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XR3000

Although the "action" may only be a few minutes in the real world, the words wonderfully embellish what might be a struggle, a fear, a joy, that happens in the inner world of the characters. It could have been a boring simple "telling" what the lead character is observing about what is going on around her. However, we are truly brought into her raw, innocent, sometimes naughty, sometimes extreme thoughts. Bringing us from the environments she is in(and how she feels about it), to the uncomfortable wringley toes in her socks during winter. Making things more unpredictable, and feels like we are really reading her diary.

1yr
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Christine_Bennett

Character development and story line keep me coming back every day to see what the main character is in for today. LOVE IT! Not just a teen’s diary but so much adventure and a great view on what the werewolf culture could have in it.

2yr
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_JN_
LV 3 Badge

I’m usually the type to get bored really fast but this diary of a young teenage alpha is anything but boring. Each chapter, each character, each set up and each struggle Sam face’s is really well detailed and explained😍. Hoping to see more of our cute … sorry ‘scary’ alpha and her family and friends 😜

2yr
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Ash232006

I love your story so much. Sam really reminds me about myself. I hope you get the credit you deserve for this wonderful piece of art🤗♥️👌🏿

3yr
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E_Chong

Every time one of Sam's betas runs through her schedule with her, I think: "I can't wait to see that!". And I'm never disappointed by what actually happens. The protagonist, Sam, is lovely. She's a teenaged girl and cute and crazy powerful, which could easily make her like every other cliched female lead, but Sam is far from it. She makes mistakes, faces insecurities and doubts, and isn't perfect. But through everything, her simple wisdom, love of her pack, and admirable strength of character makes her a real hero and an alpha we all want to follow too.

3yr
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Christine_Bennett

I started reading this book a fre months after the author forst started posting and i am hooked!!!! Ive read a ton of othet werewold novles and this is unlike anything else I’ve read. The character development amd plot is AMAZING! The amount of detail and background given of each of the characters really helps you get into thr story. The author then fors on to have spin of stories from othet characters points of View!!! After reading daily for almost a year you’d think it get boring oe that the authir mught be stretching the story line thin but she ISN’T! You NEED to follow along with Sam the teenage ALpha to be and her group of Betas to see what kind if adventures she goes on and learn that although shes surrounded bu strong older werewolves SHE is the one always saving them!!!! Can’t wait to see what else the author has in store for Sam and Bell’s future:)

3yr
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_JN_
LV 3 Badge

This story really catches ur eye… it tells u about the daily struggles of a cute teenage alpha 😜 rather than just the grand luxurious version… Or maybe it’s just a Sam thing😘 Also the three Betas and one of a kind Bell really are something 🤫

3yr
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Taramac
LV 14 Badge

I'm going ahead and writing another review as I'm caught up on this novel and have so many things to say about it! It's crazy to me that this wonderful novel is not getting the attention it deserves. Please give this novel a chance because it is truly unique! The genre is kind of a hybrid coming-of-age, youth romance, werewolf, slice-of-life? It's hard to describe, but it's so refreshingly different. The writing and world building are incredible. I don't know how the author has done it, but they have managed to create a modern, supernatural world that feels real and lived-in by it's complex, amazing characters. [Side note: Thank you author for giving so much detail on how wolf packs would realistically function in society. Most authors don't address that stuff at all.] Speaking of characters, I love almost all of them! The main character, Sam, is an amazing narrator, but all of her friends and family feel real and fleshed out too! NO ONE is written as a lame stereotype that only exists for the main character's plotline. Anyways, it's great and by far my favorite discovery on webnovel! You should try it!

3yr
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Taramac
LV 14 Badge

Overall, I'm really liking it so far. The main character is tough and interesting, with a unique voice. It's hard to write young teenage characters without them being annoying, but this author manages to do so!

4yr
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_Love_Illusionist

Good stuff that the Author has got, I am an Author too and I'll genuinely review this. The character design commendable and we'll defined, story development isn't bad either. Writing quality is all fine and dandy, keep up the good work. Enthusiastic for more updates.

