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zd4zaas

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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David_Farmer_3928

THe Translation didNt come out quite right. And soMe times it Felt like the story just SKipped a beat or decided we Had to know something really important but bot That bad.

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Mazen_Basyouni

Good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Worldwolf67

I kinda want to read a novel now where the MC does not give 2 sh*ts about his parents who mysteriously disappeared. And as our MC never set out on his journey, the villans won and ruled the universe. And due to the fact that MCs usually live in the noob village in the noob region of the noob country on the noob continent of the noob world, nobody cared to rule over this random backwater planet. And MC lived happily ever after. (I mainly gave this novel 1 star because I am tired of MC searching for his parents. Those who like standard tropes will probably like this novel)

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SaxonViolence

I was kinda enjoying the novel when Wutian—the Protagonist—was living in the woods, nursing a desire for revenge and having fun with Little Tian, his slimy faux toad. Bringing the little girl into the story was a mistake. Bringing her along was a mistake. The MC's total inability to keep a low profile has began to be a big drag…Still, I will continue to read on for at least a while longer—to see how things turn out...

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Bruh_Moment_6278

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Virk_Saab_1355

thus is nice book I like it very much it is awesome but about story it is okay okay I give it 3 star because of its stability it is nice book to read

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Miguel_Nunez_0573

Really nice fugdfhvvsdhjjbb ghhvfhnnvdssgh drfhh hjncdddghknbcdedvhb cf gjnvfssrghvdikbvfdsssawrfvhhjbfr jkndseubfddchiijbrefciibfdfvvjjcdgjb

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Alex_SB

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MrMust

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David_Klassen_4646

it was pretty good......................................,...................... . .. ...... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Daoist_Butterfly

Title: Heavenly Lord Asura(修罗天尊) Status: Completed(2296 chapters) Summary(perhaps spoiler): Classic cultivation story where the MC is 'destined to be unordinary'. The setting this time seems to be related to his missing parents. There also seems to be some prophetic abilities involved. The writing quality is not bad and you'll probably like the story if your a fan of standard cultivation stories.

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Arzella_Baker

not interested in reading past . the first chapter........ get it together writer...........plus the word count is to much on rating... thanks

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ZaziN_3030

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Mazen_Basyoni

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dz3kyl
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generic brainless crap written by 14yo. Do not waste ur time on this shit. So badddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.

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SpiriteStone

I don't like the story progress. MC is making a few mistake that shouldn't be made I guess author want to kill off his grandfather to make "revenge as a goal to make MC hunger for stregth" it is so lamp. He meet a girl live a lone inside a forest really? what the point of meeting her since no romantic could happen or anything related to MC. If it is a slice of life novel I don't mind it but it is a cultivation novel.

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Mazen_Basyouni

Good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Daoist5fWXwo

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Justynchinn

hahahahahahaahahahaahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahaahahahhahaahhahahahahaahahahaaaahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahaahhahahahaha good book

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sanfjeff

bad the mc doesn't even have anything that special about him and it's quite boring not very interesting very generic dunamaslskdjdkdidxkckc

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louisjacq

A boring story like most old Chinese book(10+ years) , a protagonist with plot armor and nothing else. I really wonder how this story has been selected? I think some corruption is present in webnovel.

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Daoist996601

Trash Novel!!! How can the author mess up in the first 10 chapter. The story is full of holes and to fill those gaps the author created more ambiguities.

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Allliiii

useless novel cliche like many others past few weeks I've been getting all crap novels can you just start putting the older books up again that didn't get accepted rathe then these books full of cliche

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Grandmist_Sage

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

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Insane_Pumpkin

I didn't even read this but i come here to ask how adopting a super pet make you into a asura... Spoiler is also welcomed i just wan to know how will his development start and if it will be connected to his pet.

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JayKai2

interesante. ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎

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TheDolphin

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zd4zaas

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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David_Farmer_3928

THe Translation didNt come out quite right. And soMe times it Felt like the story just SKipped a beat or decided we Had to know something really important but bot That bad.

