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22.8% MHA: The Quirk Engineer / Chapter 12: IMPORTANT UPDATE

章 12: IMPORTANT UPDATE

No, I'm not dropping this or going on a hiatus. In fact, I'll keep the same update speed, and this update is simply to inform you all that I fixed a few plot holes and made a few change in the previous chapters.

The truth is that I kinda started this on a whim, a Saturday at 2 am and I got progressivily more "involved" in the story and I put more and more time and efforts.

Also, this week, I was in vacation, so that's why I couldn't answer most of the comments.

First, I simply corrected myself and made a few corrections, I overall improved the quality of the story. For example, I made it that at 8 years old, he was in to same class as the thirteen years old, having skipped like, seven grades. At nine years old, he started (japanese?) highschool, which starts at fifteen.

Also, I precised his birthday, February 13th. Since school starts in March (?) in Japan, he is one of the youngest of the class (as if he wasn't already the youngest by like, 5 years…)

Second, I made a few modification to his quirk, NOTHING TOO BIG OR THAT WILL NERF HIM, he will still be OP by chapter 12 ngl. It's simply that, to avoid him getting completely out of had too soon, I made it that the quirks he can purchase can only affect him.

For example, he can't buy Recovery Girl's quirk, as it only work on others. The same with Eraserhead (or eraser type in general) or brainwashing quirks. Otherwise, he could've (and he would've) simply bought a shit ton of eraser type quirks and destroyed the shit out of everyone. Still, he can still buy other OP quirks, like All Might's, Endeavor's or control over metals (:

Thridly, I fixed a few prices of the quirks he bought. Finger speed regeneration was reduced to 1055 instead of 1355, Steel body was reduced to 1545 instead of 1655, Space distortment is now 1775 instead of 1975, Detachable Fingers is now 487 instead of 687 and Strength Gathering is now 200 more expensive.

Fourthly, I made a small change to cannon, in my fanfic it's not completely impossible for childs to have inherited to quirks, when their parent's quirks are so different that they can't "fuse", there is a very small (0,001%) chance that te child will inherit both quirks. Usually, this happens when both parents have less powerful quirks. Honnestly, this is just to fix plot holes, but it will also allow me to create intersting OC's.

Finally, romance! I will do romance at some point in the story, but I don't know who should be the waifu. I can do anyone, except that it has to be someone around his age (3 years more or less), so the comment with the most like will be the waifu. It can be an OC.

Also, if you like the story, I would really appreciate it if you reviewed my work, added it to your collection and (maybe) give power stones.

I will delete this chapter in a couple of days/a week.


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