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Rudem
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Why all of those authors love to spoil your own work? The first thing that bothered me was the big difference between the two author's works, Krune was a pacifist who hated killing, here we have 2 psychopaths who don't care how many people will die if it benefits them. I was just disappointed that the author just made more of the same, but it's okay for me. What irritated me deeply was the mature MCs simply acting like children, the worst thing is seeing them interact with children, that's disgusting. It's disgusting to know that they met a 12 year old child, watched her grow up and even though they are countless years older than her, they end up having a relationship with this child... I expected that he would only introduce any kind of romance after a long time where they would meet much older people, I believed that Roan would not end up with anyone or with someone as old as him but not with a brat girl, that was disgusting to me.

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DaoistIQIJAX

Overall the story was going fantastic after qia comes the plot was forced and the novel was dropped Alas such a good novel

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Arekaru
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First story in a long time that truly grabbed my attention. Can’t wait to get to my next chapter ^_^

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Elymas_2784

Love this novel. Definitely one of the best novels. It is a perfect blend of cultivation and comedy. The writing quality is also superb. Will post a more detailed review after I've caught up to the latest chapters.

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Riphine_Kahindo

this book is the best death and me ( Rean and Roan ) they are very good characters they are funny exciting and I love their brotherly love 😂🤧 if you want a book action filled ,OP mcs , no harem and some comedy ,not too cocky MC they are average cocky fun and exciting this is the book if you want some teaser just like this comment you'll get it but overal I've been reading this story on free noval 😭😘 😘 it's very very good and now I'm here on webnoval I've opened 4accounts just to read it I'm so happy I read this book till now

2mth
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Aura_0862

I’m going to give it a 5 start review. This is one of my favourite novels on webnovel. It’s so funny, I can’t stop reading, have got into trouble several times because I was laughing to hard….at 2am in the morning. Thanks author.

2mth
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the_janitor000

Two protagonists? I'm out...................................................................................................................

3mth
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Black_reaper

I dont write many reviews but i have to now. This is a great book!! I am caught up and the world view and character development is amazing. I especially like the bits of humor that the author still puts in making me laugh everytime. It has also been steadly updated since the book has been released. Thank you author for this masterpiece. I will keep supporting you!!!

6mth
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Sage_TC

l loved the story, still do . Sure the planet was destroyed and that sucked but l kept reading and l wasn't disappointed and l don't wanna spoil but eventually most of the side stories will get resolved one way or the other. you'll find that the planets destruction was a creative and necessary plot devices to keep the story going and exiting . lt only gets better from there.l wouldn't change single thing in the story. Support the author❤️

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xiaoSuss

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8mth
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Renz_007

I read chapter 2216 of death and me, it is said that they are in peak stage of elemental-space realm but after I reach chapter 2266 it said they are in Late and not only that after the free continent war their destiny points is 300k+ but after the communication system in demon beast territory arc their destiny points has go down in 200k+ even though they didn't spend anything and they are supposed to get destiny points in communication system in demon beast territory arc after all they changed the destiny of the demon beast,human and spirits, I know that their destiny range is 4m km but still they should at least get some not lose some Please pay attention to your novel so we don't get confused

8mth
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DaoistGAZW0Z

World explodes - Millions or Billions die - both of the mcs don't really care or change because of that. What a great story. Oh, what the side characters who are from set world and literary lost everything in their early twenties do not seem to show any sort of long term effect (longer than one chapter) in personality. Wow amazing. My problem is not even that the author basically threw away around 300 chapter of setup and plot for one event that changes everything. I think it is a good idea to do something unpredictable. It's just that the character reaction to the situation is literary so outlandishly stupid that i can't read this anymore. Like there has to be some change in character or some dark thoughts about this situation, but in the story they just continue like nothing happened. Oh, yeah this new planet enslaves all humans and has some celestial spot, where we have to go, but Malaka you can't slack of with your training hahahaha, while qia and calina are just out here like, I just lost my parents and everyone I ever knew, but I love rean/roan and still have kentucky to cuddle so it doesn't matter. I wouldn't even be this upset if something changed like anything about the characters, but there is nothing and even the oh so compassionate rean, just sighs and moves on. No emotion in sight after spending 24 years of finally getting his emotions back from the system. Could be just as dead inside as death himself if he reacts like that. Anyway, with that being said, I have no hope of character development or any sort of payoff after everyone probably magically comes back to life, since apparently nobody cared to begin with.

