72レビュー
4.53
- テキストの品質
- アップデートの安定性
- ストーリー展開
- キャラクターデザイン
- 世界の背景
あなたの考えを他の人と共有してください
レビューを書く
Do you even know how to use spaces and newlines? Everything is cramped to one paragraph! Reading the dialogues is a horrible experience.
the story is fast paced but it doesn't undermine the quality of the story at all
Tentei, mas não deu, tava horrível de se ler e minha cabeça já tava doendo.😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
Evaluation: Mediocre. WQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be improved on. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process (This is cannon compliant & an SI that didn't change nothing). 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 3/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but decided to forego his foreknowledge of OPVerse & his genius IQ/previous life knowledge just to satisfy himself. MC is just like an observer which hugs thigh of Luffy just to follow the plot. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for OPverse. He became to dumb to avoid plots and traps of OPVerse. 2/5 US: This is the only saving grace of this FF. 4/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 2/5 I really can't understand the hype and high rating of this FF as it only shows the summary of OP with a dumb SI not even a strong one xD
It's a good story, the grammar is good, I agree that the phrasing is a little bit weird and you may confuse with who is talking but it's easy to adapt and the ending is a bit rushed in my opinion. Besides all that I think is one of the best fics especially the humor, it really translate the escence of the comedic situations in One Piece
super 👌 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The MC is literally the pet/ mount of the crew, frustrating to read the MC being rode on into battle by the crew every chapter, or Nami petting him.
A really great one piece fanfiction!!! It's the first time i read a one piece story where MC is a scientist.. He's really briliant or smartest people 👍👍👍 I love how Viper erase his memories to start a new journey with SHP.. I also love his character.. Protective to his families and ruthless to his enemies... 😁😁😍😍😍
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
One of the most wholesome story’s with a brilliant ending……………………………………………………………….………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
Even though the story is a bit rushed, it's still the best or one of the best "One Piece" ff I read. It's also very emotional and I would recommend it. The MC is crazy and sometimes really emotional and acts only on them. If you don't like such an MC then don't read it. If you do then give it a try for the first few chapters.
Very satifying and entertaing it the best in my own interest so goooooood. I wish too that everything have no ending mwahahaha I AM SO HAPPY
Awesome story, really interesting OC and the interactions between the OC and the people are really good truly amazing. Thanks, author san for the story and hope you all the best
I really liked it mainly the beginning for some reason with the lead showing up where and when he did it made me keep it in my reading list for a reread at a later date, which I just finished. not the longest story but for the chapters written the author carried the plot well and completed the story. ( seriously people a finished story automatically gets you an extra start rating ) definitely tired of authors stopping cause (insert excuse here) and leaving a story in limbo, not cool. so yeah quick read and a good 1piece story.
Even though the story is a bit rushed, it's still the best or one of the best "One Piece" ff I read. It's also very emotional and I would recommend it. The MC is crazy and sometimes really emotional and acts only on them. If you don't like such an MC then don't read it. If you do then give it a try for the first few chapters.
Great story. Even though in some places the story felt like it rushed through some parts and some lemon scenes just came out of nowhere. The author has given a suitable and a happy ending. Really worth reading till the end.
fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. v
Incrível 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST ONE PIECE BOOKS EVER!!! THE JOURNEY WAS REALLY AMAZING!!! I LAUGHED, I CRIED, HAD A LOT OF FUN READING IT!!! TO PEOPLE WHO HAVEN'T READ IT READ IT I GUARANTEE U UR TIME WON'T BE WASTED!!! THANK U AUTHOR FOR THIS AMAZING BOOK!!!
