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Sci-fi and magic, huh? Kinda reminds me of Artemis Fowl, one of my favorite series ever (the book, not the movie) and a bit of Release that Witch. Anyway, the story is pretty cool. The writing is good, smooth, and easy to get into. The characters are fun and interesting (I like ALICE!). I love the bit of comedy in this book. It made me chuckle once in a while. But now, I'm very curious to know where this story will lead us to and how this magic and science in this book will work together. Hopefully, the author will continue to write until the end.
Author here! At time of this posting, I just finished releasing Volume 1 and have begun the preparations for self-publishing. Don't worry, I'm not so vain as to think my story is perfect. :P I wanted to share the links to my other platforms so you can stay up to date on my novels and maybe even help me write one! Help me write on Twitch: https://***.twitch.tv/alpha_medic Join my Discord: https://discord.gg/2gT2zwf Follow me on Twitter: https://twitter.com/FenMed25 Support me on Patreon for perks: https://***.patreon.com/AlphaMedic I even have YouTube: https://***.youtube.com/channel/UCKN5DQUPoH0F5FW6ZObyyPQ I have said it before, and I'll say it again. You are all amazing, and I'm truly blessed to have such a group of wonderful readers to help me explore Alex and ALICE's story. Thank you so much, and I look forward to seeing their continued adventures alongside you!
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email to nachysandra@protonmail.com, tks.
Dear Author, I agree with my previous speaker, one of the best fantasy novels on Webnovel. The whole concept is refined. Great workshop. Congratulations!
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Here I am again :) I have to make a correction... After reading so many fantasy/science-fiction/etc. stories on WebNovel I have to admit that this is the best fantasy story I read so far, and probably one of the best on WebNovel. PEOPLE/READERS be objective! Even if you don't like the type of literature you can evaluate its other aspects, like structure, storyline, characters, etc. The language used in that story is beautiful, the descriptions stanning, characters very expressive,... the story is well polished! I woIuld like to see your story somewhere in the book store soon!
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Now i know for sure all these 5 stars are fake...... there is no way this is a 5 stars... it got 3.8 stars from me because of the writing quality, updates stability and the world background are good... but the story development and the character design are mediocre at best, had mc been a 12 to 15 year old i would have understand but a good and strong MAGES soldiers there is no way... he goes around running is mouth, trusting people in an unfamiliar place seriously? everything is too simple and weird in this story.. most importantly these level 1 and 2 reviewers need to get a life lying like these...
I don't read- haven't read isekai novels so can't comment much about the story plot xD. But I absolutely love the book because of Alex and Alice's interactions! There wasn't any grammatical error. Not even a single one. I'm not kidding; not even a single one! The author is exceptionally talented, and he pays a lot of attention to his work :) All the best!
My second review after reading some more. This was a story that has fantasy and modern weaponry. The author has a good grasp about the grammar and as well as a creative narration. Top tier nonetheless! I gotta resume reading more on the novel and I hope the author will release more!
By chapter one, I knew this was it. A glorious fantasy/ comedy novel I had been wishing for ! Instant save to library. Literally no complaints. None... Loving the mc and ALICE, who is me sometimes when I get moody. His realistic views and breaking the fourth wall stuff and cliches is beyond pleasing to read. Plus, he isn’t a weak man but has his own personality bursting at me from the screen. All in all, I will binge this till you update. Don’t mind me...
Let's rate this book with five stars! Everyone who saw this review! Lend me your strength to make the most satisfying review and encourage the author to write more! The story is great and it has potential! Gambatte author nim!
The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . My best wishes are always with you Author 😇. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I did this just for the exp this book look good I feel like this guy will go far in his quest so I hop at the end of this is a big boss so think this us good
You're synopsis can hook every reader to try out your story. It's well crafted! You did great job making it. The story too, is awesome and too cool for my brain dead mind to keep up! Good job! Believe me, it's awesome.
I havent been able to read much of your story yet but I do like what I've read so far. I always love a maginitve story. Keep up the good work!
Well, you know how to write! It is a quality read really, the only thing I didn't like was the way you handle the dialogues because it is never clear who speaks to whom. Perhaps you should take care of that part. Otherwise, great job author!
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Here's a review since I liked it very much! The writing quality is fantastic as it is easily understood. Also the humor is just...top tier! The character design is lovely as they work. The MC is somehow relatable, Alice is very likable - and their partnership is *chef's kiss*. Meanwhile the others managed to be amazing in their own ways, three dimensional and have their own goals. The world is hugeee but explored (there's more, I assume). Yep I totally love it.
