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Cultivation Epic: Divine Godly Punisher, Armed With Imposing Systems

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作者: koladeizdavid

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    Magical

    So I'm reading thus far and all I can say is that the writing quality gets better as chapter continues. You can really determine that this novel is more than decent and readable for most readers and I commend the author for doing this. The stability of updates may not be daily but as you can see from the dates, there are couple of chapters released in a day so that is heavily compensated of those who released daily. From the beginning, things were tad long due to the fact it was wall of text by explaining the system (but some parts of it were handled pretty well like in a form of discussion or brainstorming). But its worth the patience when you go along this novel cause there are lots of character interaction and plot that unfolds. The world-building is adequate, not rushed or not slow. You can truly savor as though you're one of the adventurer in this novel! Thank you author for the job well done. I hope you continue working hard, I'll continue reading and this review shall be subjected to changes as I go along with the chapter that deemed an overall review once more!

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    Daoist201736

    So, as an enthusiastic reader of this work, i wanna support the author by reviewing his work as he had requested for it from us. 😄 Although this work deserves a solid 5 star, I don't want to make the author very happy by giving him that. My reason is because of some flaws which I would explain below. Now, my rating goes thus: Writing quality: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 I gave 4 out of 5 stars because of there are few grammatical and spelling errors in the story. With some little edits, these would disappear. However, the errors and mistakes that one would find wouldn't shatter one's submersion into the story. Updating stability: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 I gave these 5/ 5 stars because author updates everyday. Also, he could give mass release of 4-5 chapters whenever he's in the mood. XD. Story Development: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟🌟 This deserve a solid 5 star. Why? Because I love how the story is unfolding. It's entertaining and at the same time, unpredictable. Also, it is shrouded in mysteries, making it more enthralling. I am really enjoying the story progression and would defo continue to read until the end. Now, unlike some fantasy-cultivation books that have tons of cliches, making them boring and predictable, this book doesn't have cliches. No arrogant young masters and so on, if you get me. 😁 For the Cultivation aspect of the story: the Cultivation system that this story uses is truly unique. One could cultivate many realm-energies by comprehending them and harmonizing with them, becoming one with them. I like how the author made MC cultivates many energies that bestowed him with the power to manipulate and control fire and heat, ice and frost, wind and storm and many more. But what made me more exhilarated about the story were the energies never before seen in any cultivation book. So as examples, radiantforce energy which gave him the power to control light, strengthforce energy which gave him the power of Strength and Might, phantasmforce energy which gave him the power of Illusion. There are just so many to list. However, I would stop here. XD. And, another thing that excites me about this story is how the MC possesses tons of battle-physiques [all because of some good reasons which I wouldn't mention here]. These physiques allow him to battle cultivators that are higher in rank than him. However, he must slay his opponents or challengers in a minute, or he would become weakened by any of the physiques and get killed. Actually, he becomes weakened by them because the power of the physiques aren't supposed to be available to him yet. They are tremendous for him to handle and utilize. So, whenever he summons any of them, he experiences severe headaches, intense body pains and extreme fatigue. Therefore, he must eliminate his opponents before he blacks out due to the agonizing pain and splitting headache that he would suffer from using the powerful physiques. So all these that I stated was what made me love the story the more. Character design: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 I will give this 4/5 stars. My rating for this is because, in the beginning chapters of the story, MC was naive and kinda annoying. Also, he was a wimp. Anyways, this was because he actually hadn't stepped out of his uncle's mansion for long. So, he didn't really relate with other people other than his uncle, the maids and workers in the mansion who he had grown accustomed to. But stepping out of his uncle's mansion to hone himself in battle, he quickly became my favorite. The MC who is smart and intelligent quickly got used to how the Cultivation world works. So as the story progressed, I got to love MC the more because he did things that made me happy. I don't know about other readers and what they may think, but I would speak for myself. This MC is one of the best MCs that I have ever come across. I am currently at chapter 160 and I don't yet have a problem with the MC yet. How cool and amazing is that? Also, don't forget that this is an HAREM novel, but this MC doesn't think with his dick. However, he is an admirer of beauties, but who actually isn't???? So the MC's attributes include: smart, adorable, intelligent, generous, cool, then fierce and fearsome in the way that he fights, ruthless as he has killed a lot of cultivators that tried to harm him, daring and super fucking adventurous as he had struggled against high-rank cultivators for cultivation resources, artifacts and treasures. Can you imagine that? So crazy. Haha. World background: 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 🌟 This surely deserves a solid 5 star. Author really took his time to describe the world well, and everything in it. Note: when you start reading, you may find author explaining stuffs. But these stuffs aren't random useless stuffs, they are actually useful elements in his story. I guess that's just his way of writing which I feel is Descriptive/ expository writing. However, this won't break your immersion. I promise. 😉 Summary: Story is very enjoyable and exhilarating as there are lot of plot twists and stuffs that would excite and delight you. So, I would suggest that you check it out. You would definitely not be disappointed. And if you are, well... then you are looking for something else that isn't in this story. 😁 Author-San, thanks so much for this work. 👍 Do keep updating. 👌✌️

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    GoldenEyed_SkyWolf

    I have nothing to say other than it's AMAZING. Is it the Story progression? Cultivation levels? Weapons? Battle descriptions? MC's love life? Romance and Sex scenes? Suspense, Thrills and Mysteries? Basically everything in this novel is great. Although there are minor writing errors here and there, the book is still very much entertaining. Keep up the good work dear author. Don't stop writing. And don't forget to keep safe.

