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概要
This is the story of Hatsuko, a guy without any friends or social life...
And that's how he expected his life to continue until he was invited to the best school in the entire world. A school only meant for people with special abilities. But his life didn't get any better... it got much worse!
While trying to endure the continuous bullying and humiliation, he began seeing weird things that were changing his life. When he thought his life would get better if he left the school, the whole world began collapsing until every city was destroyed... except 'Sakuru', the city he was staying in.
This was the beginning of his new life... or actually the end which was filled with nothing but hatred towards that city and everyone on his school!
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レビューを書くit's ok. it has a lot of flaws. The character development is too forced, I understand the author wanted to give the MC a tragic backstory but making everyone hate him for no reason at all just made it stupid and not realistic. Then all of a sudden he has a sister that came from nowhere. I don't understand why he's so obsessed with rei and Hana. Rei was just kind to him, Hana is his childhood friend was he expecting her to be with him just for that. author really need to develop the characters better
huh? well what do I say... It's good(?) ... :/ yup it's very good. Keep writing! (sigh. one-hundered and fourty! Come-on! reach it already! phew)
good novel , addictive story , has character buildup , not like where you just get everything going your way mc. Mc will be a bit annoying at first few chapters but it gets better eventually if you guys liked weak to strong with mc realising how power world works you will love it
I would say that I really like this novel, but I cannot do it for one reason, namely 18+ scenes, or, to be more precise, the lack of such in MC, it's just terribly uncomfortable for me to read the moments in which the MC observes other characters doing ***. Someone can say that MC is simply not interested in ***, but why then does the author poke these moments in our faces so clearly? The most unpleasant thing is that the author not only mentions the *** scenes, but partially details them, which makes these moments even more unreadable. And here you cannot use the excuse that this is only the beginning of the novel, since I am writing this comment at the time of the release of Chapter 75. Initially, I started reading this novel because of the harem and 18+ tags, but so far I have not seen any correspondence to these tags in this novel, except perhaps ntr. This novel has pretty good grammar and interesting character development, but I can't give 5 stars due to the above listed shortcomings.
This dude watched all the anime and cultivation bullshit and copied all that. Trash mc for 24 chapters after getting all the power still wasting time in a underground city or something being an f rank hunter. Mc says he is not going to spare anyone he will be ruthless but don't kill any humans of course when he is not in af mood or some shit. Author made mc as pathetic as he could so people can feel sympathy or something for him but whole story is about how pathetic he is.
I gotta say the story is well handled once You get past the NTR(honestly hope there isnt more), but how the author makes use of it for character development for the MC’s future relationships is amazing P.s hope Lauren and Hanna get what they deserve and nothing better happen to his sister. And plz update more
As an author, I think the story has a high chance of becoming popular! To the author, I'd like to know why your updates take so long. If u keep on updating at a slow pace, readers might not be interested in reading your books!
I will follow u to death... just don't drop please one of the best system novels I have ever read... I recommend this to everyone but those with weak hearts... there is an ntr tag for a reason.
Writing needs improvement especially in the grammar area but other than that this story is amazing on its own. The idea is very interesting and each chapter keeps you going. I hardly notice the mistakes because I enjoyed reading this. Hope you don't drop!
I enjoyed this book a lot. I feel this is a must read. The characters were well developed to the point that I was able to feel their pain and joys. I look forward to the next book to see how they are going to resolve their feeling for each other. I also am looking to see how the sister will play a role in this story.
English isnt my first language. The novel is pretty good, mc is very interesting. Please dont turn this into harem, many author failed to make a good harem.
Good Novel, Like the main character development Love the story plot Light novel that is nice and easy to read it ..............................................................................
We need him to start becoming more dominant please stop making him a cuck person because it basically needs to be solved and is getting tiresome so just make him,find his sister and mom and ignore other people this sounds better and more reasonable than continuing this feeding his rage path because he get betrayed just make him badass that's all okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
I'll support you author-san.. Seiya here... Your book is amazing. Hope you can continue writing this book till the end. Still didn't read the whole book but anyway... Good book
The novel is pretty decent but its not for me, mc gets cucked and tbh hes looking more like a side character to me. *sigh* i dont really know where this is going but im not really interested in reading furthur. Im not saying this is a bad novel by all means i think this has potential but this isnt for me.
Great **icological setup of the main character, with multiple issues and disappointements that make him grows. Intersting beginning...!! Please go on!
sooo...I am here to talk about MC's childhood friend Hanna...I think there is a misunderstanding about her relationship with Tatsuya...first of all her relationship with MC is not a love relationship but a friendship so her having a boyfriend other than the MC is not a betrayal to him and all his thoughts about her are his delusion so BLAMING her on a misunderstanding is wrong, to begin with...of course, we can't ignore what that bastard Tatsuya did with Raiden to kill the MC...so what I want to say is that because she has a relationship with a bastard don't make her a bad girl or anything even if she had ⓢⓔⓧ with him because she is still worried about MC even when he ignored her so she is not two-faced or anything like that but just a childhood friend that had a boyfriend other than the MC. so want her to have a bad ending is just so much. as for Rei...well, I don't understand what is wrong with her having a boyfriend?. finally his sister ... you know Mr. author when I read this part as the end of chapter 32. I wanted to say WTF if he had such intelligence little sister then why did he suffer so much. from her introduction, she seems to be an influential person, and if she is the one who makes him go to this school then how did she was oblivious to his wellbeing inside the school. Also, some readers expected that Raiden will Rape her or make her his girlfriend. but I expect something more meaningful from you Mr. author And I wish that you would not do anything stupid like that... also, please make sure that the MC had enough time and encounters to mature in some meaningful way instead of his current almost-crazy state.. so, please don't make him come back with this immature mentality. I think all readers like the Intelligence and serene MC. because no one will read hundreds of chapters about immature individual and his journey to revenge against some kids and instead of making clean revenge he will just go on unending revenge with their families or something like that. so again. if you planning to take your time in making him mature then it's okay just don't let him come back before maturing enough. also don't make him do silly mistakes like coming bake to school to flaunt his strength or to make everyone regrets what they did with him, ...etc. just let him make a secret organisation or something like that, and make sure to let him indifferent enough to the life and death of the people. because he should have lost his humanity in the day they betrayed him. also, I don't know what plans you have for Hanna but just make it quick and bearable maybe something like enslaves her or disfiguring her with X-mark on her face in a moment of rage. or maybe he will just ignore her and make her suffer emotionally... anyway I still don't understand how she is wrong but whatever you want to do then do it. finally, make sure to satisfy us when he takes care of all his classmates in a very beautiful and satisfying way. (I really don't know why I wrote so much for 32 chapters...) and thanks for writing such a good novel, please don't stop. work hard Mr. Author.
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