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unfinished and many chapters out if order and repeat themselves. seriously in need of a good editor. story could be good otherwise, but there are gaps from missing chapters. would not suggest starting it😕
Way too many errors: repeating chapters that waste your passes, missing story information etc. The overall plot is interesting and character development is good. This story has potential. After 3+ years there's no update to fix these errors. Sad.. I'm not wasting any more passes on this.
if you spending 💰 save it. This could be a good book unfortunately the chapters repeat and are out of order.
This would be a great story if it was in order and there wasn’t repeat chapters. I wouldn’t waiste your coin because you might get mad when you figure out you paid for a new chapter and it’s on you already read. An this isn’t a one time time it’s a rear thing.
I love the characters, the writing and storyline. Three things : 1. Editing required due to spelling and grammar problems. 2. The chapters are jumbled and repeated. Which ruined the flow of the reading. 3. No ending - you left it on a complete Cliff hanger. It didn’t seem to be on purpose. Please finish your book - I’m dying to find out how everything plays out. Your writing is amazing I really felt like I was there and I was hanging on every word.
This book has a lot potential eoth a great FL chatacter and plot comcept but unfortunately the author seems to have had a lot of problems wirh uploading chapters out of order, duplicating chapters and making amateur errors such as changing the ML name part way through which may also be an issue of not knowing how to exit after uploading. worst of all of course is that no new updates have been provided in at least five months so all readers are left in a cliffhanger situation.
I will first say that I was enjoying this very much, and so I unlocked the whole book, but unfortunately I regret it. The only issue I had, which was a very big issue for me, was that the chapters were out of order and some chapters were repeats. I couldn't take the back and forth chapters that actually spoiled the story. I enjoyed everything that I read but I regret paying the money for it. BTW the chapters do not start messing up until after the free chapters.
This book had potential to be a great one. I loved the storyline and characters but the one constant flaw with this book was the repetition of chapters and the fact that many of us wasted our coins in hopes that the writer would rectify the problem but they didn’t. There are at least 10 if not more repeated chapters which means we the readers were swindled and I am still shocked that the author has not once communicated or responded to his or her readers and that is unacceptable thus the low rating for what could have been a very good book.
It’s an awesome story but the chapters are definitely messed up starting at chapter 15. With how long some of these comments have been published for, and the fact they’re still not fixed, idk if they’ll ever be fixed which is super Sad.
This story is riveting until you get to about chapter 20. Then chapters start repeating and chapters are obviously skipped. I am done reading this story unless the author takes responsibility and fixes the chapters.
Dear Author! How could you sabotage your awesome, creative story?! Leaving us on a cliff & calling it complete yet still promoting the book was cruel to those of us who invested in you & your characters. We stood by you through mismatched & duplicated chapters 😱😿 Your story, you & your readers deserve better‼️ All my best for future endeavors♥️
The story is fantastic! However at Chapter 16 they start skipping crucial scenarios and are repeats... I'm going to finish the book because I spent all my coins pre-unlocking them all but it's nonetheless frustrating.
My first time reading on werewolves and this is my favourite I can't put it down oh my goodness its so fascinating I absolutely love it, there's so much to learn about loyalty,love and just being outspoken ❤
I really enjoyed the story, but it gets unorganized and chapters are repeating. I just had 3 mixed chapters in a row. that's it for me, I'll drop this. contact me when it's fixed ...
IT is a fast good read; although some of the chapters are repeated and the story has not ended. It starts off great and its non stop climax climbing. Enjoy the ride.
The story has potential but like a lot of people said, it’s as if the author was tired of writing. If you’re tired, go get some rest and continue the next day or when you’re not tired anymore and have time. There are so many writing errors, it’s annoying. Its hard to read and get the story sometimes. My advice: use a spell checker, get enough rest, stop when you’re tired and then continue, and so on I like the flow of the story though Good Luck
The chapters were all mixed up and out of order. And it was often impossible to figure out where the story picked up after the last chapter. And the ending, if it actually was the ending, sucked.
Why is the ending so bad? Like out of the blue? And it ended like halfway through the story.it doesnt make any sense. It gives you the feeling of incompleteness.
