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OUTRUNNING TIME

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作者: Dvanzy6

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"Here she is, fixing him while her own self is falling apart"

They say time stops when you meet the love of your life.
But for Ophelia White, it ran out.

Xavier Diego, a 17-year-old boy, takes his life one fateful night, leaving everyone in grief. Due to this, Ophelia's already messy life gets messier as the heavenly world entangles itself with her.

With a mission to save Xavier and the Angel of Death on her tail, will she outrun time?

Or will it outrun her?

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    Dvanzy6

    Hello lovely readers! This is your author, shamelessly giving her own book a review. I'm extremely pleasured to tell you all that our book got contracted!! I'll try to update everyday and please don't hesitate to share your suggestions in the comments. All your opinions will be strongly valued. Your votes and gifts shall mean a lot to me. Thank you so much for being such considerate readers! Regards Dvanzy6 ❤

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    Pooja_Damani

    Keep it up author. Loved it too much. 💝 awaiting for your next update. My arms were covered with goosebumps right from the beginning. Loved the way you depicted the mind of a person with depression.

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    Aryna_Stan

    I loved the book and I'm very picky about books, time travel is always fun and the Author portrays that well. I'd prefer you'd give the book a try yourself and I recommend that you do!

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    TheALONEMan

    This is a very great novel. I like the plot and drama surrounding it in the first parts and the narrations of the story made it more dramatic in the feeling. If you're interested in teens fiction with a unique storyline, then this is for you. :)

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    raima_alam

    I loved this book so much! Its unique and it just melted my heart. I could feel the emotions of the characters. The plot is different from the usual stories I have read. Hats off to u author 👏 .

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    shrEk2o3

    I read the initial chapter and what a brilliant plot this is ☺️ The first part already captured my interest and I'm already looking forward to how the story would unfold. Added to my library. I highly recommend ♥️☺️

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    Vidit_Verma

    The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins]

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    Chewys

    Its a very interesting idea for a novel, Its very good and I liked it a lot. Also I like the way you name your character, its very unique. The world building could certainly have some improvement though.

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    THE_WORDSMITH

    the story development is very interesting, I like how Ophelia is trying to save someone who is drowning in the depths of despair. I look forward to how Azriel will plot and how Ophelia counters him. Scene setting, awesome, character design, good (because I don't know how the characters look like) other than that their personas and feelings are very well written. P.S. Author good job.

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    wild_imaginatorII

    I read the blurb, I was curious. When I read chapter one, I was more than curious. Dear author, I so much love your cliffhanging skill. I'm hooked.

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    JP_TransLaLa

    A promising start to a time-travel fixit tale. The author's writing style is extremely easy to read and very descriptive, and includes some great concepts to keep your interest as the story progresses.

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    Jo_J
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    In your story, you deal with many very difficult issues, such as suicide, rejection, mother's trauma after the child's death, life after death, or the existence of spiritual beings, and many other related issues. The plot is intriguing and your main characters are also. Well done! I hope Ophelia will overcome her traumas, deal with the rejection, understands her mother... and Xavier will understand that life is not easy for anyone... One thing ;) For the future, remember that jumping between POVs shows the imperfection of the author's workshop.

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    Primate

    Overall: This is a very good novel to read. If you want to read a fantasy book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using third person narration style. We are able to experience the feelings and actions of the characters. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. It's about a girl named Ophelia who'll embark on a journey to save a boy who committed suicide, and at the same time evade death itself. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their roles, especially Ophelia. Well written. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy romance genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.

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    basementerz

    Dear author, your book are totally great. Just wanted to say that I find your story are totally interesting! Please keep up your excellent work 😆😆 Also, if you have time kindly check out my book too!

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    RoseOfBlues

    The book has a pretty cover but in my opinion, it still has some room for improvement. If the title could be made into an ambiguous one, it will attract a lot of people. I loved the synopsis! It hasn't given out the suspense and one would definitely be intrigued to read it, although it could be made a bit longer and slightly improved. The story is rather interesting but the chapters need to be longer and more engaging. Some parts of the story are great but with an addition of details, the story will definitely be amazing.

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    Little_Love_5727

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    Angelina_Daisy

    You can't never stop reading this book. All those descriptions are so beautifully explained that you feel that the characters are real . The introduction of a foreign language to a book is difficult , but the author ( Mejor amiga[img=recommend]) have incorporated it very well that you feel that along with the book , we are learning a new language. Keep Up the good work Young writer. [img=recommend]

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    SleepyKola

    Oh Wow! Our story had a bit similarity in the soulmate stuff, while yours is with time, mine is colorblind🤣🤣 it hooked me up just from the synopsis! The beginning is goodx and ophelia... such a relatable one💜 good job author! keep it up!

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    _midnightsunshine_

    The first chapter itself touched me. It started off on a dark tone. As the story progressed, though, the author brings out the little delights in the dark world. It's a leisurely read and is quite enjoyable. Keep it up!

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