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    Chips_8019

    I can't read this the info dump and the Mc who Is 12 looks like 16 acting as if he's 4 and why now is he learning this where I'd he what's his story? (the beginning) please try and read what you made the and like me if you can't handle more than 2 chapters of info-dumping space it out! concept seemed great though.

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    Yrmynoodlescold

    Hard to find fault with this book in terms of writing quality. The quality is very nice. The chapter lengths are long but the paragraphs are nicely structured so it is easy to follow and keep track. The story and character development is really well done. Although the idea is very simple, the writing makes it a nice read. Really worth reading in my personal opinion...

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    Bakkoy

    Am I the only one who has never seen the MC avoid spells and only counter them? And causing him to be hit back by the difference in cultivation? She should be fast as her element is wind but she was just throwing energy here and there. Will he learn to fight then? Please answer because I will continue or not depending on the author's answer. What I mean above is about volumes 1 and 2. If I'm wrong then please show me. Because I'm reading this in a bad mood.

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    Fordy0
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    I wonder, How many chapter are all in this story? because I only ended in chapter 348, because I'm thinking to buy privilege, if it is really worth it? -is it more than 1000 chapters? I really like it alot :) -I hope it will have more chapters to come:))))) -THANK YOU WRITER-

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    GAMING_IS_MUST

    first of MC is idiot not only naive also idiot, he says he can't further his cultivation but doesn't use the pills left behind by his father and mother even though trillion of lives are on the line because what pride?? that's shitty so many USELESS info dumps oh so so so many of them

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    Zeim_Zeio

    This feels more lIke an essay more than a story lol. The explanations are too long which is not yet needed. All the cultivation level is introduced at the start leaving no excitement for the readers to explore and continue reading on the systems. The author could have tried to introduced the cultivation leVels and the world in a mystifying way when the readers will all be piqued. I must say that the author has good ideas but how he expose the story and narrates It does not give any thrill to the readers or make the readers hooked on the story.

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    LionessLover

    All you have to do to understand the utter uselessness and stupidity of this story is to read the Glossary chapter (right after the Prologue), especially the 2nd part to the end. What a waste of braincells.

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    MiaSilver

    This book is excellent. The story and character development is executed well. the world building and the ideas behind the cultivation concept is so vast and indepth. This work is exceeds expectations and I truly am enjoying it. your writing is unmatched

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    heavicedcoffee

    Due to my personal taste on genres or because I don't really play games perhaps there's a deep reason why I am not interested in those things. Nonetheless, I believed that you have a good story. That you put your heart into it. So I just wanna say I still need to read more of this genre. But your story is not bad. It's just that I am not perfect 😉 Anyways, had a great time reading! Keep writing Author 😍

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    Black_Rabbit_Oz

    The author has commendable skills when it comes to descriptions and narration, immersing me in a surreal xianxia experience while reading. If you still don't read it then, it's your loss.

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    Daoist201736

    Really superb. I love the actions, they are breathtaking and it's well detailed, I understand what am reading and it's also well organized. Keep up the great work koladeizdavid!

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    Awuka
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    Mc is mature (for his age), smart, genius. Mature? 13 years old behaves like a 6-8 year old child. Clever? Well, then from which side to look, for 12-13 years, maybe a little smart (but I would say that Mc is stupid) Genius? he was stuck at the initial stage for several months, a genius, and what a ... There are still mistakes, but not critical, and the behavior when meeting a beautiful girl does not like. It's my personal opinion. Written with a translator.

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    Dr987
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    ..................... Hello, I'm not really good with reviews but I can say it was a good read and I'm waiting for the next chapter (if there will be). ......................

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    PervertedNerd

    Hello author-san Can you please add 'R-18' to the title of the chapter if it was present in it?! cause for someone like me i want to know the frequency of the 'R-18' scenes in the novel. Thank you.

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    WarLord6968

    I just read the 1st chapter after having had this novel for a long time in my library and it promises a lot of reading pleasure, however I remember that there was a chapter which reca** the energy cultivation levels but it is no longer there I wonder if you could put it back for ease of understanding when reading.

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    Daoist2vk8Dv

    This is one of the best cultivation novel I've recently read. Good character development, excellent word buliding, unique systems, cool fights, op mc along with op enemies and many more. And also clear explanations on cultivation, different races, man this novel is excellent. I so hope that the author won't drop this novel.