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Mazen_Basyouni

Good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Worldwolf67

I kinda want to read a novel now where the MC does not give 2 sh*ts about his parents who mysteriously disappeared. And as our MC never set out on his journey, the villans won and ruled the universe. And due to the fact that MCs usually live in the noob village in the noob region of the noob country on the noob continent of the noob world, nobody cared to rule over this random backwater planet. And MC lived happily ever after. (I mainly gave this novel 1 star because I am tired of MC searching for his parents. Those who like standard tropes will probably like this novel)

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SaxonViolence

I was kinda enjoying the novel when Wutian—the Protagonist—was living in the woods, nursing a desire for revenge and having fun with Little Tian, his slimy faux toad. Bringing the little girl into the story was a mistake. Bringing her along was a mistake. The MC's total inability to keep a low profile has began to be a big drag…Still, I will continue to read on for at least a while longer—to see how things turn out...

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Bruh_Moment_6278

pog champ book, [img=fp][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=update]

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Virk_Saab_1355

thus is nice book I like it very much it is awesome but about story it is okay okay I give it 3 star because of its stability it is nice book to read

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Miguel_Nunez_0573

Really nice fugdfhvvsdhjjbb ghhvfhnnvdssgh drfhh hjncdddghknbcdedvhb cf gjnvfssrghvdikbvfdsssawrfvhhjbfr jkndseubfddchiijbrefciibfdfvvjjcdgjb

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Xer_Zipper

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Alex_SB

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MrMust

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David_Klassen_4646

it was pretty good......................................,...................... . .. ...... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Daoist_Butterfly

Title: Heavenly Lord Asura(修罗天尊) Status: Completed(2296 chapters) Summary(perhaps spoiler): Classic cultivation story where the MC is 'destined to be unordinary'. The setting this time seems to be related to his missing parents. There also seems to be some prophetic abilities involved. The writing quality is not bad and you'll probably like the story if your a fan of standard cultivation stories.

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Arzella_Baker

not interested in reading past . the first chapter........ get it together writer...........plus the word count is to much on rating... thanks

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ZaziN_3030

Nta** ,.................ghidowhehsudidkssjjsjdiddienbebehwsusisjbxbxueiewkksjshshsyssusjsbvsysudixxoozs. Bsusisshwuwi*** ususijsbwusisosisjwhes hsusisisbshsusisisisie heusisisjshshsydhdbdhdysus hsusissjhshshsisisieiejehehdhdiei3jshxhdisjsbsbdd shsusheheudud dusuebehsudud susuebegsududhd dhsusubduddehbdhdidjdhdud jdudhdhduebeue dhdusubeueud

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Mazen_Basyoni

Good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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dz3kyl
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generic brainless crap written by 14yo. Do not waste ur time on this shit. So badddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.

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SpiriteStone

I don't like the story progress. MC is making a few mistake that shouldn't be made I guess author want to kill off his grandfather to make "revenge as a goal to make MC hunger for stregth" it is so lamp. He meet a girl live a lone inside a forest really? what the point of meeting her since no romantic could happen or anything related to MC. If it is a slice of life novel I don't mind it but it is a cultivation novel.

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Mazen_Basyouni

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Daoist5fWXwo

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Justynchinn

hahahahahahaahahahaahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahaahahahhahaahhahahahahaahahahaaaahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahaahhahahahaha good book

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sanfjeff

bad the mc doesn't even have anything that special about him and it's quite boring not very interesting very generic dunamaslskdjdkdidxkckc

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louisjacq

A boring story like most old Chinese book(10+ years) , a protagonist with plot armor and nothing else. I really wonder how this story has been selected? I think some corruption is present in webnovel.

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Daoist996601

Trash Novel!!! How can the author mess up in the first 10 chapter. The story is full of holes and to fill those gaps the author created more ambiguities.

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Allliiii

useless novel cliche like many others past few weeks I've been getting all crap novels can you just start putting the older books up again that didn't get accepted rathe then these books full of cliche

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Grandmist_Sage

petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................

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Insane_Pumpkin

I didn't even read this but i come here to ask how adopting a super pet make you into a asura... Spoiler is also welcomed i just wan to know how will his development start and if it will be connected to his pet.

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JayKai2

interesante. ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎ ‏‏‎‎

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TheDolphin

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