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- I just put some names of anime that are good and them: * "shinma mao no testament": I liked the development, apart from the fanservi. * "strike the blood": I also liked the development, just a little unsatisfied with the density of the protagonist, leaving good girls. * "To love ru": development of slow romance, also unsatisfied with how indecisive the protagonist was, having several girls who wanted to have her love. * "maken ki": good women's fights. * sekirei: good fights as sad of the entire game planned by a mad scientist, protagonist against dense, those that surrounded the protagonist had more prominence. * "mahoka no rettori": cold but good protagonist in several things, the sister who wants to have her, are in a relationship for her aunt (novel: maya yotsuba) who does not want her to be against him because of the power he has to destroy them, miyuki good way of developing his character, and the others that make up the anime, etc. * "nanatsu no tazai": good fights, only the anime of the third season, the animation was poor, pain type. and it was great information, knowing that everything that the seven deadly sins went through, was planned by merlin, for a goal that he had to have meliodas as his, but in the end he changed when he saw elizabeth as the sister he did not have, although there Sometimes I try to kill her. and its ending is neither good nor bad, only forced. * "fairy tail": no one dies, interesting fights, highlights the friendship, no romantic relationship, more focused on how the plot guild grows with more members, defeated enemies become good, and so on, good bows, bows lengths that do not give as much impact, the enemy end (acnology), was that he won, but since the author wanted the union to be shown (nakama), they give the protagonist powers out of nowhere, knowing that acnology killed several dragons, immune to magic, but in the end they beat him with forced magic, but well I'm not complaining, I like how I advance and its end, it went badly and well, only some took the path of love, others continue in the same, dense protagonist. etc. * "rosario + vampire": anime different from the novel, weak character, worthless to confess his love, but good development, not bad or good ending. * "shakugan no shana": good anime, showing the different faces of the characters, not bad or good ending. * "mushoku tensei": if you have time I recommend reading: good development, only the end not so satisfied with leaving some girls who helped him a lot. * "One Piece": I did not see the whole anime, because it is a lot, but it has good fights, powers sometimes out of nowhere, protagonist who falls in love with many girls, but only thinks about eating, well that is the scene of the chonen , but it is interesting. * "bleach": anyway, it has its good points as bad, which I won't say because I already forgot some scenes, but an interesting novel. * "zero no tsukaima": good novel or anime, developed slowly but well, great ending, just sad to leave some girls who deserved their love (like the elf). * "sword art online": good anime and novel: I like the beginning of the arc and the second arc (where the cousin seems), and the last of alization (alice grande waifu). * "harry potter": good movie. I only wish that the protagonist ended with hermanioni and gyni (ron wesley did not deserve it, I only finished with her, because she gave him a potion that makes him look better) the chosen one: harry the protagonist ", had already planned everything that would happen, including ton rider, everything he did to remain as the good grandfather who is remembered as a hero. being darker than a modem (he manipulated several, he left harry potter with his uncles who does not like those who have magic. he put sirius to azkaban, being one of the bosses of wizamet, something of the ministry, to later use it and the whole plot that comes.), my characters that I liked were (fleur and her sister, daphne and her sister. luna lovewot something pro ahi, brotherhood: it started as unbearable but changed while maturing, beloved by her role as villain who did it for the contract that he had married, more voldemor corrupting his mind, among others more). * "attack on titans": rare fights of big bugs, annoying protagonist, mikasa was always taking care of him, but his cold shoulder because he does not like me to take care of him, he did not deserve it, "history, among other girls", which They could have been from the harem, interesting anime and novel, but the protagonist spoils everything. * "hischol dxd": anime and novel most viewed by anyone who loves fanservi, the characters, good plot, developments too, rare character who is looking for harem, but does not know how to handle the feelings of the girls, the same girls they have to take the first step, if not the protagonist is still all silly and depressed by his first love that killed him xD, good characters where we have: the character I like to recommend for the haren / faction: Raynare (she is a bit sadistic but she did what she did for love with azazel and also only has a superiority complex easy to eliminate, it could be like your secret operations of black operations, when you know that doing something is not the right thing in public so you do it in secret, and you could have the two that accompany it as a plus) Sona (the woman who moves her lenses xD, she is a great strategist) Tsubaki (bellesa fria) (idk she great, good swordswoman, back in beauty of sona) Aika (in the light novel she became a very good magician, but I do not remember her name, if it is not so t aika, it is that girl with glasses who was a pervert in the issei class) Murayama and katase (those two girls in the class where the trio spied, the ones with swords) Gabriel (could fix the gods system) Grayfia (good warrior maiden and ice mage) Venelana (sexy and probably could be the director of meetings and things at official parties, past noble cause) Serafall (maou, to calm the other factions, and I like their childishness, others might say that it is annoying, but that is what makes it different from others and more accessible) Ingvild leviatan (she can literally control dragons, or she joins you or you