its soooo goood why thank you for the whole story you give to thank you wowo ******wwowowowoowowowowowowowwowoowowowowowoowowowo
This review is mostly for me just in case I want to reread it in the future. • love the character design and the OC's personality • For the OC's affair with other women before he met his love of his life, I don't hate it but I just dislike it. • I really love how OC so smart and the author is so creative with the inventions. • sad that Shanks didn't get an appearance in this books. RIP Shanks. • Also, very sad how Ace and Whitebeard died. • love OC trained with Whitbeard pirates for 2 years. • the writing quality is really nice as it is easy to follow the dialogues. • the story seems so rushed since the author didn't go fully detailed, but still got the major points of the story. • I don't really like the ending story about fighting Teach and Akainu since it's going too fast, but I don't blame the author since One Piece manga is not even done yet. • I feel like the OC is kinda too strong in the beginning. • the first chapter was really sad and like a sci-fi movie. Lol. • I kinda like that there's like a small crossover from other anime too even if just borrowing the character's name or attack names from other anime. Overall, this story is great!! I will definitely reread this story again in the future. Great job author!! Hope you continue writing more awesome stories.
ネタバレを明かす
terrible story bad author please let me live my life in peace **** you................................................................................................................................
This is one of the best One Piece fanfics that I have every read. As of this post I am in the process of rereading this for the 7th time!!!! it is one of the most amazing pieces of fanfic. Keep writing plz😁😁
This us an amazing One Piece fanfic. One of the best I have read. This post marks my 5th time re-reading. amazing romance and thankfully NO HAREM!!!!!! PLZ keep writing
READ IT!!!!!! Viper is soo cool! Its not a harem and its reasonable op power! He fits into the story as if its the real thing! Stick with it all the way through. even if you dont like how he loses His memories. It adds to the mystery and gives him a sad backstory! READ IT!!!!
Absolutly magnificent. good to read, funny comments, fights, ***, family. and enough twist´s in the original story to make it something new
Writing quality is instantly a four out of five because I didn’t feel like shooting myself after reading. Story development isn’t that great but it’s like eating junk food to me. I like how it’s going right now.
I am the exp of my sword Webnovel is my body and exp is my blood I have created a thousand useless reviews Unknown to death,nor known to life Have withstood pain to create many reviews Yet those hand will never hold anything So, as I pray UNLIMITED EXP WORKS
Haaaaaaaaaa I’m at chapter 21 rn and although the character and his interactions are fun, it basically means nothing to the plot cuz everything is happening the same as the plot all the way to aces and whitebeards death. nothing changed at all in the grand scheme of things.☹️
ネタバレを明かす Do you even know how to use spaces and newlines? Everything is cramped to one paragraph! Reading the dialogues is a horrible experience.
the story is fast paced but it doesn't undermine the quality of the story at all
Tentei, mas não deu, tava horrível de se ler e minha cabeça já tava doendo.😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
Evaluation: Mediocre. WQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be improved on. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process (This is cannon compliant & an SI that didn't change nothing). 3/5 SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 3/5 CD: MC is a transmigrator but decided to forego his foreknowledge of OPVerse & his genius IQ/previous life knowledge just to satisfy himself. MC is just like an observer which hugs thigh of Luffy just to follow the plot. MC is a dumb hero which is too kind for OPverse. He became to dumb to avoid plots and traps of OPVerse. 2/5 US: This is the only saving grace of this FF. 4/5 WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 2/5 I really can't understand the hype and high rating of this FF as it only shows the summary of OP with a dumb SI not even a strong one xD
It's a good story, the grammar is good, I agree that the phrasing is a little bit weird and you may confuse with who is talking but it's easy to adapt and the ending is a bit rushed in my opinion. Besides all that I think is one of the best fics especially the humor, it really translate the escence of the comedic situations in One Piece
super 👌 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The MC is literally the pet/ mount of the crew, frustrating to read the MC being rode on into battle by the crew every chapter, or Nami petting him.
A really great one piece fanfiction!!! It's the first time i read a one piece story where MC is a scientist.. He's really briliant or smartest people 👍👍👍 I love how Viper erase his memories to start a new journey with SHP.. I also love his character.. Protective to his families and ruthless to his enemies... 😁😁😍😍😍
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
One of the most wholesome story’s with a brilliant ending……………………………………………………………….………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………
Even though the story is a bit rushed, it's still the best or one of the best "One Piece" ff I read. It's also very emotional and I would recommend it. The MC is crazy and sometimes really emotional and acts only on them. If you don't like such an MC then don't read it. If you do then give it a try for the first few chapters.
