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Padfayeper

The story is really nice. The Author's imagination is so wide. I like the characters also. The third person point of view narration suits the story's genre. The author's narration as well is good. The only thing that needs editing is the description of the story. It's kind of too long some readers might not read it. The description must be at least 100 plus words (I got this advice from one of WebNovel's editors) but don't take away the questions because those are the ones who'll awaken the readers' curiousness. But overall, the story's nice. I like it. Keep up the good work, Author!

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amber0613

I give this 5 stars for these reasons: 1.) the cover photo - looks deceiving it was totally for the romance. 2.) the synopsis is awesome! I'm not that fan of a romance thingy but I can say that this story has full of plot and mystery although it also looks more into fantasy it can't change the idea of how the story goes. 3.) How can I describe this, about reincarnation? I'm a little bit confused, did she reincarnate not only once but twice? But it doesn't make the effect of the story I'm just curious about this. 4.) it suits my taste when it comes to fantasy and romance. All of that is just my review but I can say that I will enjoy reading this book. Keep it up the good work author!

3yr
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tanu_sam

Dear Shiv correction --- Ram, how can I forget to review this superb se b upr book! And there is no doubt I'm following the book. Anna and Lucian, well I have no words for them. they are too good. then there is Roasaline yet to decide what's her -- villain or a friend. I love witches background and super powers and everything about this fab book. only if people know what they are missing!

3yr
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Daoist207304

The story is very good . The Author way to describe the story is awesome 👏 . There is some mistakes in grama but the story itself lovely to read so thumbs up 👍 for the Author . Please do keep up the good job I’m waiting for next chapter ❤️.

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Bei_Erdou_7960

Amazing story. I always love to read and watch horror story and movie. It's definitely a 5 star ranking story. Keep your good work continue.💖💖💖💖💝💝💝💝💞💕💕

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Itx_Mahi

Amazing Book By An Amazing Author❤I really Loved The Synopsis It is Very Suspense Creating 💞... The Character Development Is awesome... I was Pondering When I started Reading The Synopsis💕💕💕💕 "The Reincarnation of Anabelle" This Line N I Hit the description😀😀 Seriously This Review Is From Heart... It Deserves Even More than This😇😇 Author is Quiet Hardworkingggg😍😍 I appreciate Her On This Creative Story... How did she come up with this thought???? 'How, how seriously how Blue?'😅😅 I mean She is so Creative I even never Knew😂 Well Best If Luck For the Upcoming Chapters...My eyes R awaiting To read The story Further...👀 Gems to this Amazing Novel💕 N Hearts To the author💞 Love U Blue😘

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Oya_Dawish

It is an interesting story. I like the unique setting of the background. I like the evaluation of the relationship between the main characters between love and hate each gathering at the end. I like it. The Setting and background is very unique. It is a very sweet, romantic, and lovely story. Highly recommended.

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RoseOfBlues

The book completely had my attention. This story is a page-turner, making you want more. The plot is well-written and of top form. The detailed description helps in understanding the story and have sympathy for the FL. Keep it up, Author! Congratulations on your win!

3yr
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Yvette_Celia

This story is really great and I learn so much from here. Its a fortune that I found this work. Keep on writing author!!! Will read this book more once i got more time

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Raghav_Khurana

AWESOME STORYYYYY THE PLOT OF THE STORY IS SO GOODDD LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE STORIES LIKE THIS ONE KEEP IT UP ...............................

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Madym
LV 2 Badge

Wonderful Story! Surprisingly the story is going smoothly till the chapter I read. The author provided us a detailed synopsis, that makes the story quite intriguing and you feel somewhat sorry for MC as she is killed so many times, never able to complete her love story and she is in love with someone who is at least a thousand years older than her. She's literally like a newborn child in front of that thousand-year-old guy but the author clearly shows love is beyond everything. The author has beautifully wrapped this little girl abuse story in a destiny-defying love story. I like the writing quality and the character designs. I'm pretty sure everyone will start falling in love with the pedophilic angel. There is no such grammar error that I can find, reading it was as smooth sailing. I wrote this beautiful review definitely not because the author asked me for it or I'm doing her a favor so that in the future I can remind her of this and ask her to buy the privilege of my work. You have really done a great job dear author, this updating and bringing us new chapters. As you said it is already in my collection.

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herramaether

I swear, Annabelle is the only character that I've met that has caught me way off-guard... the author is brilliant in how she/he has designed the characters, but needs to watch out for grammatical and word choice issues. Otherwise, a brilliant and surefire read!