kill her, because she could literally control mc if she is strong enough) (Obviously all the MC in this world) Rias (the destructive power is Op if it is well trained, it can be mimamda, but with good "spanking" and training you can have a more pleasant "Rias") Akeno (he is a little nephilim, neither sacred or demonic elements are his weakness, sadica xD) Asia (a healer = many think that it is useless and not necessary, I say that it is the main piece in a combat. Better when it has a dragon as a companion xD) Ravel (Phoenix tears, good secretary) Xenovia (durandal> good swordswoman, just teach her common sense xD) Koneko (nekoshou devil op, they were experimenting with their sister for a reason, only sairaorg was op and I only use touki) Kuroka (same as her sister, only because of the experiments, she is no longer a pure nekomata, good choice for nobility) Kiba (I don't care, any character in dxd who prefers to train technique over power is respectable because training power is easier than perfecting a technique. (In her feminine form she is a beauty xD, if you have seen the illustration of the novel)) issei (I put it too, because it can be good to have him as a subordinate, that if. first I would be to take out the pervert, by his case I make him an obedient butler xD, and of course he yes is a woman much best) Gasper (friend, vampire who can stop time, this law trap needs a gender change) Rossewaise (he is one of the best magicians in valhalla, according to the light novel. Also a good secretary) Leviana reni (I don't know much about her story, because I haven't read the novel, but I do know something, because I read a few paragraphs where they put her as a good magician and that she has a "sacre gear", I don't know if it's true, but It would be good to have her as a wife and part of your nobility) yasaka (strong yokai, I have never seen her put in her nobility by any fanfic who is from xdx, she is also a good ruler, a good wife, among other things) tiamat (dragon of chaos, if you have it in your nobility, you have a powerful dragon) yubellana (from the riser phenex nobility, good magician like akeno hajima, plus the others who are in her riser phenex nobility, have their potential) etc.
the story development is good but they are a few grammar mistakes but can be ignored overall a very good book for those who prefer a fast paced story and is a wish fulfillment .
Sad to see the story was dropped, this story was interesting while it lasted and it got me hooked. I never minded the gender end because I thought Multiverse right, in all of the infinite possibilities, there should be one where Naruto was born a girl right? Anyway keep up the good work
Props to author dishing out chap after chap. But this is literally terrible. I tried to keep reading but it didn’t get any better. I’m pretty confused how the reviews are so high.
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An interesting novel. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..... . . . ... .. .
Why did I rate this Five stars? Simple, I had never read a harem fanfic, that made me cry, that made me love, that made me hate, that made me smile, like this one did. The Grammar is a problem, as well as the pov changes. But I can't judge him on that, As My story has similar problems, I wish you luck Author.
An interesting novel. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..... . . . ... .. .
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An interesting novel. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..... . . . ... .. .
Interesting and very nice, good story and nice development ........,......... .. . . . . . . ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...
It has been a very pleasant experience...............,.........., ................................... ..................................,...........
the story is nice enough but the grammatical errors take away any immersion you have on the story........................................................
although I only read a bit of it but I can say that it's a wonderful fanfic though there is a few grammary error but it still readable.i recommend this to people who like Naruto fanfic.
El desarrollo de la historia es bueno pero hay algunos errores gramaticals. ...........................................................................................
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I like female Naruko fics, I also like ho the stoy develops, I feel like youre doing a great job, and I can't wait to see what you hve planned next
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Very interesting concept you have here, very rare to see a female Naruko mc from our world reincarnated fanfic, I am looking forward to more chapters in the future.
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Umm... the author like a to rant a lot lol, but at least he puts everything in the other volume. it also seems like people don't understand not read whats in that volume to prepare for the story. Not the authors fault, it's yours I rate this give stars simply because I continue to love it.
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Yandere himata. Chill mc. Mc that cares for no one but the people who come to love him. Honestly there are words that seem out of place, that makes people misunderstand, and look at it in a disgusting way, this story is very cool and original, like an si in a fanfic with a bashing sakura and a bashing Sasuke, my advice is to just endure through it Im not even vmfinsihed with it yet and it hasn't disappointed me nothing has disappointed me b the short chapters, Id say about 500 to 700.
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My story is not the best when it comes to grammar and long sentencing, but it is something that I am trying to improve, when you read expect the chapters to be short, but have good development and a faster release paste. Slow beginning, but will have his harass moments in the future. Mc is not evil, and will only kill when he has no choice but to kill, he is basically a chill Mc. hope you like it if you don't you can always drop
An interesting novel. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..... . . . ... .. .