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AzuraNight

I gotta say…funny as heck. The concept is fantastic and the two boys are just a pair of funny idjits. It’s so cute. 🤣🤣🤣

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RESHI_RAM

Loved is that a wisp, but needed something to read after a reached all chapter that were out a couple years ago. This was a fun to read and I loved it. Keep up the good work.

9mth
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Mhay_xxi

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9mth
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Cindy_lou

I really loved this book at first but Qia for some reason really irritates me , i don't know why but from the moment she was introduced my interest in the book died. It is a graet book though. Just lost interest

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Vishnu_Bajpai

Binged till 2303 and now taking a break. Amazing novel with good character development with time. Sad about some deaths. All I want want is when the two halves are about to be joined , they can only be joined with a Brotherly AFFECTION HUG. GG

9mth
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Yamach_David1

Its a good story ,you will definitely try to read more chapter after reading chapter 1⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘🍀⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘

9mth
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Colin_Schmidt

why is there such a big plot hole with the transcendent tears, they got them in the arc with the special feather and then got them again for the 'first' time. the same goes for the upgrade for the fusion of divine, soul and star power they already had that possibility and later they 'rediscovered' that

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9mth
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Benkingz1

you have a very good story but I think you are over explaining things, for example you don't have to tell us that the babies in the woman's belly were rean and death till after they were born, there is also no need to explain why they can't understand the luck their mother was speaking. give your audience the opportunity to have their own imagination. in truth your story line is good

10mth
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Cat_Tip
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Terrible writing quality ⭐️ Good updates ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ story development ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ character development ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ world background ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Honestly the story switch’s for first to third to narrator commentary to much, which takes away for the writing quality, this story is pretty old so it’s follow the old cringy reincarnation troupe, the characters development is average and sometimes the names get mixed up, the world background is average from what’s I’ve seen but I feel like the author gets confused and switches around places which is kinda understandable having over 2k chapters which is another thing this story is being stretch for way to long.

10mth
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Joseph_Treshock

okay this is another review so there will be spoilers but I'm on 2034 that's the chapter I'm on right now I've noticed in a couple of these chapters so far especially this one they already got the tears several chapters before and yet it's brought up acting like they didn't do it I don't know if the author isn't paying attention or is simply forgetting what he's writing but this is a serious problem because then it makes the events of the chapters you have where you already have the four tears cuz you already got them for the Golden feather thing in a few chapters beforehand so the author must have forgotten this and then I've noticed every time a new energy or conversion or whatever is added to the system at the end of the chapter one of the characters goes oh to not cause any confusion we're going to call this blah blah blah energy like you don't need to break the fourth wall to tell us that just simply change the name of it and carry on so overall this is okay but it's extremely annoying because the author is literally forgetting what he's putting in his own book

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10mth
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bloodreaperXD

the novel is very well thought out. the characters are very likable and the plot has good development. while the writing quality isn't that greatest, I haven't read past 500 chaps so it may have improved. the concept of the novel is very engaging [img=Smug]

10mth
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Joseph_Treshock

I'm just having a problem with the brothers still fighting back and forth it's honestly a pain it's quite annoying no I'm not going to lie I'm not even at the thousand chapter but I'm getting there but they're still fighting every chance they get like it's a life and death scenario when it started by by one of them grabbing onto the person's leg after the first protagonist died then the death spirit or reaper came to take them and wind up grabbing on to them and being resurrected in another world and yet still continuing to have a petty childlike squabble it's not even cute or funny at this point it's honestly annoying now I'm going to read more obviously I'm going to read all the way to the updates but I'm aiming to see if this changes I may update this comment if it does but if it doesn't it's quite annoying and I don't like the fact that you spend about 500 chapters on a planet and then destroyed it even though you brought it back later on doesn't change the fact that you made a bunch of useless missions and post on things for the system and it absolutely meant nothing it's honestly ridiculous for the two protagonist one was a thousand-year-old death spirit or older either way who had seen countless existences and guided countless souls to the afterlife and then the other one was a 30-year-old person who finally decided they wanted to live right before they died and have emotion and yet the two of them were dragged in and given a second chance and instead of you making them embrace that chance in the first half you made them constantly fight with each other like small children it's absolutely ridiculous they were both adults honest feedback