If talking about science and magic merge together then the only I could think of is the light novel Toaru series and i'm a huge fan. Even though the power system is different but the rough concept is the same, keep up the good work! Despite the fact that i'm confused at the start of the chapter, it's a good start and make me curious, just try read it and it will worth your time. P.S : Don't push yourself author, health is great importance than some readers to fulfil their sense of entertainment and boredom.
I like this story a lot. I like Fenrir and Alice's connection and the dialog between the characters. Overall, it's very enjoyable and has some good action bits! Will continue reading this!
Gonna straight out give a five star because I loved it. I started reading and couldn't stop. The story is really captivating. awesome world building and quality writing. I honestly love how sassy ALICE is. As a ******** anime and manga fan I would love to see this story become an anime some day if possible. Really great work!
Hi Author! Overall, your story is entertaining and interesting, I love your writing quality so much and that makes it even good, characters are also well intricately design, Please keep writing more :D Ps. I'll wait for your review on mine [img=recommend]
Great story, I love it. It has lot of potential I can assure you that. Your story share some similarities with my Second book: Death Guns in another world, it's question of gun in your book, mine as well, our MC share the same name, Alex (Alexander). Your MC has AI mine has spirit weapon. Well, great luck with your story, I've collected it.
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Amazing story I actually couldn't stop reading for a while. Alice reminds me of Solus. The world background reminds me of Is that a wisp but with more fantasy than cultivation. I have high hopes for this and would definitely recommend it.
The way I love sci-fi, this book is really everything for it. Parked with a plot you would hold on your seat for. Can't wait to see what happened next.
It is very interesting, I like the genetic alterations and the reason why magic is no longer in use. Its become more like an appendix. I like the drama with the princesses too.
A hidden gem goodie! I thoroughly enjoyed each piece. Can't wait for more laughs and plots. Please keep up! May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, and even earn more^^
So this is the first story I've read on WebNovel, and it's a great first impression! If all stories on here are so well-written it's going to be my new favorite platform. I especially love the somewhat 'nerdy' feeling this story has, that fantasy world sounds like a dream come true indeed. 🙌 You've created an amazingly easy-to-read fantasy story. It has a very pleasant pace, and while you introduce tons of new elements I'm never confused nor bored with lengthy descriptions. Added to my library! 🤗
Sci-fi and magic, huh? Kinda reminds me of Artemis Fowl, one of my favorite series ever (the book, not the movie) and a bit of Release that Witch. Anyway, the story is pretty cool. The writing is good, smooth, and easy to get into. The characters are fun and interesting (I like ALICE!). I love the bit of comedy in this book. It made me chuckle once in a while. But now, I'm very curious to know where this story will lead us to and how this magic and science in this book will work together. Hopefully, the author will continue to write until the end.
Author here! At time of this posting, I just finished releasing Volume 1 and have begun the preparations for self-publishing. Don't worry, I'm not so vain as to think my story is perfect. :P I wanted to share the links to my other platforms so you can stay up to date on my novels and maybe even help me write one! Help me write on Twitch: https://***.twitch.tv/alpha_medic Join my Discord: https://discord.gg/2gT2zwf Follow me on Twitter: https://twitter.com/FenMed25 Support me on Patreon for perks: https://***.patreon.com/AlphaMedic I even have YouTube: https://***.youtube.com/channel/UCKN5DQUPoH0F5FW6ZObyyPQ I have said it before, and I'll say it again. You are all amazing, and I'm truly blessed to have such a group of wonderful readers to help me explore Alex and ALICE's story. Thank you so much, and I look forward to seeing their continued adventures alongside you!
Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact Email to nachysandra@protonmail.com, tks.
Dear Author, I agree with my previous speaker, one of the best fantasy novels on Webnovel. The whole concept is refined. Great workshop. Congratulations!
ネタバレを明かす Here I am again :) I have to make a correction... After reading so many fantasy/science-fiction/etc. stories on WebNovel I have to admit that this is the best fantasy story I read so far, and probably one of the best on WebNovel. PEOPLE/READERS be objective! Even if you don't like the type of literature you can evaluate its other aspects, like structure, storyline, characters, etc. The language used in that story is beautiful, the descriptions stanning, characters very expressive,... the story is well polished! I woIuld like to see your story somewhere in the book store soon!
ネタバレを明かす Now i know for sure all these 5 stars are fake...... there is no way this is a 5 stars... it got 3.8 stars from me because of the writing quality, updates stability and the world background are good... but the story development and the character design are mediocre at best, had mc been a 12 to 15 year old i would have understand but a good and strong MAGES soldiers there is no way... he goes around running is mouth, trusting people in an unfamiliar place seriously? everything is too simple and weird in this story.. most importantly these level 1 and 2 reviewers need to get a life lying like these...