- I just put some names of anime that are good and them: * "shinma mao no testament": I liked the development, apart from the fanservi. * "strike the blood": I also liked the development, just a little unsatisfied with the density of the protagonist, leaving good girls. * "To love ru": development of slow romance, also unsatisfied with how indecisive the protagonist was, having several girls who wanted to have her love. * "maken ki": good women's fights. * sekirei: good fights as sad of the entire game planned by a mad scientist, protagonist against dense, those that surrounded the protagonist had more prominence. * "mahoka no rettori": cold but good protagonist in several things, the sister who wants to have her, are in a relationship for her aunt (novel: maya yotsuba) who does not want her to be against him because of the power he has to destroy them, miyuki good way of developing his character, and the others that make up the anime, etc. * "nanatsu no tazai": good fights, only the anime of the third season, the animation was poor, pain type. and it was great information, knowing that everything that the seven deadly sins went through, was planned by merlin, for a goal that he had to have meliodas as his, but in the end he changed when he saw elizabeth as the sister he did not have, although there Sometimes I try to kill her. and its ending is neither good nor bad, only forced. * "fairy tail": no one dies, interesting fights, highlights the friendship, no romantic relationship, more focused on how the plot guild grows with more members, defeated enemies become good, and so on, good bows, bows lengths that do not give as much impact, the enemy end (acnology), was that he won, but since the author wanted the union to be shown (nakama), they give the protagonist powers out of nowhere, knowing that acnology killed several dragons, immune to magic, but in the end they beat him with forced magic, but well I'm not complaining, I like how I advance and its end, it went badly and well, only some took the path of love, others continue in the same, dense protagonist. etc. * "rosario + vampire": anime different from the novel, weak character, worthless to confess his love, but good development, not bad or good ending. * "shakugan no shana": good anime, showing the different faces of the characters, not bad or good ending. * "mushoku tensei": if you have time I recommend reading: good development, only the end not so satisfied with leaving some girls who helped him a lot. * "One Piece": I did not see the whole anime, because it is a lot, but it has good fights, powers sometimes out of nowhere, protagonist who falls in love with many girls, but only thinks about eating, well that is the scene of the chonen , but it is interesting. * "bleach": anyway, it has its good points as bad, which I won't say because I already forgot some scenes, but an interesting novel. * "zero no tsukaima": good novel or anime, developed slowly but well, great ending, just sad to leave some girls who deserved their love (like the elf). * "sword art online": good anime and novel: I like the beginning of the arc and the second arc (where the cousin seems), and the last of alization (alice grande waifu). * "harry potter": good movie. I only wish that the protagonist ended with hermanioni and gyni (ron wesley did not deserve it, I only finished with her, because she gave him a potion that makes him look better) the chosen one: harry the protagonist ", had already planned everything that would happen, including ton rider, everything he did to remain as the good grandfather who is remembered as a hero. being darker than a modem (he manipulated several, he left harry potter with his uncles who does not like those who have magic. he put sirius to azkaban, being one of the bosses of wizamet, something of the ministry, to later use it and the whole plot that comes.), my characters that I liked were (fleur and her sister, daphne and her sister. luna lovewot something pro ahi, brotherhood: it started as unbearable but changed while maturing, beloved by her role as villain who did it for the contract that he had married, more voldemor corrupting his mind, among others more). * "attack on titans": rare fights of big bugs, annoying protagonist, mikasa was always taking care of him, but his cold shoulder because he does not like me to take care of him, he did not deserve it, "history, among other girls", which They could have been from the harem, interesting anime and novel, but the protagonist spoils everything. * "hischol dxd": anime and novel most viewed by anyone who loves fanservi, the characters, good plot, developments too, rare character who is looking for harem, but does not know how to handle the feelings of the girls, the same girls they have to take the first step, if not the protagonist is still all silly and depressed by his first love that killed him xD, good characters where we have: the character I like to recommend for the haren / faction: Raynare (she is a bit sadistic but she did what she did for love with azazel and also only has a superiority complex easy to eliminate, it could be like your secret operations of black operations, when you know that doing something is not the right thing in public so you do it in secret, and you could have the two that accompany it as a plus) Sona (the woman who moves her lenses xD, she is a great strategist) Tsubaki (bellesa fria) (idk she great, good swordswoman, back in beauty of sona) Aika (in the light novel she became a very good magician, but I do not remember her name, if it is not so t aika, it is that girl with glasses who was a pervert in the issei class) Murayama and katase (those two girls in the class where the trio spied, the ones with swords) Gabriel (could fix the gods system) Grayfia (good warrior maiden and ice mage) Venelana (sexy and probably could be the director of meetings and things at official parties, past noble cause) Serafall (maou, to calm the other factions, and I like their childishness, others might say that it is annoying, but that is what makes it different from others and more accessible) Ingvild leviatan (she can literally control dragons, or she joins you or you kill