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10mth
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Aaron_Owusu

Book is rlly well written but since the title is death and me I Thought death aka roan would be kind of a secondary protagonist but he seems to take most of the spotlight

10mth
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Black_Munarch

It was good at first but after ch 400 it became boring

10mth
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Asc_EIf
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OMGGG I FORGOT ABOUT THIS NOVEL!!!! IT WAS SO FRICKEN GOOD!! IM AT THE PART WHERE THEY'RE TRANSPORTED TO A DIFFERENT PLANET CAUSE THEIR PLANET GOT DESTROYED.

11mth
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MrTurnt
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All these reviews and not a single synopsis or summary. The authors “just read the first ch” is arrogant and annoying I have literally no idea what the book is about and no way to find out so no I will not just “read the first chapter”

11mth
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Christopher_Chege

I like reading the novel yes, but i dont know why after i crossed 1600 chapters or so, things get being repeated constantly *First, i remember that the twins got the iresdent tears, the material for the 5th? star body cultivation realm from the spirits with wind affinity. Later, in the novel, the author mentions they dont have it. So they again get it by buying from the lakure race space time expert. Second, when the twins upgraded the dimensional realm to 5th level, they had a new option to fuse star,soul and divine energy for 1000000 d.p. But later, again the author mentions they see the option again for the first time! Another, is when the twins crossed void tempering they acquired the ability to fuse their elements with space power because their affinities are of the highest quality and since space power naturally is compatible with all elements. Now, the author makes it so that the twin act like theyve discovered they can do so because of their cultivation being close to elemental space realm(when the dimesional realm starts turning into a planet). * I really hope this doesnt go on

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11mth
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Herowolf_Herobrine

The story was good, until chapter 540 where everything just ended.

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Rudem
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Why all of those authors love to spoil your own work? The first thing that bothered me was the big difference between the two author's works, Krune was a pacifist who hated killing, here we have 2 psychopaths who don't care how many people will die if it benefits them. I was just disappointed that the author just made more of the same, but it's okay for me. What irritated me deeply was the mature MCs simply acting like children, the worst thing is seeing them interact with children, that's disgusting. It's disgusting to know that they met a 12 year old child, watched her grow up and even though they are countless years older than her, they end up having a relationship with this child... I expected that he would only introduce any kind of romance after a long time where they would meet much older people, I believed that Roan would not end up with anyone or with someone as old as him but not with a brat girl, that was disgusting to me.

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22d
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DaoistIQIJAX

Overall the story was going fantastic after qia comes the plot was forced and the novel was dropped Alas such a good novel

1mth
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Arekaru
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First story in a long time that truly grabbed my attention. Can’t wait to get to my next chapter ^_^

1mth
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Elymas_2784

Love this novel. Definitely one of the best novels. It is a perfect blend of cultivation and comedy. The writing quality is also superb. Will post a more detailed review after I've caught up to the latest chapters.

2mth
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Riphine_Kahindo

this book is the best death and me ( Rean and Roan ) they are very good characters they are funny exciting and I love their brotherly love 😂🤧 if you want a book action filled ,OP mcs , no harem and some comedy ,not too cocky MC they are average cocky fun and exciting this is the book if you want some teaser just like this comment you'll get it but overal I've been reading this story on free noval 😭😘 😘 it's very very good and now I'm here on webnoval I've opened 4accounts just to read it I'm so happy I read this book till now

2mth
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Aura_0862

I’m going to give it a 5 start review. This is one of my favourite novels on webnovel. It’s so funny, I can’t stop reading, have got into trouble several times because I was laughing to hard….at 2am in the morning. Thanks author.

2mth
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the_janitor000

Two protagonists? I'm out...................................................................................................................

3mth
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Black_reaper

I dont write many reviews but i have to now. This is a great book!! I am caught up and the world view and character development is amazing. I especially like the bits of humor that the author still puts in making me laugh everytime. It has also been steadly updated since the book has been released. Thank you author for this masterpiece. I will keep supporting you!!!