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    卷 31 : Legacy Ground

    1. 316
      Romance I 3 years ago
    2. 317
      Romance II 3 years ago
    3. 318
      The quick theft 3 years ago
    4. 319
      Battle I 3 years ago
    5. 320
      Battle II 3 years ago
    6. 321
      Battle III 3 years ago
    7. 322
      Run... Exposure 3 years ago
    8. 323
      Shocking transformations 3 years ago
    9. 324
      Going all out to kill I 3 years ago
    10. 325
      Going all out to kill II 3 years ago
    11. 326
      Cultivation restrictions 3 years ago
    12. 327
      Teasing each other 3 years ago
    13. 328
      Angry old woman 3 years ago
    14. 329
      Questions 3 years ago
    15. 330
      The temptation 3 years ago
    16. 331
      Resisting the voice 3 years ago
    17. 332
      Making Layla suffer (R-18) 3 years ago
    18. 333
      Sex I (R-18+) 3 years ago
    19. 334
      Sex II, Cultivation (R-18+) 3 years ago
    20. 335
      Layla's thirst 3 years ago
    21. 336
      Layla's thirst 3 years ago
    22. 337
      The fruitless wait 3 years ago
    23. 338
      Try at cultivating unrecorded energies 3 years ago
    24. 339
      The gist 3 years ago
    25. 340
      Alex's invitation 3 years ago
    26. 341
      Shocked! 3 years ago
    27. 342
      The approval 3 years ago
    28. 343
      The arrival of Olivia 3 years ago
    29. 344
      Gossiping about their husband I 3 years ago
    30. 345
      Gossiping about their husband II 3 years ago
    31. 346
      Revealed I 3 years ago
    32. 347
      Meeting Olivia and Nailah 3 years ago
    33. 348
      Alex's promise to Nailah 3 years ago
    34. 349
      The plan and the treasures I 3 years ago
    35. 350
      The plan and the treasures II 3 years ago
    36. 351
      The plan and the treasures III 3 years ago
    37. 352
      New realm-energy 3 years ago
    38. 353
      The wicked plan 3 years ago
    39. 354
      Calling out his enemies 3 years ago
    40. 355
      Killing one of them 3 years ago
    41. 356
      Killing one of them (Don't read) {Bugged Chapter} 3 years ago
    42. 357
      Killing them all (II) 3 years ago
    43. 358
      Killing them all (III) 3 years ago
    44. 359
      It's time you guys appeared, right? 3 years ago
    45. 360
      Where does his confidence come from? 3 years ago
    46. 361
      The chase 3 years ago
    47. 362
      Special Secret Technique? 3 years ago
    48. 363
      An ordinary kick! 3 years ago
    49. 364
      A powerful formation 3 years ago
    50. 365
      We would have right where we want him to be... 3 years ago
    51. 366
      A Godly Bow 3 years ago
    52. 367
      Uncovering the location of the Bow 3 years ago
    53. 368
      Making an attempt at cultivating Metalforce energy 3 years ago
    54. 369
      Gaining partial comprehension of Metalforce Energy 3 years ago
    55. 370
      Successful attempt at cultivation of Metalforce energy 3 years ago
    56. 371
      A God-eyes appears 3 years ago
    57. 372
      The earth trembles 3 years ago
    58. 373
      Large tentacled monster? 3 years ago
    59. 374
      So, do you guys have anything to tell me? 3 years ago
    60. 375
      Setting out to snatch the bow 3 years ago
    61. 376
      Breaking one of the pillars 3 years ago
    62. 377
      Facing the disciples from Higher Worlds (1) 2 years ago
    63. 378
      Facing the disciples from Higher Worlds (2) 2 years ago
    64. 379
      Facing the disciples from Higher Worlds (3) 2 years ago
    65. 380
      Battle with the Higher World students (1) 2 years ago
    66. 381
      Battle with the Higher World students (2) 2 years ago
    67. 382
      Battle with the Higher World students (3) 2 years ago
    68. 383
      Wrong Chapter (Skip) 2 years ago
    69. 384
      Overpowering 2 years ago
    70. 385
      Empyrean Firelight's bow 2 years ago
    71. 386
      Activating the bow 2 years ago
    72. 387
      The bow's shocking phenomenon 2 years ago
    73. 388
      Mote of light 2 years ago
    74. 389
      Empyrean Firelight's words 2 years ago
    75. 390
      New cultivation and battle methods 2 years ago
    76. 391
      Returning 2 years ago
    77. 392
      Quasi-divination technique 2 years ago
    78. 393
      Tricked 2 years ago
    79. 394
      Going after Alex 2 years ago
    80. 395
      Failing at tracking Alex 2 years ago
    81. 396
      Angering others with his unbridled action 2 years ago
    82. 397
      Deploying special tracing techniques 2 years ago
    83. 398
      Returning 2 years ago
    84. 399
      Plotting their new scheme for revenge (1) 2 years ago
    85. 400
      Plotting their new scheme for revenge (2) 2 years ago

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