Reviews of WHEN DEATH DOES US APART by Glimmy - Webnovel

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4.98

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Slui_Hu

Book is stunning and interesting too. Love it.

1yr
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Gastonia

Wow, nice book out here. This is a breath of fresh air from most books I've read. I never even thought I would see a fresh concept like this from webnovel. Kudos to the actor.

3yr
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Glimmy
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Another review from me, I've seen others do it so what? Anyway, you should all know this MC is different from the others, so don't come expecting a fluffy romance, no, that's not for this book

3yr
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IFallisay

Nice book to read if you're a lover of paranormal activities. A fresh read out there, you should try it out. Kudos to the author as this is not the first time she's been giving us wonderful stories.

3yr
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Glimmy
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Hi lovely readers, it's me Glimmy Reviewing my own book, yep, I get it. Anyway, this book is a spinoff from my other book, "The She-devil and her alphas," but then it's a standalone as well, you don't have to read the other to understand it. But it would be well satisfying to read both as well.

3yr
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OG_Talent_1932

Kind of a fresh genre from most novels in web novel would advise you to read it. That is if you love horror, mystery, and slow burn romance

3yr
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Aysel_Inara

Let's begin the session. - The narration quality....believe me it's among the bunch of 5 fine books in FL I've seen so far. If you're reluctant to read originals (like me) don't hesitate with this one. - Title exactly portrays the storyline, which has 3 people and a ghost (as per synopsis I've inferred) What's more intriguing is the personality of Ben (referring from chapter 4) is worth loving. - Talking about Scarlett she seems to be 2nd character with Ben being main lead, as far I've predicted it appears to be a paranormal story with tinges if horror which might turn into a detective tale (well, might be solo) Overall, up to first 4 chapters it kept me hooked though I'm not a fan of horror but this had more mystery imbued comparatively plain paranormal stories. - Will do another review soon, just don't drop this work author. It deserves attention and features in true sense, due to deviation of themes from famous works on WN and having absolutely good grammar.

3yr
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Zexirth

Very good romance novel, i havent read much but this one has barely any grammer errors, and the story is very well written.[img=faceslap][img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]

4yr
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Tangerqueen

Hiii overall superb job with the story! Here were just some of my initial thoughts, but I tend to be a bit nit-picky, so please take everything with a grain of salt! Writing Quality (5/5): There were super minimal grammatical errors, and it was clear that you had proofread all of the chapters! I know it sounds like a super simple thing, but honestly it's so rare on Webnovel that reading your novel was a breath of new air! In particular, I really love how you adapted your tone depending on the given chapter (like the intensity and the romance!) Stability of Updates (5/5): Not much to be said there. Story Development (4/5): This was the only category I docked off for, but only because I thought it was a bit confusing jumping from portion to portion. Especially, I had been super looking forward to what had happened after a super exciting first chapter, and it was a bit confusing for me as to how we jumped from point A to point B. I totally understand that it was just the narration, but there did appear to be gaps in my understanding as the story progressed. Especially, the trips down memory lane were not immediately clear to me in terms of chronological advancement until I read a bit further. Character Design (5/5): Pretty well-crafted characters, each with their own personalities and aspirations. World Background (5/5): You gave detailed enough explanations as to make me understand their situations, which I appreciate. All in all, good luck and keep on writing!

4yr
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marichat_nettenoir

Love this book. Kudos to the author for coming up with something as ingenious as this. I highly recommend this novel for those who want something interesting and fun to read.

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4yr
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MyAngel
LV 11 Badge

Wow, stunning. ..and scary hehhe. Another cool book from our dear writer. Good one author, keep it up [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

4yr
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Slui_Hu

Book is stunning and interesting too. Love it.

1yr
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Gastonia

Wow, nice book out here. This is a breath of fresh air from most books I've read. I never even thought I would see a fresh concept like this from webnovel. Kudos to the actor.

3yr
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Glimmy
LV 12 Badge

Another review from me, I've seen others do it so what? Anyway, you should all know this MC is different from the others, so don't come expecting a fluffy romance, no, that's not for this book

3yr
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IFallisay

Nice book to read if you're a lover of paranormal activities. A fresh read out there, you should try it out. Kudos to the author as this is not the first time she's been giving us wonderful stories.

3yr
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Glimmy
LV 12 Badge

Hi lovely readers, it's me Glimmy Reviewing my own book, yep, I get it. Anyway, this book is a spinoff from my other book, "The She-devil and her alphas," but then it's a standalone as well, you don't have to read the other to understand it. But it would be well satisfying to read both as well.

3yr
0 の返信を表示する
OG_Talent_1932

Kind of a fresh genre from most novels in web novel would advise you to read it. That is if you love horror, mystery, and slow burn romance

3yr
0 の返信を表示する
Aysel_Inara

Let's begin the session. - The narration quality....believe me it's among the bunch of 5 fine books in FL I've seen so far. If you're reluctant to read originals (like me) don't hesitate with this one. - Title exactly portrays the storyline, which has 3 people and a ghost (as per synopsis I've inferred) What's more intriguing is the personality of Ben (referring from chapter 4) is worth loving. - Talking about Scarlett she seems to be 2nd character with Ben being main lead, as far I've predicted it appears to be a paranormal story with tinges if horror which might turn into a detective tale (well, might be solo) Overall, up to first 4 chapters it kept me hooked though I'm not a fan of horror but this had more mystery imbued comparatively plain paranormal stories. - Will do another review soon, just don't drop this work author. It deserves attention and features in true sense, due to deviation of themes from famous works on WN and having absolutely good grammar.

3yr
2 の返信を表示する
Zexirth

Very good romance novel, i havent read much but this one has barely any grammer errors, and the story is very well written.[img=faceslap][img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend]

4yr
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Tangerqueen

Hiii overall superb job with the story! Here were just some of my initial thoughts, but I tend to be a bit nit-picky, so please take everything with a grain of salt! Writing Quality (5/5): There were super minimal grammatical errors, and it was clear that you had proofread all of the chapters! I know it sounds like a super simple thing, but honestly it's so rare on Webnovel that reading your novel was a breath of new air! In particular, I really love how you adapted your tone depending on the given chapter (like the intensity and the romance!) Stability of Updates (5/5): Not much to be said there. Story Development (4/5): This was the only category I docked off for, but only because I thought it was a bit confusing jumping from portion to portion. Especially, I had been super looking forward to what had happened after a super exciting first chapter, and it was a bit confusing for me as to how we jumped from point A to point B. I totally understand that it was just the narration, but there did appear to be gaps in my understanding as the story progressed. Especially, the trips down memory lane were not immediately clear to me in terms of chronological advancement until I read a bit further. Character Design (5/5): Pretty well-crafted characters, each with their own personalities and aspirations. World Background (5/5): You gave detailed enough explanations as to make me understand their situations, which I appreciate. All in all, good luck and keep on writing!

4yr
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marichat_nettenoir

Love this book. Kudos to the author for coming up with something as ingenious as this. I highly recommend this novel for those who want something interesting and fun to read.

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4yr
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MyAngel
LV 11 Badge

Wow, stunning. ..and scary hehhe. Another cool book from our dear writer. Good one author, keep it up [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

4yr
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