6mth
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Sage_TC

l loved the story, still do . Sure the planet was destroyed and that sucked but l kept reading and l wasn't disappointed and l don't wanna spoil but eventually most of the side stories will get resolved one way or the other. you'll find that the planets destruction was a creative and necessary plot devices to keep the story going and exiting . lt only gets better from there.l wouldn't change single thing in the story. Support the author❤️

7mth
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xiaoSuss

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8mth
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Renz_007

I read chapter 2216 of death and me, it is said that they are in peak stage of elemental-space realm but after I reach chapter 2266 it said they are in Late and not only that after the free continent war their destiny points is 300k+ but after the communication system in demon beast territory arc their destiny points has go down in 200k+ even though they didn't spend anything and they are supposed to get destiny points in communication system in demon beast territory arc after all they changed the destiny of the demon beast,human and spirits, I know that their destiny range is 4m km but still they should at least get some not lose some Please pay attention to your novel so we don't get confused

8mth
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DaoistGAZW0Z

World explodes - Millions or Billions die - both of the mcs don't really care or change because of that. What a great story. Oh, what the side characters who are from set world and literary lost everything in their early twenties do not seem to show any sort of long term effect (longer than one chapter) in personality. Wow amazing. My problem is not even that the author basically threw away around 300 chapter of setup and plot for one event that changes everything. I think it is a good idea to do something unpredictable. It's just that the character reaction to the situation is literary so outlandishly stupid that i can't read this anymore. Like there has to be some change in character or some dark thoughts about this situation, but in the story they just continue like nothing happened. Oh, yeah this new planet enslaves all humans and has some celestial spot, where we have to go, but Malaka you can't slack of with your training hahahaha, while qia and calina are just out here like, I just lost my parents and everyone I ever knew, but I love rean/roan and still have kentucky to cuddle so it doesn't matter. I wouldn't even be this upset if something changed like anything about the characters, but there is nothing and even the oh so compassionate rean, just sighs and moves on. No emotion in sight after spending 24 years of finally getting his emotions back from the system. Could be just as dead inside as death himself if he reacts like that. Anyway, with that being said, I have no hope of character development or any sort of payoff after everyone probably magically comes back to life, since apparently nobody cared to begin with.

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8mth
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AzuraNight

I gotta say…funny as heck. The concept is fantastic and the two boys are just a pair of funny idjits. It’s so cute. 🤣🤣🤣

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8mth
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RESHI_RAM

Loved is that a wisp, but needed something to read after a reached all chapter that were out a couple years ago. This was a fun to read and I loved it. Keep up the good work.

9mth
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Mhay_xxi

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9mth
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Cindy_lou

I really loved this book at first but Qia for some reason really irritates me , i don't know why but from the moment she was introduced my interest in the book died. It is a graet book though. Just lost interest

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9mth
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Vishnu_Bajpai

Binged till 2303 and now taking a break. Amazing novel with good character development with time. Sad about some deaths. All I want want is when the two halves are about to be joined , they can only be joined with a Brotherly AFFECTION HUG. GG

9mth
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Yamach_David1

Its a good story ,you will definitely try to read more chapter after reading chapter 1⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘🍀⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘⚘

9mth
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Colin_Schmidt

why is there such a big plot hole with the transcendent tears, they got them in the arc with the special feather and then got them again for the 'first' time. the same goes for the upgrade for the fusion of divine, soul and star power they already had that possibility and later they 'rediscovered' that

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9mth
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Benkingz1

you have a very good story but I think you are over explaining things, for example you don't have to tell us that the babies in the woman's belly were rean and death till after they were born, there is also no need to explain why they can't understand the luck their mother was speaking. give your audience the opportunity to have their own imagination. in truth your story line is good

10mth
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Cat_Tip
LV 14 Badge

Terrible writing quality ⭐️ Good updates ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ story development ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ character development ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ world background ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Honestly the story switch’s for first to third to narrator commentary to much, which takes away for the writing quality, this story is pretty old so it’s follow the old cringy reincarnation troupe, the characters development is average and sometimes the names get mixed up, the world background is average from what’s I’ve seen but I feel like the author gets confused and switches around places which is kinda understandable having over 2k chapters which is another thing this story is being stretch for way to long.

