Lucifer's Descendant System

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Quackk

I was surprised, I couldn't find any point to criticize in this story, the rhythm is good, perfect grammar, the author knows how to express well what is happening in the scene, besides always making me want to read more. POST MORE CHAPTERS FASTER

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Kadish

173 chapters read: Unlike most other books on this site, i dont really have anything to criticize. The spelling and grammar is good, pacing is great and the character dev is decent too. I have read his other novels before rhis one, and I enjoyed those too, but there is clear improvement with this novel. It is work the read IMHO.

LV 10

Zhanye

Shameless review of the author! I was longing to write this lol, I'm back with my newest book and I count on your support just as you supported others! ♥

LV 4

Lypros

Personality of the mc: almost non-existent. Logic of the story: according to the author's wishes. The very definition of a good concept badly realized

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puukkiss

Due to the dumbing-down of everyone to make MC intelligent, MC is basically a king of Monkeys. His smartness is... reading beforehand about the dungeon - something almost no one seems to do. His cleverness is... not being cocky. As typical in superpower stories, my power is rank [insert higher than lowest], therefore I'll be cocky as eff, and I'll march into unknown dangers thinking everyone is beneath me. And then regret it and MC will come in to save the day. His cleverness is not shown in battle, using tricks, imagination, clever tactics. He fights with a knife pointed forward and later with a flame pointed forward. Okay, he uses the most basic game tactic of the boss weak point... the monster's mouth... no one would have figured out that the monster's weak point is its mouth/sarcasm And of course, the only woman who has more than one line about her wants to get into MC pants after she finds out how great he really is. Quote from a chapter: "Wendy, who at that moment was trying to stop the bite wound of the girl who had flattered Harry, couldn't stop spying in Noah's direction. "He... That flame of his does a lot of damage to the boss; he's definitely not just a blessed Rank F... Damn Amy, if you hadn't..." Yes, as the battle goes on, as they may die, as she heals her best friend's torn open bloody wound, she laments that her friend prevented previously her from flirting with the MC before. This BTW was mentioned a few times before, this particular scene just further highlighted how braindead it sounds. As for Lucifer... Right now it's just being used as a fancy edgy name. No symbolism or deeper thinking found so far. After all, only humans can sin, but for some reason burning random rats works. I'd liked to see a restriction on the power that only sinful human burning can upgrade the skill. That would give the upgrade a more monumental feel. Now it feels like he gets double exp. Kill first, then burn. Nothing fun at all. The Vampire system at least tackles it with needing different humans and second fang dips didn't count. This story's MC can farm all the "sinful" (how are they sinful??) rats. As it is now, this novel is a barebone basic system/powers/dungeon novel. The characters are cardboard cutouts. The powers are basic and uninteresting. Most shown are the story basic cookies cutouts Fire, Ice, and Healing. And they are used by pointing hands and shooting... They aren't described interestingly.

LV 14

ErectileReptile

I've been reading this novel for a long time now so I'm able to give a genuine review for it. I'll be highlighting what's good and what's bad. Don't be a sour puss of you don't agree with me. 2/5 Writing Quality... The flow of words is jarring at times and the author's naming sense makes me want to vomit. I'm not exaggerating, it's like the author thinks of the most uncomfortable skill names and uses them on purpose for a joke. It just really takes away from the quality of the novel 4/5 Story Development... Good plot. Interesting world background. A lot of potential. Character Design 2/5... It's very unoriginal. Minimum effort put in in my opinion. 1/5 Update Stability... I'd actually give this a 0 if the rating system allowed it. The author often goes MIA as soon as he promises that he's permanently back. The chapters he then releases are barely 1000 words. He also has a very greedy habit of releasing chapters at the start of each month to make users buy privilege but then doesn't upload until the following month. It's even been mentioned in discord that he doesn't actually care for the novel and is just using it to make money. This only started in the last half year or so and it killed the novel for me. 3/5 World Background... Lot of potential. I also like the idea of a world hopping adventure. 2.4/5 Overall... A lot of potential that's sadly wasted by an incompetent and greedy author.

LV 10

Lruska

I am the exp of my Golden Fox, Bestial King. Webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray... Unlimited Exp Works!

LV 13

Dao_of_Melancholy

Good stuff lots of potential space for potential character development I’m invested in this one .................................................................

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Jerin_Johnson

A novel that's clearly just a solo leveling rip off. Also the update stability is shockingly awful. The author just so happens to release some chapters at the beginning of each month. Just in time for his privelidge to update. Hella suspicious.

LV 10

IceYmir

I follow this author in all the stories he writes and he has never disappointed me, apparently the grammar in this story is several times better than in the other stories, so my hype is high for what is to come!

