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This is amazing!!! I haven't read something this good in a long time... I really like this story... Stories so good are hard to find... Excuse my english
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I can honestly say that th8s took me by surprise. I love how you explain and reason through the Chakra use and it all makes sense within context, which is honestly top tier in comparison to regular Naruto fiction. A distinct lack of handwaving and zero explanation in this story, for both Chakra snd storyline is honestly some of my favorite things about this fan fiction. The realism in the life of being a Ninja without it going overboard where it becomes "Ninja's are Super Evil because ReAsOnS". Truly a top tier Story, realistic depictions of characters and worldbuilding with in universe reasoning behind odd quirks of an anime bound into realism. I Loved every second of this, I hope it gets more chapters. (Ch43 as of writing this)
This is one of my favorite stories! I hope this updates soon. The quality and realism is quite good and better other fanfics in which the mc does not care about his actions.
this is such a good story.... ara you gonna drop it?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
You all know that I am a very strict person when comes to review, and this novel is one of the best novels I have ever read, I love how everything follows logic and there is no bs, also I love how the MC make logical decisions and even with that someone with more experience can still "outplay" him a little I simply love this novel pls keep up
one of the best stories.... truly loved it author please come back it's been month now.... I especially liked how the story turned out to be and the finesse details in the story overall marvelous job author
I have read something like 15 to 20 naruto fanfic , this one is definitly a golden one, thank you author to create such a great story, 5/5
Absolutely amazing. The OC is fantastic and has a in depth background that is revealed as the story goes on. The story itself is so complicated with my hidden factors that make it so catchy and makes you want to read more. Honestly one of my favorite Naruto fanfics I’ve read so far.
Bisakah penulis membuat MC membunuh Danzo dan Hiruzen secara menyedihkan? Cerita ini sangat baik dan menggambarkan sisi gelap Shinobi lebih akurat daripada cerita lain. Aku ingin menemukan cerita yang pada akhirnya melenyapkan Konoha karena kebijakan petingginya, selama ini setiap cerita yang aku baca selalu memaafkan sistem yang ada. Tidak rasional kecuali MC yang dibentuk terlalu munafik. Tapi sejauh ini pembangunan karakter MC luar biasa, dia baik dalam prinsip dan kode etik nya sendiri.
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one of the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read..looking forward to more . v vv. vv . .
Why can't i give more than 5 star. Why god why? This story is tooooooooooo gooooooood. It surpassed the main story long ago. Author, you are awesome. Hopefully you will continue the story with same standard. Gooood Luck!
Love it. But it would be great if you update more frequently. Also I think it will much better if he gets a place which he can call his home and wouldn't have to worry that his own people will kill him. I just hope now that you are making him op don't need him. And I really want to see him be stronger than both Naruto and Sasuke in their SSP Mode. 👌👍✌️
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An addictive story. No systems or stupid stores where you buy some Kekkei Genkai's and come up with a bs story that everyone believes for some reason. Smart buildups and every comment hint at something. First fanfiction read that shows the importance of Doton. It may not be as effective as wind style or as stunning as fire style, but it is the best element for surprise attacks and escaping combat (A survival element). It is dominantly used by Orochimaru whenever he gets into a sticky situation. Mud clones are the sturdiest clones, by the way. 5/5, but the story hasn't had consistent updates recently.
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I bet you this is better than 80% of the naruto fan fics you read if you don’t believe me than read at least 5 chapters and tell me you don’t want to reas more
Don't drop it, compared to other brainless brawn and fight fan fiction this fiction is best. It will be good if you maintain a weekly update atleast 😂😂
Well written fanfic and the author has put a lot of effort into research and getting his facts right while introducing some new things. Border skirmishes arc is the only reason I am not giving it five stars. That arc was bland and boring, the reason we read fanfic is to see new characters mix with the already existed characters in the original but this particular arc has all the things that I did not like and felt boring. I hope the author doesn't get lost in introducing new scenarios and characters while turning it into a new book instead of fanfic. I like exploiting a new plot but it should have a good mix of the original storyline.
I love how you made Mc a medic, its something and ive always wanted to see. Cant wait for more![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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This is mynnew faVorite naruto Fics i hope to see its progression in the futUre. i would like some people to reconfize the strngTh of a Hundred seal though
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Absolutely amazing. The OC is fantastic and has a in depth background that is revealed as the story goes on.