I don't read- haven't read isekai novels so can't comment much about the story plot xD. But I absolutely love the book because of Alex and Alice's interactions! There wasn't any grammatical error. Not even a single one. I'm not kidding; not even a single one! The author is exceptionally talented, and he pays a lot of attention to his work :) All the best!
My second review after reading some more. This was a story that has fantasy and modern weaponry. The author has a good grasp about the grammar and as well as a creative narration. Top tier nonetheless! I gotta resume reading more on the novel and I hope the author will release more!
By chapter one, I knew this was it. A glorious fantasy/ comedy novel I had been wishing for ! Instant save to library. Literally no complaints. None... Loving the mc and ALICE, who is me sometimes when I get moody. His realistic views and breaking the fourth wall stuff and cliches is beyond pleasing to read. Plus, he isn’t a weak man but has his own personality bursting at me from the screen. All in all, I will binge this till you update. Don’t mind me...
Let's rate this book with five stars! Everyone who saw this review! Lend me your strength to make the most satisfying review and encourage the author to write more! The story is great and it has potential! Gambatte author nim!
The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . My best wishes are always with you Author 😇. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I did this just for the exp this book look good I feel like this guy will go far in his quest so I hop at the end of this is a big boss so think this us good
You're synopsis can hook every reader to try out your story. It's well crafted! You did great job making it. The story too, is awesome and too cool for my brain dead mind to keep up! Good job! Believe me, it's awesome.
I havent been able to read much of your story yet but I do like what I've read so far. I always love a maginitve story. Keep up the good work!
Well, you know how to write! It is a quality read really, the only thing I didn't like was the way you handle the dialogues because it is never clear who speaks to whom. Perhaps you should take care of that part. Otherwise, great job author!
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Here's a review since I liked it very much! The writing quality is fantastic as it is easily understood. Also the humor is just...top tier! The character design is lovely as they work. The MC is somehow relatable, Alice is very likable - and their partnership is *chef's kiss*. Meanwhile the others managed to be amazing in their own ways, three dimensional and have their own goals. The world is hugeee but explored (there's more, I assume). Yep I totally love it.
If talking about science and magic merge together then the only I could think of is the light novel Toaru series and i'm a huge fan. Even though the power system is different but the rough concept is the same, keep up the good work! Despite the fact that i'm confused at the start of the chapter, it's a good start and make me curious, just try read it and it will worth your time. P.S : Don't push yourself author, health is great importance than some readers to fulfil their sense of entertainment and boredom.
I like this story a lot. I like Fenrir and Alice's connection and the dialog between the characters. Overall, it's very enjoyable and has some good action bits! Will continue reading this!
Gonna straight out give a five star because I loved it. I started reading and couldn't stop. The story is really captivating. awesome world building and quality writing. I honestly love how sassy ALICE is. As a ******** anime and manga fan I would love to see this story become an anime some day if possible. Really great work!
Hi Author! Overall, your story is entertaining and interesting, I love your writing quality so much and that makes it even good, characters are also well intricately design, Please keep writing more :D Ps. I'll wait for your review on mine [img=recommend]
Great story, I love it. It has lot of potential I can assure you that. Your story share some similarities with my Second book: Death Guns in another world, it's question of gun in your book, mine as well, our MC share the same name, Alex (Alexander). Your MC has AI mine has spirit weapon. Well, great luck with your story, I've collected it.
ネタバレを明かす Amazing story I actually couldn't stop reading for a while. Alice reminds me of Solus. The world background reminds me of Is that a wisp but with more fantasy than cultivation. I have high hopes for this and would definitely recommend it.
The way I love sci-fi, this book is really everything for it. Parked with a plot you would hold on your seat for. Can't wait to see what happened next.
It is very interesting, I like the genetic alterations and the reason why magic is no longer in use. Its become more like an appendix. I like the drama with the princesses too.
A hidden gem goodie! I thoroughly enjoyed each piece. Can't wait for more laughs and plots. Please keep up! May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, and even earn more^^
So this is the first story I've read on WebNovel, and it's a great first impression! If all stories on here are so well-written it's going to be my new favorite platform. I especially love the somewhat 'nerdy' feeling this story has, that fantasy world sounds like a dream come true indeed. 🙌 You've created an amazingly easy-to-read fantasy story. It has a very pleasant pace, and while you introduce tons of new elements I'm never confused nor bored with lengthy descriptions. Added to my library! 🤗