10mth
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Joseph_Treshock

okay this is another review so there will be spoilers but I'm on 2034 that's the chapter I'm on right now I've noticed in a couple of these chapters so far especially this one they already got the tears several chapters before and yet it's brought up acting like they didn't do it I don't know if the author isn't paying attention or is simply forgetting what he's writing but this is a serious problem because then it makes the events of the chapters you have where you already have the four tears cuz you already got them for the Golden feather thing in a few chapters beforehand so the author must have forgotten this and then I've noticed every time a new energy or conversion or whatever is added to the system at the end of the chapter one of the characters goes oh to not cause any confusion we're going to call this blah blah blah energy like you don't need to break the fourth wall to tell us that just simply change the name of it and carry on so overall this is okay but it's extremely annoying because the author is literally forgetting what he's putting in his own book

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10mth
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bloodreaperXD

the novel is very well thought out. the characters are very likable and the plot has good development. while the writing quality isn't that greatest, I haven't read past 500 chaps so it may have improved. the concept of the novel is very engaging [img=Smug]

10mth
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Joseph_Treshock

I'm just having a problem with the brothers still fighting back and forth it's honestly a pain it's quite annoying no I'm not going to lie I'm not even at the thousand chapter but I'm getting there but they're still fighting every chance they get like it's a life and death scenario when it started by by one of them grabbing onto the person's leg after the first protagonist died then the death spirit or reaper came to take them and wind up grabbing on to them and being resurrected in another world and yet still continuing to have a petty childlike squabble it's not even cute or funny at this point it's honestly annoying now I'm going to read more obviously I'm going to read all the way to the updates but I'm aiming to see if this changes I may update this comment if it does but if it doesn't it's quite annoying and I don't like the fact that you spend about 500 chapters on a planet and then destroyed it even though you brought it back later on doesn't change the fact that you made a bunch of useless missions and post on things for the system and it absolutely meant nothing it's honestly ridiculous for the two protagonist one was a thousand-year-old death spirit or older either way who had seen countless existences and guided countless souls to the afterlife and then the other one was a 30-year-old person who finally decided they wanted to live right before they died and have emotion and yet the two of them were dragged in and given a second chance and instead of you making them embrace that chance in the first half you made them constantly fight with each other like small children it's absolutely ridiculous they were both adults honest feedback

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10mth
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Aaron_Owusu

Book is rlly well written but since the title is death and me I Thought death aka roan would be kind of a secondary protagonist but he seems to take most of the spotlight

10mth
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Black_Munarch

It was good at first but after ch 400 it became boring

10mth
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Asc_EIf
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OMGGG I FORGOT ABOUT THIS NOVEL!!!! IT WAS SO FRICKEN GOOD!! IM AT THE PART WHERE THEY'RE TRANSPORTED TO A DIFFERENT PLANET CAUSE THEIR PLANET GOT DESTROYED.

11mth
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MrTurnt
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All these reviews and not a single synopsis or summary. The authors “just read the first ch” is arrogant and annoying I have literally no idea what the book is about and no way to find out so no I will not just “read the first chapter”

11mth
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Christopher_Chege

I like reading the novel yes, but i dont know why after i crossed 1600 chapters or so, things get being repeated constantly *First, i remember that the twins got the iresdent tears, the material for the 5th? star body cultivation realm from the spirits with wind affinity. Later, in the novel, the author mentions they dont have it. So they again get it by buying from the lakure race space time expert. Second, when the twins upgraded the dimensional realm to 5th level, they had a new option to fuse star,soul and divine energy for 1000000 d.p. But later, again the author mentions they see the option again for the first time! Another, is when the twins crossed void tempering they acquired the ability to fuse their elements with space power because their affinities are of the highest quality and since space power naturally is compatible with all elements. Now, the author makes it so that the twin act like theyve discovered they can do so because of their cultivation being close to elemental space realm(when the dimesional realm starts turning into a planet). * I really hope this doesnt go on

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Herowolf_Herobrine

The story was good, until chapter 540 where everything just ended.

1yr
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