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Could only read like 40% before dropping. Too much System nonsense, that done 0 for story development. so yeah, if you like to read gamer style Lorem ipsum in gamer style, it might be something for you.
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the story itself is very good with an elaborate and inclusive plot. plenty of oc's and changes from original storyline along with very realistic characters. there are some bad things like slow pacing and minor grammar problems but overall this is a fantastic story.
It’s all good it’s you take a lot of time describing thing that doesn’t matter and in the end it gave the impression that is too much info dump and it gets boring for me especially it like you go out of subject between important info
Очень скучно почему потому что в книге очень много ненужных информации очен очень много из за этого я дропаю и советую другим!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Очень скучно почему потому что в книге очень много ненужных информации очен очень много из за этого я дропаю и советую другим!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
В начале было интересно но потом автор начал писать слишком много воды из за которой интерес пропал полностью, я не могу понять почему ты пишешь очень много ненужных информации которые 99% читателей забудут ?и это так скучно!!!!
Ótimo trabalho amigo, sou br tbm e amo fanfic! O link do discord expirou, vê se resolve na moral msm. Hj em dia é muito difícil achar um br q ama fanfics e escrevem
like the story hopefully you'll continue it :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Me gusta la idea de un sistema en juego de tronos, el problema que le encuento a tu fanfic es que le pusiste muchas cosas al sistema y lo hace casi imposible de leerse. Muchas habilidades y pasivas salidas de la nada. Ubieras hecho que siguiera una rama en especifico. Es mejor un sistema simple como el de mount and blade warban + algunas habilidades manuales.
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first few chapters were good but it quickly devolved, i started disliking it when our mc was getting all soppy and lovey with his siblings, his parents dont love him and his siblings are also incredibly talented and will be a threat to his claim of the throne. i started hating this novel when he made friends with some targeryen girl that for some reason king robert just left alive, he uses observation to see her thoughts and what would you know- she wants to murder everyone, so naturally our intelligent mc gives her a system and basically falls in love with her overnight and were expected to understand. i started hating the author when he spent half a chapter making our mc sing avicci in a brothel, i dont know how to explain this so ill be blunt and rude, were here for cool fights, court politics and dragons, not immersion breaking slice of life. ill give this a high score but i really dislike it
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Writing Quality 3* Not the best but definitely above the webnovel average; readable. Story Development 2* Seems like it's not GoT/ASOIAF are he mc trusts everyone and goes around telling secrets. Character Design 2* the author trust to make him seem manipulative but from all his stupid decisions we can tell he's just naive and foolishly trusting (in his miniscule abilities). Updating Stability 1* if you're here to read consistently just leave the updates were slow a year ago and they're still slow. World Background 2* This author has made the same mistake as most fanfiction authors would. Simply because it's a story that already exist doesn't mean you don't describe this in detail; geography, world powers, territories, culture. (not to mention the works been done for you just head to the wiki) Overall 2.0* However minus 1* Reason: mc tells random that he's from another world for absolutely no reason it's the reason I dropped. New Overall 1* Tips for improvement: Grammar has minimal mistakes, describe the world more it's very important, your character is the type i hate 2nd most the kind who THINKS that they're smart, The pace of the story is too slow when compared to his strength either speed the pace or nerf him both are kinds impossible at this point, Update more and do it consistently.
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Really miss this!! Author are you going to update this anytime soon? or are you gonna finish your other fanfics?
"A game of ice and fire hmm... That's what they're calling it now?" Tyrion says as he leans over the cyvasse board pondering. "Truly uncle,my life a game?" *chuckle's* " those are just mummer tales, the only game there is..." "Is the Game of Thrones" finishes Tyrion "Checkmate"
Want more! This is simply the best game of thrones fanfic, and the one with most potential I have ever seen!!
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Writing quality, world background, and character design are all really good, however, the updates are extremely slow, as of the recent chapters, the author has had the habit of dragging chapters on with world building, or 'history lessons' as someone as already mentioned in the comments. This has partly ruined it for me, as slow chapters (alot of dialogue or huge 'history lessons') + slow updates can tend to turn alot of people off from reading. I have a feeling this novel would be one of the best ASOIAF FF'S on this website if there were at least 25 chapters. but beside all that, as i said this novel in my opinion is up there with ASOIAF/GOT fan fictions, and i can't wait to read future chapters
Sorry! Just a shameless writer reviewing his own story. 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅 Though I wish to thank everyone that have read it. 😉👍 For those who didn’t like it... sorry, I really hope you find what you are looking for. Suggestions and doubts are always welcomed. Bye!
Great story, Interesting World building, Awesome characters and Character development, Very active And polite author, Lots of Potential and long Chapters. Would recommend.
Could only read like 40% before dropping. Too much System nonsense, that done 0 for story development. so yeah, if you like to read gamer style Lorem ipsum in gamer style, it might be something for you.
