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Overall the concept of the story is good. Of course, at first it seems like just a rewrite of another famous Percy gamer fanfic, the author himself admits that. Later the plot changes, and is basically interesting. The author is a bit lacking in spelled out depth of text. Often the chapter looks like a mere enumeration of the events that happened, dialogs are average. In short, the book is good, but the author has some work to do. It would not hurt to increase the chapters a little, and add to them "filler".
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The story is really well written with little to no grammatical errors. Plot flows smoothly and is enjoyable to read. Interactions don’t seem forced and women don’t instinctively fall heads over heels for him like every other fan fic. One of the best Percy Jackson fan fics I have read, all in all would recommend to at least give it a shot.
Just great fun to read, that basically sums it up. The only bad thing that it has (and it is understandable) are the updates that are every 2 months T_T, otherwise both in writing and character relationships and development of both story and characters is very good, it only remains to see how the story ends.
Hestia is the best goddess! Simping aside, beautifully done! I would love to read more but I will respect your available time and eagerly await the next chapter...
Oh um, I was just wondering if you knew where the art from the cover came from? (Ex. Instagram, Facebook, Twitter) (This is just to fill in the characters, pls ignore: pihfasdjihougbjkqwfashuibhkjdhuebhkasjhueqbkjfahdubjkadfsbkas)
histoire fort agréable, les personnages et l'intrigue se développe bien. mon réal soucis est le délais entre chaque parution . je comprends le besoin de maintenir un minimum de suspenses mais en général il s'agit de 10a 15 jours pour chaqu'un de vos délicieux chapitre. surtout que le dernier été pardon assez petit comparé au autre mais ce n'est que mon avis. je tenais aussi a vous remerciez de m'offrir une telle lecture . c'est un plaisir d'où ma note . j'espère en lire bien plus dans le futur . bon courage
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I like this story I read this in wattpad but sadly it didn't get finished hope you finish this fanfic...................m.....................
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I enjoy reading this kind of fanfic that can twist it to it's own story while still leaning on the established background of the original helps along with the story. Also the twists and turns help to keep me hooked to it hope to see how far this story can go and to see how the characters grow.
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Great so far keep it up love gamer fan fics plus PJO great combo 👍🏽🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽🔥🔥🔥🔥
I'm really enjoying it so far. It is pretty hard to find Fanfic that are actually written well and are legible, more often than not with stories on this site they will forget to add words or add more words than are needed and constantly mixup he and she. This story does not have that problem. It's got a fairly enjoyable story as well! This recycles a few things from a similar fan fiction but has a lot of major differences and personally I like this one more.
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This novels amazing. There's nothing else to say. Writing quality is great. World building great. Character design is fantastic especially with Percy is slowly growing up in each chapter (though I'm currently only on chapter 8). Story development is well I'm not to sure yet but I have faith in the author from what I've read. Updating stability is great though I wish the author would post more chapters but I understand that it takes time to write the chapter make sure there are no mistakes and ensure it makes sense.
Overall the concept of the story is good. Of course, at first it seems like just a rewrite of another famous Percy gamer fanfic, the author himself admits that. Later the plot changes, and is basically interesting. The author is a bit lacking in spelled out depth of text. Often the chapter looks like a mere enumeration of the events that happened, dialogs are average. In short, the book is good, but the author has some work to do. It would not hurt to increase the chapters a little, and add to them "filler".
good story more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
The story is really well written with little to no grammatical errors. Plot flows smoothly and is enjoyable to read. Interactions don’t seem forced and women don’t instinctively fall heads over heels for him like every other fan fic. One of the best Percy Jackson fan fics I have read, all in all would recommend to at least give it a shot.
Just great fun to read, that basically sums it up. The only bad thing that it has (and it is understandable) are the updates that are every 2 months T_T, otherwise both in writing and character relationships and development of both story and characters is very good, it only remains to see how the story ends.
Hestia is the best goddess! Simping aside, beautifully done! I would love to read more but I will respect your available time and eagerly await the next chapter...
Oh um, I was just wondering if you knew where the art from the cover came from? (Ex. Instagram, Facebook, Twitter) (This is just to fill in the characters, pls ignore: pihfasdjihougbjkqwfashuibhkjdhuebhkasjhueqbkjfahdubjkadfsbkas)
histoire fort agréable, les personnages et l'intrigue se développe bien. mon réal soucis est le délais entre chaque parution . je comprends le besoin de maintenir un minimum de suspenses mais en général il s'agit de 10a 15 jours pour chaqu'un de vos délicieux chapitre. surtout que le dernier été pardon assez petit comparé au autre mais ce n'est que mon avis. je tenais aussi a vous remerciez de m'offrir une telle lecture . c'est un plaisir d'où ma note . j'espère en lire bien plus dans le futur . bon courage
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I like this story I read this in wattpad but sadly it didn't get finished hope you finish this fanfic...................m.....................
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ネタバレを明かす I enjoy reading this kind of fanfic that can twist it to it's own story while still leaning on the established background of the original helps along with the story. Also the twists and turns help to keep me hooked to it hope to see how far this story can go and to see how the characters grow.
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Great so far keep it up love gamer fan fics plus PJO great combo 👍🏽🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽👍🏽🔥🔥🔥🔥
I'm really enjoying it so far. It is pretty hard to find Fanfic that are actually written well and are legible, more often than not with stories on this site they will forget to add words or add more words than are needed and constantly mixup he and she. This story does not have that problem. It's got a fairly enjoyable story as well! This recycles a few things from a similar fan fiction but has a lot of major differences and personally I like this one more.
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This novels amazing. There's nothing else to say. Writing quality is great. World building great. Character design is fantastic especially with Percy is slowly growing up in each chapter (though I'm currently only on chapter 8). Story development is well I'm not to sure yet but I have faith in the author from what I've read. Updating stability is great though I wish the author would post more chapters but I understand that it takes time to write the chapter make sure there are no mistakes and ensure it makes sense.
love it all I hope you post the next chapter soon