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Incompetent author... Idiotic and useless protagonist... Embarrassing story... Empty characters... World without emotion... Summary: Horrible novel, only eroticism is rescued, which is also low level... Recommendation: Don't read it, it's not worth it, there are countless better ones and a few worse ones...
All I have to say is that story is amazing and I really liked reading and hope you don't drop it. Otherwise keep it up and can't wait to read more.[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
author san i am waiting for yr promised monday ch.....if u are bored, just give us a skim through of what u had envisioned that mc would have gone through to achieve divinity and his future after fighting with other gods.it would only take a few chs for you but, it will wuench the thirst of over 8000 readers who have added your novel in their collections.👍
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I can't say it's a good write but it's something I'll read to pass the time. I was wondering whether you'll be continuing cause I somewhat enjoyed it.
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Mano your romance is great and I hope your motivation comes back so I ask you to come back humble brother..........,.................................................
Good novel but I don't know why I'm disappointed. I am confused about what made me interested in this novel. And Maybe Mc's Stamina Makes This Novel Interesting. And Others May Need Repair.
as fan of smut, i think this story is full of unnecesarry plot / fighting. i hope there will be more *** scene, more heroine and more innovative idea of 'how to capture woman'
I started reading this out of curiosity, but as soon as I went through reading the chapters, I quickly realized that there was really good development(besides the sauce) that made reading addicting and very enjoyable [img=recommend] I really enjoy the story so far. I can't wait to read more!
I personally loved reading this but had to take some points off since it ended :( but it's still a good short read tho there wasn't much it was a humble story.
This novel has a poorly developed potential, the scenes are sloppy, not detailed enough,... however the author masters the vocabulary and descriptions of novels +18 years.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ nice ecchi need more of it :D
cooontinueee ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
people has different way of expressing their talents as a writer. the mistake will serve as a lesson to improve your talent. thanks for the chapters and scene that give a deep mark to me as a reader
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This book is pretty amazing. the characters are well written, the plot is unique and the writng quality makes me want to keep on reading. Support the author y’all
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wow I absolutely love this stroke of genius,to avoid any spoilers I'll just mention that watching the character develop into a man is something to behold
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35 chapters? Go wash your mouth and return to writing, until then your novel is trash Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm 140 characters
Incompetent author... Idiotic and useless protagonist... Embarrassing story... Empty characters... World without emotion... Summary: Horrible novel, only eroticism is rescued, which is also low level... Recommendation: Don't read it, it's not worth it, there are countless better ones and a few worse ones...
All I have to say is that story is amazing and I really liked reading and hope you don't drop it. Otherwise keep it up and can't wait to read more.[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
author san i am waiting for yr promised monday ch.....if u are bored, just give us a skim through of what u had envisioned that mc would have gone through to achieve divinity and his future after fighting with other gods.it would only take a few chs for you but, it will wuench the thirst of over 8000 readers who have added your novel in their collections.👍
experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience
I can't say it's a good write but it's something I'll read to pass the time. I was wondering whether you'll be continuing cause I somewhat enjoyed it.
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Mano your romance is great and I hope your motivation comes back so I ask you to come back humble brother..........,.................................................
Good novel but I don't know why I'm disappointed. I am confused about what made me interested in this novel. And Maybe Mc's Stamina Makes This Novel Interesting. And Others May Need Repair.
as fan of smut, i think this story is full of unnecesarry plot / fighting. i hope there will be more *** scene, more heroine and more innovative idea of 'how to capture woman'
I started reading this out of curiosity, but as soon as I went through reading the chapters, I quickly realized that there was really good development(besides the sauce) that made reading addicting and very enjoyable [img=recommend] I really enjoy the story so far. I can't wait to read more!
I personally loved reading this but had to take some points off since it ended :( but it's still a good short read tho there wasn't much it was a humble story.
This novel has a poorly developed potential, the scenes are sloppy, not detailed enough,... however the author masters the vocabulary and descriptions of novels +18 years.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ nice ecchi need more of it :D
cooontinueee ///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
people has different way of expressing their talents as a writer. the mistake will serve as a lesson to improve your talent. thanks for the chapters and scene that give a deep mark to me as a reader
are you dropping this are you dropping this are you dropping this are you dropping this are you dropping this are you dropping this are you dropping this are you dropping this are you dropping this are you dropping this are you dropping this are you dropping this are you dropping this are you dropping this
This book is pretty amazing. the characters are well written, the plot is unique and the writng quality makes me want to keep on reading. Support the author y’all
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wow I absolutely love this stroke of genius,to avoid any spoilers I'll just mention that watching the character develop into a man is something to behold
update more please update more please update more please update more please update more please update more please update more please update more please
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35 chapters? Go wash your mouth and return to writing, until then your novel is trash Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm Mmmmm 140 characters