4yr
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XR3000

Although the "action" may only be a few minutes in the real world, the words wonderfully embellish what might be a struggle, a fear, a joy, that happens in the inner world of the characters. It could have been a boring simple "telling" what the lead character is observing about what is going on around her. However, we are truly brought into her raw, innocent, sometimes naughty, sometimes extreme thoughts. Bringing us from the environments she is in(and how she feels about it), to the uncomfortable wringley toes in her socks during winter. Making things more unpredictable, and feels like we are really reading her diary.

1yr
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Christine_Bennett

Character development and story line keep me coming back every day to see what the main character is in for today. LOVE IT! Not just a teen’s diary but so much adventure and a great view on what the werewolf culture could have in it.

2yr
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_JN_
LV 3 Badge

I’m usually the type to get bored really fast but this diary of a young teenage alpha is anything but boring. Each chapter, each character, each set up and each struggle Sam face’s is really well detailed and explained😍. Hoping to see more of our cute … sorry ‘scary’ alpha and her family and friends 😜

2yr
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Ash232006

I love your story so much. Sam really reminds me about myself. I hope you get the credit you deserve for this wonderful piece of art🤗♥️👌🏿

3yr
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E_Chong

Every time one of Sam's betas runs through her schedule with her, I think: "I can't wait to see that!". And I'm never disappointed by what actually happens. The protagonist, Sam, is lovely. She's a teenaged girl and cute and crazy powerful, which could easily make her like every other cliched female lead, but Sam is far from it. She makes mistakes, faces insecurities and doubts, and isn't perfect. But through everything, her simple wisdom, love of her pack, and admirable strength of character makes her a real hero and an alpha we all want to follow too.

3yr
1 の返信を表示する
Christine_Bennett

I started reading this book a fre months after the author forst started posting and i am hooked!!!! Ive read a ton of othet werewold novles and this is unlike anything else I’ve read. The character development amd plot is AMAZING! The amount of detail and background given of each of the characters really helps you get into thr story. The author then fors on to have spin of stories from othet characters points of View!!! After reading daily for almost a year you’d think it get boring oe that the authir mught be stretching the story line thin but she ISN’T! You NEED to follow along with Sam the teenage ALpha to be and her group of Betas to see what kind if adventures she goes on and learn that although shes surrounded bu strong older werewolves SHE is the one always saving them!!!! Can’t wait to see what else the author has in store for Sam and Bell’s future:)

3yr
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_JN_
LV 3 Badge

This story really catches ur eye… it tells u about the daily struggles of a cute teenage alpha 😜 rather than just the grand luxurious version… Or maybe it’s just a Sam thing😘 Also the three Betas and one of a kind Bell really are something 🤫

3yr
1 の返信を表示する
Taramac
LV 14 Badge

I'm going ahead and writing another review as I'm caught up on this novel and have so many things to say about it! It's crazy to me that this wonderful novel is not getting the attention it deserves. Please give this novel a chance because it is truly unique! The genre is kind of a hybrid coming-of-age, youth romance, werewolf, slice-of-life? It's hard to describe, but it's so refreshingly different. The writing and world building are incredible. I don't know how the author has done it, but they have managed to create a modern, supernatural world that feels real and lived-in by it's complex, amazing characters. [Side note: Thank you author for giving so much detail on how wolf packs would realistically function in society. Most authors don't address that stuff at all.] Speaking of characters, I love almost all of them! The main character, Sam, is an amazing narrator, but all of her friends and family feel real and fleshed out too! NO ONE is written as a lame stereotype that only exists for the main character's plotline. Anyways, it's great and by far my favorite discovery on webnovel! You should try it!

3yr
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Taramac
LV 14 Badge

Overall, I'm really liking it so far. The main character is tough and interesting, with a unique voice. It's hard to write young teenage characters without them being annoying, but this author manages to do so!

4yr
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_Love_Illusionist

Good stuff that the Author has got, I am an Author too and I'll genuinely review this. The character design commendable and we'll defined, story development isn't bad either. Writing quality is all fine and dandy, keep up the good work. Enthusiastic for more updates.

4yr
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