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Frame Of Mind

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作者: Aislinn_Jasper

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‘What do you think? Am I a psychopath, Sarah?'

He asked in a gravelly voice. Gradually, the man tightened his grip on Sarah's throat with his right hand while the other one was holding her right with all of his power, almost embedding it into the wall behind her.

Sarah was running out of breath and her eyes went teary when he yelled...

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Sarah is a rich girl who after being trapped in her own house for almost two years finally came out. But now all she wants is a normal life. She joins a company called The Ambition to start a new fresh life but there are certain people and things that are approaching her. Which can or may reveal some of the things about her past...

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Chapter updates: do check once on the weekend, as I can't specify how many I can surely update in a week

Bonus chapters can be given in any week at any time. Stay tuned :)

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Aislinn_Jasper

Hey readers, I'm the author of this novel and I hope you're enjoying it while reading. I'm glad you chose this book to be added to your library and I also hope you'll keep supporting this novel in the future too by posting comments on what should be improved and how you liked the chapters. Thanks For Reading :)

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NotLikeButter

Great novel. Keep up good work. i really got nothing else to say: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ZOA
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This novel is really good. I think the author did an excellent job in describing the scenes and all. Looking forward to it!!! Great job author!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍

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daphneanmarcia

For peoples who like psychoic movies and novel , I recommend this novel . Sarah’s character Is really unique and interesting . The fonts and format of your writing is very gud too. Small grammar errors and typos can be seen . I will suggest you to read your chapter once Or twice before publishing it . It is a overall awesome story With plots and twists .

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Aaliyah_Stark_

The plot is coming out really well, I liked it. The first chapter with character detailing was really good so that we get a picture about the main character. It is great, but please do check the little errors found in between. And update regularly you're doing really well love. So keep writing more 😍😍😍😍🤗

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Chuck45Single

The plot of the book is very interesting and I like the dynamic in the relationship of Sarah and Niall. There are some language mistakes that need to be taken care of but overall the writing is good. Keep up the good work!

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AGirlHasNoName20

I really love how unexpected was this story. It was really easy for me to sink into the story and to enjoy it tremendously. Great descriptions and great character' developments. I'll definitely continue reading!

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_ARS
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Wow! After reading other chapters of this story, I automatically added it to my library. Good job author-nim! This is really good. Natural happenings are much relatable. I'm not good at this but, I have seen some grammatical errors. Nevertheless, you did great! **: I'm not yet done with this, so yeah, will definitely continue reading it tomorrow!

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ShadowPrincess96

Now that's what I call a great intriguing novel! It's a great novel & I think everyone should give it a try! Great job Author-nim ❤️ Added to my collection permanently!

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Justheguy

Overall, it's good. The style of writing shows that it is truly a good novel, but there is one problem in this story. The grammar. If you can fix that, then everything should all be good. GREAT WORK!

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THE_WORDSMITH

The novel is very interesting, the character development is also very very impressive, the scene-setting is very well described and helps one imagine the scene better. The MC is a very likeable person, though the theme of the book might feel a bit grey it still has that humour needed to balance it out, The depth of human physic expressed in this story is what satisfies the curiosity in me. The unpredictable element in the story which takes you by surprise should be noted as well. Thank you, Author you did a good job.

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KidWanderer

This book is great. I love the psycho theme here. I saw some grammatical errors but we can always edit it. More important is the content. The build of the characters are great too. Keep it up!

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Nocturnal_Dreamer

An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.

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D_Marvel_2943

Nice presentation, especially the presentation of the characters of the novel at the beginning. Nice plot twist, it helps to keep the suspense on. Nice storyline, and good detailing, it helps to convey your ideas to the readers. Overall, I think nice novel, is an award winning novel.

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Elise_Aigasaki

As someone who is interested in psychopaths, this book piqued my interest. It has a nice plot and I love the uniqueness in each of the characters. The story has a slow, detailed flow, but there are some typos. Other than the typo, it is a good story that has an amazing plot. Hope everyone would like it, like I do.

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Suezaro

It is a nice and engaging read! The author had portrayed each scene really well Looking forward to Sarah. That's for my initial review I will continue reading this again for sure! And I recommend everyone to read it.

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Oemar_danoes

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow. it's so cooooooooooooooooooooollllll. What a great story.

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Rankuza

Wow, honestly this is an interesting story, the plot is amazing, and I like Sarah's character. I'm looking forward to seeing more, I would definitely recommend. 😁

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Drapetomaniac12

The plot is amazing. The thing I like the most about this book is that it isn't cliché at all. The book is filled with grammatical errors though. You should edit it. Anyway, good job!

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