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Ne encanta como se desarrolla esta historia, por favor querido autor sube más capítulos gracias y me gustan los protagonistas como en hace todo lo posible para enamorar a su dulce esposa 1😃😄😄😄😘🙃😉😁😀😀😃😃😃😄🙃🙃😚🥰😇😊😚
A really nice story . loved it . i started this book yesterday already done half way through. thank you author. ;)
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at first i was a little hesitant to read .vut it turns out it is amazing. good story development. i wish some of the characters didnt have similar names. i had to go back and re read sections just to keep it straight. overall very good.
Hey, I'm Ms. Jornaliza, an editor at Goodnovel, a writing platform that helps authors get a reliable and long-term income through their books. We are currently approaching authors who have a nice plot, synopsis, writing structure, style, and strong characters to sign their stories with us. If your story is approved, you will be receiving an attractive monthly update bonus and premium coins share income monthly till your contract with us lasts. If you are interested in joining us email me at msjornaliza.goodnovel@gmaill@gmail.com
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An amazing story that does not disappoint. I hope it all goes smooth, and the releases continue regularly because I look forward to each chapter. 👍
Chapters are updated very Slowly , we have to wait very very long . Hope so the writer will understand fortunately and proceed . we’ll wait for it
The story line is okay. But your grammar and the arrangements of the words is bad. Also you have mixed up the chapters and put it wrongly. It would be great if someone want to edit this novel. It's a pity if the novel have a great story line but the writing quality is not good.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your wonderful novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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Finally there is an English version too, this novel is highly recommended for all readers ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ spirit pretty sis 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
I so much this story..💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
very interesting story. mandatory to be saved in the library and highly recommended. passion for the author. stay healthy and keep writing well
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Very nice story. Tiara and Yohan so sweet. Love with the CEO's attitude. So much love and adorable. Great job! Hope Author always success! Gbu.
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really cool story and interesting, I'm waiting for the next chapter update. really impatient 😊😊❤😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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As much as i want to enjoy this novel, it needs lots of revisions. There’s so many grammar mistakes that i can’t understand the story. Misspelling and improper use of pronouns makes it hard to figure out which twin we are rooting for and the fact their names are so similar doesn’t help.
authors your story is very nice,but please can you fix the grammar...I really appreciate your story but some time got confused on reading....
I'm glad I started reading this novel, the characters are developing and the story is off to a great start. I wish I could get more bonuses daily.
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The plot Of the book is good but the reading is hard to understand since it seem some time the main character is a he then is turned in a she so im confused on some of the words that is being used in the story since some things dont make sense and is hard to read. i think the story should be proof read before being posted, but good plot of a story.
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the story is good, interesting ... waiting for the continuation, spirit of updating !! [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The CEO and his arrogance, i'm really into this kind of story. Hate turn to deep love is so amazing imagination for some romantic Authors. And I am one of your fan, Author. l love the way you describe every part in your story. Your have to add this novel into your library, guys. I promise you won't regret it. Keep writing Author, can't wait for the next chapter.👍🤗🤗
This is new story from author , the plots every chapter by chapter is so good . and I very interesting to read and recommendations this novel to you .Keep fighting Thor !!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
the story is really cool! At first I was just trying to read it, but it was very exciting !. the spirit of the update continues, Author !!! I'm waiting for the next story!
هًًًًًًاًًًًًًًذًًًًًًًاًًًًًًًً مًًًًًًًاًًًًًًًحًًًًًًًلًًًًًًوًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًُِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِْْْْْ
I am just reading it out but I already fell in love with the story. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Ne encanta como se desarrolla esta historia, por favor querido autor sube más capítulos gracias y me gustan los protagonistas como en hace todo lo posible para enamorar a su dulce esposa 1😃😄😄😄😘🙃😉😁😀😀😃😃😃😄🙃🙃😚🥰😇😊😚
A really nice story . loved it . i started this book yesterday already done half way through. thank you author. ;)
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at first i was a little hesitant to read .vut it turns out it is amazing. good story development. i wish some of the characters didnt have similar names. i had to go back and re read sections just to keep it straight. overall very good.
Hey, I'm Ms. Jornaliza, an editor at Goodnovel, a writing platform that helps authors get a reliable and long-term income through their books. We are currently approaching authors who have a nice plot, synopsis, writing structure, style, and strong characters to sign their stories with us. If your story is approved, you will be receiving an attractive monthly update bonus and premium coins share income monthly till your contract with us lasts. If you are interested in joining us email me at msjornaliza.goodnovel@gmaill@gmail.com
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An amazing story that does not disappoint. I hope it all goes smooth, and the releases continue regularly because I look forward to each chapter. 👍
Chapters are updated very Slowly , we have to wait very very long . Hope so the writer will understand fortunately and proceed . we’ll wait for it
The story line is okay. But your grammar and the arrangements of the words is bad. Also you have mixed up the chapters and put it wrongly. It would be great if someone want to edit this novel. It's a pity if the novel have a great story line but the writing quality is not good.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your wonderful novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
ネタバレを明かす Finally there is an English version too, this novel is highly recommended for all readers ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ spirit pretty sis 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
I so much this story..💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖
very interesting story. mandatory to be saved in the library and highly recommended. passion for the author. stay healthy and keep writing well
ネタバレを明かす Very nice story. Tiara and Yohan so sweet. Love with the CEO's attitude. So much love and adorable. Great job! Hope Author always success! Gbu.
ネタバレを明かす really cool story and interesting, I'm waiting for the next chapter update. really impatient 😊😊❤😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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As much as i want to enjoy this novel, it needs lots of revisions. There’s so many grammar mistakes that i can’t understand the story. Misspelling and improper use of pronouns makes it hard to figure out which twin we are rooting for and the fact their names are so similar doesn’t help.
authors your story is very nice,but please can you fix the grammar...I really appreciate your story but some time got confused on reading....
I'm glad I started reading this novel, the characters are developing and the story is off to a great start. I wish I could get more bonuses daily.
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The plot Of the book is good but the reading is hard to understand since it seem some time the main character is a he then is turned in a she so im confused on some of the words that is being used in the story since some things dont make sense and is hard to read. i think the story should be proof read before being posted, but good plot of a story.
Good story 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
the story is good, interesting ... waiting for the continuation, spirit of updating !! [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The CEO and his arrogance, i'm really into this kind of story. Hate turn to deep love is so amazing imagination for some romantic Authors. And I am one of your fan, Author. l love the way you describe every part in your story. Your have to add this novel into your library, guys. I promise you won't regret it. Keep writing Author, can't wait for the next chapter.👍🤗🤗
This is new story from author , the plots every chapter by chapter is so good . and I very interesting to read and recommendations this novel to you .Keep fighting Thor !!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
the story is really cool! At first I was just trying to read it, but it was very exciting !. the spirit of the update continues, Author !!! I'm waiting for the next story!
هًًًًًًاًًًًًًًذًًًًًًًاًًًًًًًً مًًًًًًًاًًًًًًًحًًًًًًًلًًًًًًوًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًًُِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِِْْْْْ
I am just reading it out but I already fell in love with the story. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️