3yr
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Buggles_07

The writing is very good, and the grammar and punctuation is good as well. Just a few words are spelt wrong like filling, should be feeling but other than those things the book is very good[img=recommend]

3yr
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T00N
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A good book worth reading[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

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_mystique_

I love the plot of the story, this book is interesting 🙌👍 ... .. .......... .... ......... .. . .. . ........ . .. ..... ... .. ........

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ToonRoom

hmm you are a good writer i guess but try to improve your chapters and make them at least 1500words long other than that you are good to go just correct some spelling mistake

3yr
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MASTERT00N

a good story is made by the imagination of a writer who knows how to put his thoughts in words you have the quality but you can improve more, try to fix your previous mistakes other than some small mistakes your story is good keep up the good work.

3yr
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Bad_Totodile

AWW DISGUSTING................................................................................................ ............................................................. ................................................................. ............................................................. .................................................... Kidding > good job

3yr
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cutelit4ever

The story is really good... The character and the way the story is made are great... I like how the synopsis was made, but when I open the story it was much better... Kakoi... hope read more from yah... author sama

3yr
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TacoKun

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

3yr
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BlackIs_TheRealist

fantasy is my drug of all times and when I read this story has witches, I immediately began to read and read. I just love everything about this novel and especially the romance. dear author, keep going![img=update][img=coins]

4yr
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KaGen
LV 10 Badge

Nice story. Writing quality is very good, it's quite easy to follow story with the assist of simple sentences. Putting protagonist in a coma for 8 chapters. Especially in the beggining of story..You're brave Author :) But i did not leave to read, you filled that succesfuly. Thanks for your labour and time to create it.

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4yr
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isharislynkia

The world-building is good and how the story flow. Can't wait for her lover to recognized her..It'll be kinda tough when she was a witch..Keep up the good work :)

4yr
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Ritankar_Sarkar_

The story background is nicely elaborated, immensely carved and duly started with the chase-scene. . ignoring the grammar, i will really appreciate the fact that- Writer is writing her story the first time. Suggestion- kindly re-edit the grammatical mistakes,and keep the names catchy and easy to be remembered♥️ overall, the plot deserves more attention [img=update]

4yr
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Padfayeper

The story is really nice. The Author's imagination is so wide. I like the characters also. The third person point of view narration suits the story's genre. The author's narration as well is good. The only thing that needs editing is the description of the story. It's kind of too long some readers might not read it. The description must be at least 100 plus words (I got this advice from one of WebNovel's editors) but don't take away the questions because those are the ones who'll awaken the readers' curiousness. But overall, the story's nice. I like it. Keep up the good work, Author!

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4yr
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amber0613

I give this 5 stars for these reasons: 1.) the cover photo - looks deceiving it was totally for the romance. 2.) the synopsis is awesome! I'm not that fan of a romance thingy but I can say that this story has full of plot and mystery although it also looks more into fantasy it can't change the idea of how the story goes. 3.) How can I describe this, about reincarnation? I'm a little bit confused, did she reincarnate not only once but twice? But it doesn't make the effect of the story I'm just curious about this. 4.) it suits my taste when it comes to fantasy and romance. All of that is just my review but I can say that I will enjoy reading this book. Keep it up the good work author!

3yr
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tanu_sam

Dear Shiv correction --- Ram, how can I forget to review this superb se b upr book! And there is no doubt I'm following the book. Anna and Lucian, well I have no words for them. they are too good. then there is Roasaline yet to decide what's her -- villain or a friend. I love witches background and super powers and everything about this fab book. only if people know what they are missing!

3yr
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Daoist207304

The story is very good . The Author way to describe the story is awesome 👏 . There is some mistakes in grama but the story itself lovely to read so thumbs up 👍 for the Author . Please do keep up the good job I’m waiting for next chapter ❤️.

3yr
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Bei_Erdou_7960

Amazing story. I always love to read and watch horror story and movie. It's definitely a 5 star ranking story. Keep your good work continue.💖💖💖💖💝💝💝💝💞💕💕

3yr
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Itx_Mahi

Amazing Book By An Amazing Author❤I really Loved The Synopsis It is Very Suspense Creating 💞... The Character Development Is awesome... I was Pondering When I started Reading The Synopsis💕💕💕💕 "The Reincarnation of Anabelle" This Line N I Hit the description😀😀 Seriously This Review Is From Heart... It Deserves Even More than This😇😇 Author is Quiet Hardworkingggg😍😍 I appreciate Her On This Creative Story... How did she come up with this thought???? 'How, how seriously how Blue?'😅😅 I mean She is so Creative I even never Knew😂 Well Best If Luck For the Upcoming Chapters...My eyes R awaiting To read The story Further...👀 Gems to this Amazing Novel💕 N Hearts To the author💞 Love U Blue😘

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3yr
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Oya_Dawish

It is an interesting story. I like the unique setting of the background. I like the evaluation of the relationship between the main characters between love and hate each gathering at the end. I like it. The Setting and background is very unique. It is a very sweet, romantic, and lovely story. Highly recommended.