her, because she could literally control mc if she is strong enough) (Obviously all the MC in this world) Rias (the destructive power is Op if it is well trained, it can be mimamda, but with good "spanking" and training you can have a more pleasant "Rias") Akeno (he is a little nephilim, neither sacred or demonic elements are his weakness, sadica xD) Asia (a healer = many think that it is useless and not necessary, I say that it is the main piece in a combat. Better when it has a dragon as a companion xD) Ravel (Phoenix tears, good secretary) Xenovia (durandal> good swordswoman, just teach her common sense xD) Koneko (nekoshou devil op, they were experimenting with their sister for a reason, only sairaorg was op and I only use touki) Kuroka (same as her sister, only because of the experiments, she is no longer a pure nekomata, good choice for nobility) Kiba (I don't care, any character in dxd who prefers to train technique over power is respectable because training power is easier than perfecting a technique. (In her feminine form she is a beauty xD, if you have seen the illustration of the novel)) issei (I put it too, because it can be good to have him as a subordinate, that if. first I would be to take out the pervert, by his case I make him an obedient butler xD, and of course he yes is a woman much best) Gasper (friend, vampire who can stop time, this law trap needs a gender change) Rossewaise (he is one of the best magicians in valhalla, according to the light novel. Also a good secretary) Leviana reni (I don't know much about her story, because I haven't read the novel, but I do know something, because I read a few paragraphs where they put her as a good magician and that she has a "sacre gear", I don't know if it's true, but It would be good to have her as a wife and part of your nobility) yasaka (strong yokai, I have never seen her put in her nobility by any fanfic who is from xdx, she is also a good ruler, a good wife, among other things) tiamat (dragon of chaos, if you have it in your nobility, you have a powerful dragon) yubellana (from the riser phenex nobility, good magician like akeno hajima, plus the others who are in her riser phenex nobility, have their potential) etc.
the story development is good but they are a few grammar mistakes but can be ignored overall a very good book for those who prefer a fast paced story and is a wish fulfillment .
Sad to see the story was dropped, this story was interesting while it lasted and it got me hooked. I never minded the gender end because I thought Multiverse right, in all of the infinite possibilities, there should be one where Naruto was born a girl right? Anyway keep up the good work
Props to author dishing out chap after chap. But this is literally terrible. I tried to keep reading but it didn’t get any better. I’m pretty confused how the reviews are so high.
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An interesting novel. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..... . . . ... .. .
Why did I rate this Five stars? Simple, I had never read a harem fanfic, that made me cry, that made me love, that made me hate, that made me smile, like this one did. The Grammar is a problem, as well as the pov changes. But I can't judge him on that, As My story has similar problems, I wish you luck Author.
An interesting novel. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..... . . . ... .. .
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An interesting novel. . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..... . . . ... .. .
Interesting and very nice, good story and nice development ........,......... .. . . . . . . ..... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...
It has been a very pleasant experience...............,.........., ................................... ..................................,...........
the story is nice enough but the grammatical errors take away any immersion you have on the story........................................................
although I only read a bit of it but I can say that it's a wonderful fanfic though there is a few grammary error but it still readable.i recommend this to people who like Naruto fanfic.
El desarrollo de la historia es bueno pero hay algunos errores gramaticals. ...........................................................................................
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I like female Naruko fics, I also like ho the stoy develops, I feel like youre doing a great job, and I can't wait to see what you hve planned next
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Very interesting concept you have here, very rare to see a female Naruko mc from our world reincarnated fanfic, I am looking forward to more chapters in the future.
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Umm... the author like a to rant a lot lol, but at least he puts everything in the other volume. it also seems like people don't understand not read whats in that volume to prepare for the story. Not the authors fault, it's yours I rate this give stars simply because I continue to love it.
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Yandere himata. Chill mc. Mc that cares for no one but the people who come to love him. Honestly there are words that seem out of place, that makes people misunderstand, and look at it in a disgusting way, this story is very cool and original, like an si in a fanfic with a bashing sakura and a bashing Sasuke, my advice is to just endure through it Im not even vmfinsihed with it yet and it hasn't disappointed me nothing has disappointed me b the short chapters, Id say about 500 to 700.
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My story is not the best when it comes to grammar and long sentencing, but it is something that I am trying to improve, when you read expect the chapters to be short, but have good development and a faster release paste. Slow beginning, but will have his harass moments in the future. Mc is not evil, and will only kill when he has no choice but to kill, he is basically a chill Mc. hope you like it if you don't you can always drop
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