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Being shameless here 🤣 gonna give my self a five. Exp exp experience experience exp experience experience experience experience experience experience experience
Beside very plain writing, there just not enough details and talks are quite weird. There is extremely op mc, that I can't even understand, what he can do. There wasn't any specific powers, he is just become God... But my personal problem, why he is acting like some kicked puppy, going around telling his sob story and trying to be is gentlemanly as possible. Apparently, dude lives for countless times but can't court women, or have enough balls to get what he wants. Someone much say, that's you personal nitpick, but for the love of God, try to think how someone who lives countless lives, would act when he have a chance to have childrens in his very long live. That just a cringe.