3yr
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RoseOfBlues

The book completely had my attention. This story is a page-turner, making you want more. The plot is well-written and of top form. The detailed description helps in understanding the story and have sympathy for the FL. Keep it up, Author! Congratulations on your win!

3yr
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Yvette_Celia

This story is really great and I learn so much from here. Its a fortune that I found this work. Keep on writing author!!! Will read this book more once i got more time

3yr
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Raghav_Khurana

AWESOME STORYYYYY THE PLOT OF THE STORY IS SO GOODDD LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE STORIES LIKE THIS ONE KEEP IT UP ...............................

3yr
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Madym
LV 2 Badge

Wonderful Story! Surprisingly the story is going smoothly till the chapter I read. The author provided us a detailed synopsis, that makes the story quite intriguing and you feel somewhat sorry for MC as she is killed so many times, never able to complete her love story and she is in love with someone who is at least a thousand years older than her. She's literally like a newborn child in front of that thousand-year-old guy but the author clearly shows love is beyond everything. The author has beautifully wrapped this little girl abuse story in a destiny-defying love story. I like the writing quality and the character designs. I'm pretty sure everyone will start falling in love with the pedophilic angel. There is no such grammar error that I can find, reading it was as smooth sailing. I wrote this beautiful review definitely not because the author asked me for it or I'm doing her a favor so that in the future I can remind her of this and ask her to buy the privilege of my work. You have really done a great job dear author, this updating and bringing us new chapters. As you said it is already in my collection.

3yr
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herramaether

I swear, Annabelle is the only character that I've met that has caught me way off-guard... the author is brilliant in how she/he has designed the characters, but needs to watch out for grammatical and word choice issues. Otherwise, a brilliant and surefire read!

3yr
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Buggles_07

The writing is very good, and the grammar and punctuation is good as well. Just a few words are spelt wrong like filling, should be feeling but other than those things the book is very good[img=recommend]

3yr
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T00N
LV 3 Badge

A good book worth reading[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

3yr
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_mystique_

I love the plot of the story, this book is interesting 🙌👍 ... .. .......... .... ......... .. . .. . ........ . .. ..... ... .. ........

3yr
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ToonRoom

hmm you are a good writer i guess but try to improve your chapters and make them at least 1500words long other than that you are good to go just correct some spelling mistake

3yr
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MASTERT00N

a good story is made by the imagination of a writer who knows how to put his thoughts in words you have the quality but you can improve more, try to fix your previous mistakes other than some small mistakes your story is good keep up the good work.

3yr
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Bad_Totodile

AWW DISGUSTING................................................................................................ ............................................................. ................................................................. ............................................................. .................................................... Kidding > good job

3yr
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cutelit4ever

The story is really good... The character and the way the story is made are great... I like how the synopsis was made, but when I open the story it was much better... Kakoi... hope read more from yah... author sama

3yr
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TacoKun

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

3yr
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BlackIs_TheRealist

fantasy is my drug of all times and when I read this story has witches, I immediately began to read and read. I just love everything about this novel and especially the romance. dear author, keep going![img=update][img=coins]

4yr
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KaGen
LV 10 Badge

Nice story. Writing quality is very good, it's quite easy to follow story with the assist of simple sentences. Putting protagonist in a coma for 8 chapters. Especially in the beggining of story..You're brave Author :) But i did not leave to read, you filled that succesfuly. Thanks for your labour and time to create it.

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4yr
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isharislynkia

The world-building is good and how the story flow. Can't wait for her lover to recognized her..It'll be kinda tough when she was a witch..Keep up the good work :)

4yr
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Ritankar_Sarkar_

The story background is nicely elaborated, immensely carved and duly started with the chase-scene. . ignoring the grammar, i will really appreciate the fact that- Writer is writing her story the first time. Suggestion- kindly re-edit the grammatical mistakes,and keep the names catchy and easy to be remembered♥️ overall, the plot deserves more attention [img=update]

4yr
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