This is amazing!!! I haven't read something this good in a long time... I really like this story... Stories so good are hard to find... Excuse my english
Good fanfic fjzgkzgkk dpzykyoxlxu . . . lhxkyxoyxyox . luxlyxoyl .lgzitzitzoyzyo kgzktzoyxoyxyo . kclhxigzkgzig, kg kgztkzitzi TV hxitz
ネタバレを明かす I can honestly say that th8s took me by surprise. I love how you explain and reason through the Chakra use and it all makes sense within context, which is honestly top tier in comparison to regular Naruto fiction. A distinct lack of handwaving and zero explanation in this story, for both Chakra snd storyline is honestly some of my favorite things about this fan fiction. The realism in the life of being a Ninja without it going overboard where it becomes "Ninja's are Super Evil because ReAsOnS". Truly a top tier Story, realistic depictions of characters and worldbuilding with in universe reasoning behind odd quirks of an anime bound into realism. I Loved every second of this, I hope it gets more chapters. (Ch43 as of writing this)
This is one of my favorite stories! I hope this updates soon. The quality and realism is quite good and better other fanfics in which the mc does not care about his actions.
this is such a good story.... ara you gonna drop it?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
You all know that I am a very strict person when comes to review, and this novel is one of the best novels I have ever read, I love how everything follows logic and there is no bs, also I love how the MC make logical decisions and even with that someone with more experience can still "outplay" him a little I simply love this novel pls keep up
one of the best stories.... truly loved it author please come back it's been month now.... I especially liked how the story turned out to be and the finesse details in the story overall marvelous job author
I have read something like 15 to 20 naruto fanfic , this one is definitly a golden one, thank you author to create such a great story, 5/5
Absolutely amazing. The OC is fantastic and has a in depth background that is revealed as the story goes on. The story itself is so complicated with my hidden factors that make it so catchy and makes you want to read more. Honestly one of my favorite Naruto fanfics I’ve read so far.
Bisakah penulis membuat MC membunuh Danzo dan Hiruzen secara menyedihkan? Cerita ini sangat baik dan menggambarkan sisi gelap Shinobi lebih akurat daripada cerita lain. Aku ingin menemukan cerita yang pada akhirnya melenyapkan Konoha karena kebijakan petingginya, selama ini setiap cerita yang aku baca selalu memaafkan sistem yang ada. Tidak rasional kecuali MC yang dibentuk terlalu munafik. Tapi sejauh ini pembangunan karakter MC luar biasa, dia baik dalam prinsip dan kode etik nya sendiri.
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one of the best Naruto fanfic I've ever read..looking forward to more . v vv. vv . .
Why can't i give more than 5 star. Why god why? This story is tooooooooooo gooooooood. It surpassed the main story long ago. Author, you are awesome. Hopefully you will continue the story with same standard. Gooood Luck!
Love it. But it would be great if you update more frequently. Also I think it will much better if he gets a place which he can call his home and wouldn't have to worry that his own people will kill him. I just hope now that you are making him op don't need him. And I really want to see him be stronger than both Naruto and Sasuke in their SSP Mode. 👌👍✌️
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mc babysitter naruto drama drama drama .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
An addictive story. No systems or stupid stores where you buy some Kekkei Genkai's and come up with a bs story that everyone believes for some reason. Smart buildups and every comment hint at something. First fanfiction read that shows the importance of Doton. It may not be as effective as wind style or as stunning as fire style, but it is the best element for surprise attacks and escaping combat (A survival element). It is dominantly used by Orochimaru whenever he gets into a sticky situation. Mud clones are the sturdiest clones, by the way. 5/5, but the story hasn't had consistent updates recently.
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I bet you this is better than 80% of the naruto fan fics you read if you don’t believe me than read at least 5 chapters and tell me you don’t want to reas more
Don't drop it, compared to other brainless brawn and fight fan fiction this fiction is best. It will be good if you maintain a weekly update atleast 😂😂
Well written fanfic and the author has put a lot of effort into research and getting his facts right while introducing some new things. Border skirmishes arc is the only reason I am not giving it five stars. That arc was bland and boring, the reason we read fanfic is to see new characters mix with the already existed characters in the original but this particular arc has all the things that I did not like and felt boring. I hope the author doesn't get lost in introducing new scenarios and characters while turning it into a new book instead of fanfic. I like exploiting a new plot but it should have a good mix of the original storyline.
I love how you made Mc a medic, its something and ive always wanted to see. Cant wait for more![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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ネタバレを明かす This is mynnew faVorite naruto Fics i hope to see its progression in the futUre. i would like some people to reconfize the strngTh of a Hundred seal though
Good novel 1 111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111
Absolutely amazing. The OC is fantastic and has a in depth background that is revealed as the story goes on.