he masters his unique talents. Good work, author! This has struck a chord with me.
This novel is great! I love the plot, the characters. You’re such a talented author. Congratulations for such an amazing work! Guys i recommend this book to you.
I like this novel a lot and it is one of a kind. I recommend all of you to give it a go and I know that you will not be disappointed. Every scenario is so intriguing. I hope that author can provide us more stories like this.
There's no don't you are an excellent writer. from the plot, the selection of words and story progress is just wonderful. I looking forward to reading more and yes, I recommend this. it's such a great read so write on.
Well, the more I read the more craving I get. I want to capture every moment in this book because it's simply great and we'll designed and fully detailed. Thanks dear author for your excellent piece. I'm definitely adding this☺️
Wow!!! This blew my mind, I never thought I would read a book so real on spirituality and reality too, the writer did a great job describing every bit of the scenarios played out. I love the fear and faith fight, that's epic.
Beautifully written literature! As a fan of the supernatural, I think this is one of the best I've read here so far. The narration is so interesting, it makes you continue to ask for more, the characters are well rounded, especially the main character. Kudos to the author. I'm adding this to my library for sure.
I really love this book. Even though I have only read up to where the chapters are blocked off. I love the interactions, the mystery the suspense, the superstitions. everything just grabs the reader's attention and you end up walking into a wall from the creative emitting from the book. p.s the main character is my spirit animal
this is an amazing story... the themes present in the story are captivating and the plot in itself is truly intriguing ... so keep up the good work and keep going!!!
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