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great story however it started reminded me of another fanfic I read recently and if my memory is not wrong it's ride of the protector
too many ocs I got lost after the sorting cus there were so many new people and I bet you that the author will have huge trouble making up content and plotlines for these new characters
no wonder you dropped with that character devel. pathetic ..... ................................,.....................mm............
Why ,Why , why ,why are you not uploading the chapters . Pls don't drop it . Waiting for next chapter . ....................................
well I know for one, that I like how this story is developing, it makes for an interesting view in the world of wizards! really do hope to see more! love how the characters are portrayed 🙂🙂
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I give you four point four stars for this book review. I just finished reading your chapters and I really enjoyed it. My only qualms were your lack of capitalization sometimes, how you sometimes forgot what you wrote in previous chapters, and that you haven’t updated in 3 months apparently.
Good story. Explore more of the magic side and other characters. Very interesting and easily addictive one you read it. Only wish for More updates Now.
This is a really good book. I mean this author put alot into its background, story plot, and it's character development. though I do wish that we see the side characters like the weasley's a little more, or the "friends" the character has.
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Writing quality: pretty good in the first place compared to allot of the stuff I've read, it gets better further into the book. Barely any mistakes in grammar either. Stability of updates: good, a little bit unstable with gaps every now and then that only last a few days. Story development: amazing, delves into the world it's set in and even builds up more. Character design: great, for once the characters actually feel like real people and act like a real person unlike many other books that make the side-characters cater to the mc every whim and seem to only exist for the mc. world background: the author mentions unnecessary characters and makes it apparent that the world isn't halted around the mc and that there is other stuff happening that the mc isn't apart of. it gives a sense of realism that you don't get with other books that pretend that only the stuff that is happening around the mc is important. it shows that there is more going on than what you see.
This is a great fan fiction for Harry Potter! Great to see an author introducing a new MC and abilities that are intriguing but still read true to hp universe. Really hope the author continues to write this because it has enormous potential and is one of the better fan fictions I’ve read for hp
The truth is this fanfic is very good, it is better than many that I read, I like the development of the character and the general context of the story there are some things that are missing a bit but nothing serious, one of the best fanfics that I was reading about webnovel, I am not much to qualify but I think this book deserved it, I loved the book I suggest them to all.[img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp]
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This is one of those stories that gives the reader great hope at the beginning. It's very good and has a ton of potential If used it can surely become one of the top HP fanfic. And most of all the author takes suggestions,so that's great. So yeah , good to read for HP fans who want a good fanfic which doesn't revolve around the "Golden Trio".
Awesome HP Fanfic. Definitely different way to go about it which I love. I hope you go all the way with the story and don't give up. Thank you for the great work and keep it up!
A very good story and interesting . I would like to know who the love interest of the MC is and thanks for the novel and I hope you don't drop it [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend]
Its exactly what i want of a Harry Potter Fanfic. Its a bit bland though. Powerfantasy with smart Mc, who is not overly attached to kids and magic cores.
I really like this novel a lot since the story is pretty awesome and I in general like fanfics where the mc is the last living heir of an ancient and noble family. But the character development in my opinion is a bit lacking. Anyhow, great story!!
Es el primer fanfic del universo de Harry Potter,y me gusto mucho,el personaje principal es serio pero con sus toques de humor,en perfecto equilibrio,en conclusión:Un buen fanfic
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If not even the author can give himself a shameless 5 star review then who can? This story may be trash, but it's my trash. ...............
great story however it started reminded me of another fanfic I read recently and if my memory is not wrong it's ride of the protector
too many ocs I got lost after the sorting cus there were so many new people and I bet you that the author will have huge trouble making up content and plotlines for these new characters
no wonder you dropped with that character devel. pathetic ..... ................................,.....................mm............
Why ,Why , why ,why are you not uploading the chapters . Pls don't drop it . Waiting for next chapter . ....................................
well I know for one, that I like how this story is developing, it makes for an interesting view in the world of wizards! really do hope to see more! love how the characters are portrayed 🙂🙂
please poster soon the next chapter this story is amazing 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
I give you four point four stars for this book review. I just finished reading your chapters and I really enjoyed it. My only qualms were your lack of capitalization sometimes, how you sometimes forgot what you wrote in previous chapters, and that you haven’t updated in 3 months apparently.
Good story. Explore more of the magic side and other characters. Very interesting and easily addictive one you read it. Only wish for More updates Now.
This is a really good book. I mean this author put alot into its background, story plot, and it's character development. though I do wish that we see the side characters like the weasley's a little more, or the "friends" the character has.
ネタバレを明かす Writing quality: pretty good in the first place compared to allot of the stuff I've read, it gets better further into the book. Barely any mistakes in grammar either. Stability of updates: good, a little bit unstable with gaps every now and then that only last a few days. Story development: amazing, delves into the world it's set in and even builds up more. Character design: great, for once the characters actually feel like real people and act like a real person unlike many other books that make the side-characters cater to the mc every whim and seem to only exist for the mc. world background: the author mentions unnecessary characters and makes it apparent that the world isn't halted around the mc and that there is other stuff happening that the mc isn't apart of. it gives a sense of realism that you don't get with other books that pretend that only the stuff that is happening around the mc is important. it shows that there is more going on than what you see.
This is a great fan fiction for Harry Potter! Great to see an author introducing a new MC and abilities that are intriguing but still read true to hp universe. Really hope the author continues to write this because it has enormous potential and is one of the better fan fictions I’ve read for hp
The truth is this fanfic is very good, it is better than many that I read, I like the development of the character and the general context of the story there are some things that are missing a bit but nothing serious, one of the best fanfics that I was reading about webnovel, I am not much to qualify but I think this book deserved it, I loved the book I suggest them to all.[img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp]
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This is one of those stories that gives the reader great hope at the beginning. It's very good and has a ton of potential If used it can surely become one of the top HP fanfic. And most of all the author takes suggestions,so that's great. So yeah , good to read for HP fans who want a good fanfic which doesn't revolve around the "Golden Trio".
Awesome HP Fanfic. Definitely different way to go about it which I love. I hope you go all the way with the story and don't give up. Thank you for the great work and keep it up!
A very good story and interesting . I would like to know who the love interest of the MC is and thanks for the novel and I hope you don't drop it [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=fp][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend]
Its exactly what i want of a Harry Potter Fanfic. Its a bit bland though. Powerfantasy with smart Mc, who is not overly attached to kids and magic cores.
I really like this novel a lot since the story is pretty awesome and I in general like fanfics where the mc is the last living heir of an ancient and noble family. But the character development in my opinion is a bit lacking. Anyhow, great story!!
Es el primer fanfic del universo de Harry Potter,y me gusto mucho,el personaje principal es serio pero con sus toques de humor,en perfecto equilibrio,en conclusión:Un buen fanfic
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If not even the author can give himself a shameless 5 star review then who can? This story may be trash, but it's my trash. ...............