/ War / High School Mercenary
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It seems like just yesterday I was a simple high school student. How simple those times were.
[Flashback]
System: Complete one mission within 2 days or risk termination.
Noticing this provocative statement he proceeds to exclaim out loud. "As if a game could kill me"
The moment after provoking the system he feels a gun being forced against the back of his head, he quickly pleads with the system and soon the pressure is relieved. Turning around he sees a gun on the floor.
On his screen, an eery message is displayed.
System: Beginner package drawn please complete a mission within 2 days or risk termination
[If you would like to suggest an element to be added to the story then please leave a comment. As always criticism is appreciated and suggestions are welcome]
[NO harem, and NO gender bender]
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Dude nice job and it was inspired by portable armory system and please don’t make it gender bender because it ruinEd portable armory system. In conclusion thank you[img=recommend][img=update]
Really good book, I have no complaints at all, other than the fact there is not enough. The Author is not only knowledgeable of what he's writing, but he does an amazing job at making it believable, it feels real and I can easily lose myself in it, wish there was more.
Personally, I love how the story develops, the amount of details, etc. Though, some parts that are usually concise are made excise. Though, this didn't really bother me, but rather something I noticed. Considering the amount of detail, active work, etc., this could definitely become a film and/or animation of any form. The author did tell me he did write most of this during midnight, so I cut some slack on the writing quality.
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Awesome story, Great gunplay and writing is smoove and makes you want to keep on reading, I see some similarity to another story called Phone App: Portable Armory but I think it's just coincidence, waiting for more chapters doesn't take long ashe posts them regularly
it's a really good book inspired by portable armory, icna see the parts where it's not inspired and I really like that and the fact that out of nowhere the mc doesn't know how to fight or anything is really nice cuz in portable armory one mission he gets shot in the leg and the next he's practically a elite squad leader
It's pretty good and the characters feel like actual people👌...............................................................................
卷 1
- 1 Intro 4 years ago
- 2 Browsing Games 4 years ago
- 3 Termination 4 years ago
- 4 Middle Aged Menace 4 years ago
- 5 The First Mission 4 years ago
- 6 Purchases 4 years ago
- 7 Pain 4 years ago
- 8 Explanation 4 years ago
- 9 How We First Met 4 years ago
- 10 Tau and Epsilon 4 years ago
- 11 New Guns 4 years ago
- 12 Mission #2 4 years ago
- 13 Aftermath 4 years ago
- 14 The Morning After 4 years ago
- 15 Peace 4 years ago
- 16 Supply 4 years ago
- 17 I cant help it. 4 years ago
- 18 Returning ı 2 years ago
- 19 Returning ıı 1 years ago
Shameless author review here, I hope you all enjoy my latest novel. I won't be dropping my other one but take this as a little passion project of mine. other than that enjoy the story. also if you can't tell yet this story is inspired by Portable Armory but it's in my own style.