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the story itself is very good with an elaborate and inclusive plot. plenty of oc's and changes from original storyline along with very realistic characters. there are some bad things like slow pacing and minor grammar problems but overall this is a fantastic story.
It’s all good it’s you take a lot of time describing thing that doesn’t matter and in the end it gave the impression that is too much info dump and it gets boring for me especially it like you go out of subject between important info
Очень скучно почему потому что в книге очень много ненужных информации очен очень много из за этого я дропаю и советую другим!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Очень скучно почему потому что в книге очень много ненужных информации очен очень много из за этого я дропаю и советую другим!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
В начале было интересно но потом автор начал писать слишком много воды из за которой интерес пропал полностью, я не могу понять почему ты пишешь очень много ненужных информации которые 99% читателей забудут ?и это так скучно!!!!
Ótimo trabalho amigo, sou br tbm e amo fanfic! O link do discord expirou, vê se resolve na moral msm. Hj em dia é muito difícil achar um br q ama fanfics e escrevem
like the story hopefully you'll continue it :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
....................... 🖤🖤🖤 ...................... .......... 🖤🖤🖤 ............................. 🖤🖤🖤 ..... ................... 🖤🖤🖤 ........
Me gusta la idea de un sistema en juego de tronos, el problema que le encuento a tu fanfic es que le pusiste muchas cosas al sistema y lo hace casi imposible de leerse. Muchas habilidades y pasivas salidas de la nada. Ubieras hecho que siguiera una rama en especifico. Es mejor un sistema simple como el de mount and blade warban + algunas habilidades manuales.
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first few chapters were good but it quickly devolved, i started disliking it when our mc was getting all soppy and lovey with his siblings, his parents dont love him and his siblings are also incredibly talented and will be a threat to his claim of the throne. i started hating this novel when he made friends with some targeryen girl that for some reason king robert just left alive, he uses observation to see her thoughts and what would you know- she wants to murder everyone, so naturally our intelligent mc gives her a system and basically falls in love with her overnight and were expected to understand. i started hating the author when he spent half a chapter making our mc sing avicci in a brothel, i dont know how to explain this so ill be blunt and rude, were here for cool fights, court politics and dragons, not immersion breaking slice of life. ill give this a high score but i really dislike it
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ネタバレを明かす I like the story ....................................................................................................................................................
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Writing Quality 3* Not the best but definitely above the webnovel average; readable. Story Development 2* Seems like it's not GoT/ASOIAF are he mc trusts everyone and goes around telling secrets. Character Design 2* the author trust to make him seem manipulative but from all his stupid decisions we can tell he's just naive and foolishly trusting (in his miniscule abilities). Updating Stability 1* if you're here to read consistently just leave the updates were slow a year ago and they're still slow. World Background 2* This author has made the same mistake as most fanfiction authors would. Simply because it's a story that already exist doesn't mean you don't describe this in detail; geography, world powers, territories, culture. (not to mention the works been done for you just head to the wiki) Overall 2.0* However minus 1* Reason: mc tells random that he's from another world for absolutely no reason it's the reason I dropped. New Overall 1* Tips for improvement: Grammar has minimal mistakes, describe the world more it's very important, your character is the type i hate 2nd most the kind who THINKS that they're smart, The pace of the story is too slow when compared to his strength either speed the pace or nerf him both are kinds impossible at this point, Update more and do it consistently.
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Really miss this!! Author are you going to update this anytime soon? or are you gonna finish your other fanfics?
"A game of ice and fire hmm... That's what they're calling it now?" Tyrion says as he leans over the cyvasse board pondering. "Truly uncle,my life a game?" *chuckle's* " those are just mummer tales, the only game there is..." "Is the Game of Thrones" finishes Tyrion "Checkmate"
Want more! This is simply the best game of thrones fanfic, and the one with most potential I have ever seen!!
Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More! Please More!
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Writing quality, world background, and character design are all really good, however, the updates are extremely slow, as of the recent chapters, the author has had the habit of dragging chapters on with world building, or 'history lessons' as someone as already mentioned in the comments. This has partly ruined it for me, as slow chapters (alot of dialogue or huge 'history lessons') + slow updates can tend to turn alot of people off from reading. I have a feeling this novel would be one of the best ASOIAF FF'S on this website if there were at least 25 chapters. but beside all that, as i said this novel in my opinion is up there with ASOIAF/GOT fan fictions, and i can't wait to read future chapters
Sorry! Just a shameless writer reviewing his own story. 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅 Though I wish to thank everyone that have read it. 😉👍 For those who didn’t like it... sorry, I really hope you find what you are looking for. Suggestions and doubts are always welcomed. Bye!
Great story, Interesting World building, Awesome characters and Character development, Very active And polite author, Lots of Potential and long Chapters. Would recommend.