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レビューを書くMC terlalu lambat berkembang, hanya mempelajari beberapa jutsu dasar memakan waktu berbulan-bulan! Sistem dengan bakat uzumaki dan uchiha benar-benar tidak berguna! Itachi bahkan dapat melakukannya dengan sekali percobaan tanpa klon bayangan!
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MC is so beta. He just meets a girl then decided to marry her just because she is beautiful. We can already see he is a start of a Xinxia novel MC only he is in the Naruto world.
The story is good and english isnt the worst but The mc is a little beta but overall not a bad story keep up the good work
Start was great :) and then Mc give random girl his fiance who want broke enganment hyuga blodline . Then he lost battle with her beacose he give her that gift... Then Mc do many stupid things and I Dont see his progres level up... He try hard to be good beta for Femele lead ...
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ネタバレを明かすStory is good but it's mtl so m off. I'll be back once it's translated 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
currently at ch4. I think i have read this somewhere. but not gonna lie, i discontinued b4 ch10. and will do the same. btw, just continue with your good work
I absolutely love the story, but the author needs to work on the translation.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Uses dashes instead of quotations to show dialogue is a bit confusing, and uses the extended names of jutsu instead of common names (I.e Clone of the shadows instead of shadow clone jutsu) are as well, other than that this story has great potential.I can’t wait for where this story goes.
MC terlalu lambat berkembang, hanya mempelajari beberapa jutsu dasar memakan waktu berbulan-bulan! Sistem dengan bakat uzumaki dan uchiha benar-benar tidak berguna! Itachi bahkan dapat melakukannya dengan sekali percobaan tanpa klon bayangan!
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MC is so beta. He just meets a girl then decided to marry her just because she is beautiful. We can already see he is a start of a Xinxia novel MC only he is in the Naruto world.
The story is good and english isnt the worst but The mc is a little beta but overall not a bad story keep up the good work
Start was great :) and then Mc give random girl his fiance who want broke enganment hyuga blodline . Then he lost battle with her beacose he give her that gift... Then Mc do many stupid things and I Dont see his progres level up... He try hard to be good beta for Femele lead ...
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ネタバレを明かすStory is good but it's mtl so m off. I'll be back once it's translated 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
currently at ch4. I think i have read this somewhere. but not gonna lie, i discontinued b4 ch10. and will do the same. btw, just continue with your good work
I absolutely love the story, but the author needs to work on the translation.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Uses dashes instead of quotations to show dialogue is a bit confusing, and uses the extended names of jutsu instead of common names (I.e Clone of the shadows instead of shadow clone jutsu) are as well, other than that this story has great potential.I can’t wait for where this story goes.