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I don't own Overlord or it's character's.
This story starts with a man named Lyatt Folster who is a foreign citizen in Japan. He is a huge fan of the DD-VR-MMO-RPG game YGGDRASIL. He plays as the race of the Seraphim and at a max level of 100 he is very powerful. He was a very well known solo player and has a unique build. While not being globally ranked he has connections with the best players around, including everyone's favorite Overlord.
My first fanfiction ever. I'm writing this because I want a story like this and they are to far in-between for fan-fic reader's it seem's impossible to find the one I'm writing I will try to upload a chapter a day but it could take up to 2 days for good quality story and writing. I have just graduated high school this year (2020) and have always been a great reader and writer. I will need some help with the lore of the world because I want this to be lore friendly. I personally don't want a harem or romance but if enough people ask I will add something. Thanks for reading everyone.
Cover art done by YoungPhoenix3191 on deviant art. (If you want me to remove it the just ask. Since its yours and not mine.)
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i lake the way it started you rock author san update more like this and it will be more exciting and dont fall mc into dark like orginal mc of overlord just be good as a seraphim i hope more chapter coming [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Typical 5 star author review. I just want everyone to let me know what I can improve on and help me with world building. Thank you guys for reading a please feel free to tell me where i can improve my story.
Author. Your fan fiction is beautiful. Good writing style. Normal beginning of the plot. My only wishes. Do this a little more often. I hope MS won'T be a rag p. if still MS will be with that girl vampire.... No harem, please. Good luck in your endeavors author-Chan~
I really like the chapters so far, the writing quality is great compared to other stories, you incorporate lore into the sorry as he speaks to give a clear understanding of what's going on, character design ehh. But I do have some question if you could answer them author of possible. Q) Is Ainz Ooal Gown ( The guild ) and Manon still a thing in this fan-fic and will we meet them later?
Very intresting, and a very new concept to the other Overlord fanfics. Can´t wait to see how momonga and all of Nazarick will react. This fanfic is a 10/10 for me just a little sad that there are "just" 11 chapters now. Keep it up Author :)
I have totally enjoyed this story so far. I will be checking back for more. Thank you for sharing. It was like I was there. No more Japan now.
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*Grabs author by the collar* "MAKE MORE CHAPTERS DARN IT!" This is a great book, keep it up please. .
Honestly I love. The MC knows Momonga so it will be exciting to see those two meet up. Also the MC should be honest but not naive and innocent, he's a seraphim not a child, he should kill when he needs to nothing more nothing less. Those are just my thoughts. Author are you gonna come back to this book because I would love to this continue, it's so hard to find good overlord fanfics, plus ones that have an Angel as a MC is rare for novels as a whole from my searching.
Making your mc have a ' benevolent and righteous' character is quite boring. It would be more interesting if the mc was cunning and ruthless and had to fight his better nature to attain his goals. If not remember that angels are on the +500 morality scale so please add some of his internal struggles just like Ainz has with his immorality.
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 Who I am in life and in YGGDRASIL. 4 years ago
- 2 A memorable 10 days. 4 years ago
- 3 The Last Three days. 4 years ago
- 4 The final day is here. 4 years ago
- 5 Old mind, New body, Unknown world. 4 years ago
- 6 Finding out the truth. 4 years ago
- 7 First encounter with the wrong. 4 years ago
- 8 The first stop is Loyts. 4 years ago
- 9 Arriving in Loyts 4 years ago
Isn't it an angel at level 100, how can he get tired within two minutes and develop a bad character? Why did we give us his life story from the beginning and the fourth chapter I feel he is very random.