Very satifying and entertaing it the best in my own interest so goooooood. I wish too that everything have no ending mwahahaha I AM SO HAPPY
Awesome story, really interesting OC and the interactions between the OC and the people are really good truly amazing. Thanks, author san for the story and hope you all the best
I really liked it mainly the beginning for some reason with the lead showing up where and when he did it made me keep it in my reading list for a reread at a later date, which I just finished. not the longest story but for the chapters written the author carried the plot well and completed the story. ( seriously people a finished story automatically gets you an extra start rating ) definitely tired of authors stopping cause (insert excuse here) and leaving a story in limbo, not cool. so yeah quick read and a good 1piece story.
Even though the story is a bit rushed, it's still the best or one of the best "One Piece" ff I read. It's also very emotional and I would recommend it. The MC is crazy and sometimes really emotional and acts only on them. If you don't like such an MC then don't read it. If you do then give it a try for the first few chapters.
Great story. Even though in some places the story felt like it rushed through some parts and some lemon scenes just came out of nowhere. The author has given a suitable and a happy ending. Really worth reading till the end.
fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. fantastic, I came to read again. v
Incrível 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST ONE PIECE BOOKS EVER!!! THE JOURNEY WAS REALLY AMAZING!!! I LAUGHED, I CRIED, HAD A LOT OF FUN READING IT!!! TO PEOPLE WHO HAVEN'T READ IT READ IT I GUARANTEE U UR TIME WON'T BE WASTED!!! THANK U AUTHOR FOR THIS AMAZING BOOK!!!
its soooo goood why thank you for the whole story you give to thank you wowo ******wwowowowoowowowowowowowwowoowowowowowoowowowo
This review is mostly for me just in case I want to reread it in the future. • love the character design and the OC's personality • For the OC's affair with other women before he met his love of his life, I don't hate it but I just dislike it. • I really love how OC so smart and the author is so creative with the inventions. • sad that Shanks didn't get an appearance in this books. RIP Shanks. • Also, very sad how Ace and Whitebeard died. • love OC trained with Whitbeard pirates for 2 years. • the writing quality is really nice as it is easy to follow the dialogues. • the story seems so rushed since the author didn't go fully detailed, but still got the major points of the story. • I don't really like the ending story about fighting Teach and Akainu since it's going too fast, but I don't blame the author since One Piece manga is not even done yet. • I feel like the OC is kinda too strong in the beginning. • the first chapter was really sad and like a sci-fi movie. Lol. • I kinda like that there's like a small crossover from other anime too even if just borrowing the character's name or attack names from other anime. Overall, this story is great!! I will definitely reread this story again in the future. Great job author!! Hope you continue writing more awesome stories.
ネタバレを明かす terrible story bad author please let me live my life in peace **** you................................................................................................................................
This is one of the best One Piece fanfics that I have every read. As of this post I am in the process of rereading this for the 7th time!!!! it is one of the most amazing pieces of fanfic. Keep writing plz😁😁
This us an amazing One Piece fanfic. One of the best I have read. This post marks my 5th time re-reading. amazing romance and thankfully NO HAREM!!!!!! PLZ keep writing
READ IT!!!!!! Viper is soo cool! Its not a harem and its reasonable op power! He fits into the story as if its the real thing! Stick with it all the way through. even if you dont like how he loses His memories. It adds to the mystery and gives him a sad backstory! READ IT!!!!
Absolutly magnificent. good to read, funny comments, fights, ***, family. and enough twist´s in the original story to make it something new
Writing quality is instantly a four out of five because I didn’t feel like shooting myself after reading. Story development isn’t that great but it’s like eating junk food to me. I like how it’s going right now.
I am the exp of my sword Webnovel is my body and exp is my blood I have created a thousand useless reviews Unknown to death,nor known to life Have withstood pain to create many reviews Yet those hand will never hold anything So, as I pray UNLIMITED EXP WORKS
Haaaaaaaaaa I’m at chapter 21 rn and although the character and his interactions are fun, it basically means nothing to the plot cuz everything is happening the same as the plot all the way to aces and whitebeards death. nothing changed at all in the grand scheme of things.☹️
ネタバレを明かす