I have to repeat other people's reviews...I really enjoyed this book until the chapters started duplicating and went out of order...tried to persevere but gave up...such a bummer as it's a great start to the book! hopefully the author will clean it up as I would love to read the rest!
Do NOT read. Theres repetitive chapters and the storyline is out of order. Has the potential to be a good book if author would fix these issues but theres comments from 3 months ago and the problem still has not been fixed. Would love to get my money back !
Fairly annoyed as chapTers were repeated a number of times in the 70, jumbled chaPters with plot all over the place. it had a chance to be awesoMe , but the editing of chaPters Let it down badly
This story develops wonderfully and really gets you hooked, then suddenly the chapters are repeating and your jumping ahead and back because the chapters are not inserted correctly Then once that gets straightened out The story uNafficially ends Cant believed i wasted $$$ on duplicate chapters and no ending.
It Is very frustrating to read. Many chapters are repeated in different order tgere is no time line since the chapters are al over the place and repeated more than twic…. is SAD considering is a nice plot
I really wanted to like this book! In the beginning it was okay. The further I read I found multiple chapters that had been duplicated and I noticed several writing errors.
Very good novel and very interesting to read and enjoy the rest of the story line and the content is great to read on the blog.... Characters are very good and very informative.
I really like the story. however I got to chapter 52 and decided to read the reviews... im stopping here. with all the mixed up and duplicate chapters, I am pretty sure I'm gonna end up paying double what it should be for this book... and apparently there isn't an ending... I'm not to thrilled about the extra I have alrdy spent on the duplicate chapters ... it alrdy is an outrageous amount just to read 1 book
It is a really good book. It's cliche but very unique. Some of the chapters are repeated. The ending could also have been better but other than that I would highly recommend you read it.
Up until chapter 17, the book is fine. But as soon as you hit chapter 17, you suddenly run into duplicate chapters that you already read. Plot holes of missing information that isn't explained. Either whole chapters are completely missing, or chapters are posted out of order. The author needs to fix these errors, then maybe I'll return to finish reading the story. It's too bad, because the story was actually pretty good until all the chapter upload errors started appearing. Fix the chapters inside the book, and I will update my Review.
unfinished and many chapters out if order and repeat themselves. seriously in need of a good editor. story could be good otherwise, but there are gaps from missing chapters. would not suggest starting it😕
Way too many errors: repeating chapters that waste your passes, missing story information etc. The overall plot is interesting and character development is good. This story has potential. After 3+ years there's no update to fix these errors. Sad.. I'm not wasting any more passes on this.
if you spending 💰 save it. This could be a good book unfortunately the chapters repeat and are out of order.
This would be a great story if it was in order and there wasn’t repeat chapters. I wouldn’t waiste your coin because you might get mad when you figure out you paid for a new chapter and it’s on you already read. An this isn’t a one time time it’s a rear thing.
I love the characters, the writing and storyline. Three things : 1. Editing required due to spelling and grammar problems. 2. The chapters are jumbled and repeated. Which ruined the flow of the reading. 3. No ending - you left it on a complete Cliff hanger. It didn’t seem to be on purpose. Please finish your book - I’m dying to find out how everything plays out. Your writing is amazing I really felt like I was there and I was hanging on every word.
This book has a lot potential eoth a great FL chatacter and plot comcept but unfortunately the author seems to have had a lot of problems wirh uploading chapters out of order, duplicating chapters and making amateur errors such as changing the ML name part way through which may also be an issue of not knowing how to exit after uploading. worst of all of course is that no new updates have been provided in at least five months so all readers are left in a cliffhanger situation.
I will first say that I was enjoying this very much, and so I unlocked the whole book, but unfortunately I regret it. The only issue I had, which was a very big issue for me, was that the chapters were out of order and some chapters were repeats. I couldn't take the back and forth chapters that actually spoiled the story. I enjoyed everything that I read but I regret paying the money for it. BTW the chapters do not start messing up until after the free chapters.
This book had potential to be a great one. I loved the storyline and characters but the one constant flaw with this book was the repetition of chapters and the fact that many of us wasted our coins in hopes that the writer would rectify the problem but they didn’t. There are at least 10 if not more repeated chapters which means we the readers were swindled and I am still shocked that the author has not once communicated or responded to his or her readers and that is unacceptable thus the low rating for what could have been a very good book.
