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Hello, everyone! well, the last chapter didn't go that well. Lots of readers didn't want Qingyue to join the Asgard, which is pretty sad since that is what I was literally going to do... well, with MC taking Asgard, of course.

Hm, first this is my FIRST FF, so of course, there's going to be lots of mistakes or some ideas or drama that sounds too much childish. But I am still trying.

SO let me explain, it is spoiler tho', first I wanted Asgard to become this world center or the core of his world since creating a new Sect or Core will take him tremendous efforts, of course, if he doesn't count on the system. But since Asgard already had built foundation than why not use that. BUT I am writing this fanfic for fun, so, after listing lots of 'advice'. I thought why not edit the whole FF into wish-fulfillment. Happy(?).

Anyways, by no means I am angry or anything, I am writing this since I was pretty bored at home, that's why your comments help me create better work. So, I will be editing the story this far and it will take time. I don't want to drop this so ill will probably change the story from the start.

So if you have any ideas that you want to implement or anything feel free to comment, it does not cost anything. I will also be changing his wish from <Apogee> to <Ark of Embodiment>.

THANKS FOR READING!


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