Real review Writing quality is good. There are plenty of mistakes but nothing too serious usually so it doesnt put you off. Its not good enough tho so 3 stars. Stability of updates is the biggest problem. Not only did the author disappear for like a month after posting one chapter at the start of the previous month to make people buy privilege (keep in mind that he had also disappeared at the last half of February but he returned to post that one chapter) but he also returned only 5 days before this month was over wasting everyone who paid for privilege. And as if that wasnt enough instead of making it up to the readers for how badly he ****ed everyone who paid for privilege last month he simply said **** it and created an even more expensive priv tier that costs 30 dollars. Now if it was worth it and the author wasnt acting dishonestly the privi would probably be worth it but its not and its all because of the next part the story development. In all honesty this deserved 2 stars but nonetheless I gave it 3 stars because of the earlier chapters. The premise was original but apparently the author either got lazy or lost all his creativity while writing, repeating things over and over, repeating system screen and stats to fill the word count at the same time. The earlier chapters were definitely good tho which is why I gave this 3 stars instead of 2 which it honestly deserves after chapter 180. World Background: Honestly this is the only good part which is what I gave 4 stars. Although it feels like a rip off of Solo Leveling done worse and there are huge inconsistencies in the story (read and you will find out) it was still interesting enough to give 4 stars. Overall, I would say that the story had a lot of potential and I am not against the authors making money from priv considering that webnovel probably doesnt pay them shit but you need to make the money spent worth it. Updating at the start of the month for people to buy your expensive privilege while disappearing is dishonest and EVERYONE who spent money for priv last month felt scammed and not worth it

LV 13

hostile_fire

absolutely amazing, fantastic and legendary, this book is very new and it is already a hidden gem, amazing, try it out, if you like solo leveling, you will love this, 100/10 👍

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Daoist7umUjl

The author routinely disappears for months without new content. Don’t start this book as you’re likely never to see the ending . So frustrating

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MarcGem

This book is rated too highly for its content. Well, I know the high reviews are attributed to the book not being premium and the low number of reviews itself. But I usually rate books by their writing quality, setting, plot and characters and not by updating stability, being premium or whatever. Solely based on its content, as I compare it to other works, it would be a 4.3 on webnovel, maybe a 3.9 on novelupdates for the 50 chapters I've read. Writing quality is alright at best. Grammar mistakes are prevalent like in every other webnovel except for an elite few. Spelling is good, but punctuation and word choice is terrible. Throughout the story, many words are redundant and repeating. Because of the subpar writing quality, the story doesn't flow that well. Story development is cliche... family problems, sick sibling, and an evil, greedy uncle ... you know it. MC got an overpowered system and will slap their faces in due time and save his family from debt yada yada. This plot is just overused. Basically, the only difference is the system and world background. One other thing... logical errors! Some things just don't make sense! Character design also ... bland as ever, but not as bland as other novels. Main character is honestly a dumbass, one large decision he made is absolutely retarded (he could get out of his predicament easily but chooses not to because of pride) Others are logical and i can follow his thinking... Antagonists are blockheads at best, side characters don't have colour to them... Lastly, world background, which is somewhat unique. Alright, even though it's similar to solo levelling's dungeons but called fortresses here, and similar to the thousands of other system novels and apocalyptic novels, it's somewhat unique in the sense that it's a mix of all of them. And that's... what I'm here for, because I'm a sucker for each one of these genre, not to mention having all of them in this novel

LV 12

Mus69

First of all I'd like to state the negative: this storry suffers from so many cliches and that so far it has been very predictable. Almost all the side characters especially antagonists have been very 1 dimensional and theres nothing amazing about any of them. Also alot of the side characters seem to all have the same brain/personality. Theres the type that think hes just good looking, or just weak, or that he must be capable bc he's survived so long. Those are the only thoughts of other characters we've seen so far besides carlos. We haven't had a proper companion/ rival/ antagonist/ friend introduced into the series that actually have a fleshed out life, history and relationships outside of being in the mc's narrative On the other hand the grammar and spelling is much better than a lot of the top original novels on the power ranking. The story has a lot of potential in terms of possible lore, world building and creativity. The reason for rating it so highly is that its a quality work that will hopefully improve with time and ITS NOT PREMIUM. Now the final reason why this story is good is because its NOT premium. We need more quality stories like this and chrysalis that aren't locked behind paywalls that people can free enjoy or support the authors voluntarily.

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neoma

It's a good story so far but unfortunately the author doesn't consistently update chapters. I hope to get more chapter updates. Author please don't forget this story.

LV 13

Xeous

I love it but uh can someone give me the discord link? the one in bio don't work and I wanna see what the stuff described actually looks like

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Rebeca_Melo

This novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

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Wellington_Lucas

Essa Fanfic tem uma qualidade incrível e grande potencial para ir mais alto, Autor-San continue assim, e nunca se esqueça de Dormi 08:00 hrs por Dia!!! ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