It’s an awesome story but the chapters are definitely messed up starting at chapter 15. With how long some of these comments have been published for, and the fact they’re still not fixed, idk if they’ll ever be fixed which is super Sad.
This story is riveting until you get to about chapter 20. Then chapters start repeating and chapters are obviously skipped. I am done reading this story unless the author takes responsibility and fixes the chapters.
Dear Author! How could you sabotage your awesome, creative story?! Leaving us on a cliff & calling it complete yet still promoting the book was cruel to those of us who invested in you & your characters. We stood by you through mismatched & duplicated chapters 😱😿 Your story, you & your readers deserve better‼️ All my best for future endeavors♥️
The story is fantastic! However at Chapter 16 they start skipping crucial scenarios and are repeats... I'm going to finish the book because I spent all my coins pre-unlocking them all but it's nonetheless frustrating.
My first time reading on werewolves and this is my favourite I can't put it down oh my goodness its so fascinating I absolutely love it, there's so much to learn about loyalty,love and just being outspoken ❤
I really enjoyed the story, but it gets unorganized and chapters are repeating. I just had 3 mixed chapters in a row. that's it for me, I'll drop this. contact me when it's fixed ...
IT is a fast good read; although some of the chapters are repeated and the story has not ended. It starts off great and its non stop climax climbing. Enjoy the ride.
The story has potential but like a lot of people said, it’s as if the author was tired of writing. If you’re tired, go get some rest and continue the next day or when you’re not tired anymore and have time. There are so many writing errors, it’s annoying. Its hard to read and get the story sometimes. My advice: use a spell checker, get enough rest, stop when you’re tired and then continue, and so on I like the flow of the story though Good Luck
The chapters were all mixed up and out of order. And it was often impossible to figure out where the story picked up after the last chapter. And the ending, if it actually was the ending, sucked.
Why is the ending so bad? Like out of the blue? And it ended like halfway through the story.it doesnt make any sense. It gives you the feeling of incompleteness.
I have to repeat other people's reviews...I really enjoyed this book until the chapters started duplicating and went out of order...tried to persevere but gave up...such a bummer as it's a great start to the book! hopefully the author will clean it up as I would love to read the rest!
Do NOT read. Theres repetitive chapters and the storyline is out of order. Has the potential to be a good book if author would fix these issues but theres comments from 3 months ago and the problem still has not been fixed. Would love to get my money back !
Fairly annoyed as chapTers were repeated a number of times in the 70, jumbled chaPters with plot all over the place. it had a chance to be awesoMe , but the editing of chaPters Let it down badly
This story develops wonderfully and really gets you hooked, then suddenly the chapters are repeating and your jumping ahead and back because the chapters are not inserted correctly Then once that gets straightened out The story uNafficially ends Cant believed i wasted $$$ on duplicate chapters and no ending.
It Is very frustrating to read. Many chapters are repeated in different order tgere is no time line since the chapters are al over the place and repeated more than twic…. is SAD considering is a nice plot
I really wanted to like this book! In the beginning it was okay. The further I read I found multiple chapters that had been duplicated and I noticed several writing errors.
Very good novel and very interesting to read and enjoy the rest of the story line and the content is great to read on the blog.... Characters are very good and very informative.
I really like the story. however I got to chapter 52 and decided to read the reviews... im stopping here. with all the mixed up and duplicate chapters, I am pretty sure I'm gonna end up paying double what it should be for this book... and apparently there isn't an ending... I'm not to thrilled about the extra I have alrdy spent on the duplicate chapters ... it alrdy is an outrageous amount just to read 1 book
It is a really good book. It's cliche but very unique. Some of the chapters are repeated. The ending could also have been better but other than that I would highly recommend you read it.
Up until chapter 17, the book is fine. But as soon as you hit chapter 17, you suddenly run into duplicate chapters that you already read. Plot holes of missing information that isn't explained. Either whole chapters are completely missing, or chapters are posted out of order. The author needs to fix these errors, then maybe I'll return to finish reading the story. It's too bad, because the story was actually pretty good until all the chapter upload errors started appearing. Fix the chapters inside the book, and I will update my Review.
this book is stealing money multiple pages of same chapters & out of order