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Toucan_Snake

This is definitely one of the best fanfictions I have ever read, the story development is amazing and the original hazbin hotel characters are pretty much spot on. The grammer and sentence structure was a little off; and sometimes sentences wouldn't make much sense. Other than that though, I think it's an amazing story so far and I look forward to your next chapters. P.S. the way they interact is hilarious, plus all the little puns they trade back and forth. It's amazing, keep up the good work![img=recommend]

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CoolCatGang

I really enjoyed reading this book. if you are still out there, please consider to continue the book again ;)

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kamal_victorian

Amazing work, I wanted to read more. Sad thing, this book has been dropped.

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20wilbursoot24

This is a really good book i really enjoyed reading it can you do a Lucifer Morningstar x Reader Hazbin Hotel FanFic please there is non of him on Webnovel only on Wattpad. Keep up the great work all in all GREAT JOB WITH this BOOK

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iron77

its good---------------------------------

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idk_anymore0211

This was amazing!!! I̸̪̹̲̐̊̉̆̂͘ l̴̮͓̞͖͋̿̌̇̅̕ǫ̷̧͖̺̫̜̘̦̜̠̐͋̀̉̿͂͆̚͘͠v̶̡̲̖̦̳̆̋̏̾̅͠e̶͕͔̊͌͐͐͘d̸̦̗̱̹̄͆̈́̔ ̶̧̢̬̘̘̰͚̟̮͓̃̋̀̈́̈́ṭ̸̢̛̲́͋̾̃͛̊́̇͜h̴̢̨̲̘͔͎͎͕̲̮̄͆͛͐̓͛͋̽͝͝e̸̛̲̮̫͉̯̩̺̺̤̭͛̒͌͌̂̍̂͑͆ ̷͕̔̄̅̑̈̾̑̈́̃̾ģ̵̨̧͎̲͚͌̊̅̓͊͋́̚͝ȍ̴̺͉͛̀̇͐͊̾̀̋r̷̨̡̢̖̯̱͉͕̼̝͒̀͂̄̌͗̉͊̕ë̶̡̫̞͓̗̟̳͍́̐̈́̍̔̓̒̍́̚.̴̦͚̝̱̈́́̂̎͗̆̚.̵̖́͆̌̐͘.̴͇̣͓͈́̉̄̽̂̉̉̚

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The_Black_Reven888

good ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Toucan_Snake

This is definitely one of the best fanfictions I have ever read, the story development is amazing and the original hazbin hotel characters are pretty much spot on. The grammer and sentence structure was a little off; and sometimes sentences wouldn't make much sense. Other than that though, I think it's an amazing story so far and I look forward to your next chapters. P.S. the way they interact is hilarious, plus all the little puns they trade back and forth. It's amazing, keep up the good work![img=recommend]

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CoolCatGang

I really enjoyed reading this book. if you are still out there, please consider to continue the book again ;)

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kamal_victorian

Amazing work, I wanted to read more. Sad thing, this book has been dropped.

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20wilbursoot24

This is a really good book i really enjoyed reading it can you do a Lucifer Morningstar x Reader Hazbin Hotel FanFic please there is non of him on Webnovel only on Wattpad. Keep up the great work all in all GREAT JOB WITH this BOOK

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iron77

its good---------------------------------

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idk_anymore0211

This was amazing!!! I̸̪̹̲̐̊̉̆̂͘ l̴̮͓̞͖͋̿̌̇̅̕ǫ̷̧͖̺̫̜̘̦̜̠̐͋̀̉̿͂͆̚͘͠v̶̡̲̖̦̳̆̋̏̾̅͠e̶͕͔̊͌͐͐͘d̸̦̗̱̹̄͆̈́̔ ̶̧̢̬̘̘̰͚̟̮͓̃̋̀̈́̈́ṭ̸̢̛̲́͋̾̃͛̊́̇͜h̴̢̨̲̘͔͎͎͕̲̮̄͆͛͐̓͛͋̽͝͝e̸̛̲̮̫͉̯̩̺̺̤̭͛̒͌͌̂̍̂͑͆ ̷͕̔̄̅̑̈̾̑̈́̃̾ģ̵̨̧͎̲͚͌̊̅̓͊͋́̚͝ȍ̴̺͉͛̀̇͐͊̾̀̋r̷̨̡̢̖̯̱͉͕̼̝͒̀͂̄̌͗̉͊̕ë̶̡̫̞͓̗̟̳͍́̐̈́̍̔̓̒̍́̚.̴̦͚̝̱̈́́̂̎͗̆̚.̵̖́͆̌̐͘.̴͇̣͓͈́̉̄̽̂̉̉̚

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The_Black_Reven888

good ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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