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Being killed by a crazy truck when you are about to be surgeon sucks right?
But you know what doesn't sucks? Being reborn in the world of My Hero Academia with your knowledge of modern surgery and with the freaking abilities of Law from One Piece.
Yes, it is the adventure of one dude trying to have an easy life fulfilling his dream with the Ope-Ope No Mi.
There won't be any shit like helping random people just because he can, neither fawning over a deep shit like Midoriya. Our MC isn't a nihilist, but realistic.
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Here I am, your regular newbie French writer.
My fanfic isn't what I could call original, but I will try to keep up on updates and with your help, try to make my ff more interesting!
Leave a lik- a review and put it in your bookshelf if you want to support me :).
The cover is not mine but [Lasagna_God] did a few modifications on the original one and I am truly grateful to him.
My Hero Academia is not mine, only the OC's are my creation. It’s AU
If you want to talk to me, here I am: Antlike#8189
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The story is good, very original compared to the other MHA fiction. It is not the classic story of the hero and does not follow the vicissitudes that we all know, which I appreciated very much. Unfortunately, there are many negative sides, impossible to miss, since they are objective problems and have nothing to do with my preferences. Let's start with Erza and Kiku. Kiku: From the way the author described it, you don't understand her emotions. At 4/5 years old, she blushes as soon as she meets Suzuki and here is my first "why?". Her relationship with Mc is confused. Kuki can sleep on Suzuki's legs without feeling the least bit of shame, but when she sees him without a shirt (which she should be used to seeing) she blushing randomly. Shortly after they declare themselves and there is a completely normal kiss. Scene of the appointment is promoted. Erza: What is she doing in the world of MHA? But it's the minor problem, just think it's an alternative universe of BHA, where Erza was born in this world. Mc is from earth, didn't he recognize her? Relationship with Suziki already better than Kuki, except for their first kiss, totally exaggerated. Was there really any need to enter the tongue in this way? She was agitated and anxious and after hearing that Suzuki also has feelings for her, boom, let's use the tongue! Then there are also problems on the characterization of the protagonist, initially he does not want to kill and then "does nothing, sooner or later I will have to do it", he was trained to kill and various things. No, it is not an evolution of the character, he was already mature right away, with clear ideologies, he was not a classic child. Maybe something happened that made him completely change his mind, but for now it doesn't seem like that at all. All in all, I recommend the story, hoping that the characterization errors will gradually decrease.
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It’s a good story but not for me I don’t like when authors add ocs or randomly transport characters from another anime into another.
It good and have interesting concept. Unfortunately it very shallow the plotline is barely make sense for me because the story miss some important details on many thing. There barely emotion in characters. At first it interesting but it's start feel like not quite right, a barely make sense quirk test somehow they know such a complex use of quirk just by what? Testing blood? If that was easy eri will not become lab rat by kai. A government organization that look more like a scam than making agent specially to beat hero (figuratively or literally), it's more like child care service, and wrong suffix is weird for doctor to be called sama then sensei. No one asking somehow a child instantly controlling a spatial manipulation somehow say room and shamble, and parents who gave away a child to boarding school at 4 years old, a organization that almost done have standard asking a child their quirk? Shouldn't they have file about it? It was interesting at first, is fanfic some maybe are not make sense, but to me it feel forced and shallow, at first i thought because the theme surgeon it will be more accurate or details at least make sense.
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Actually, I was quite impressed for this story. Unfortunately, after the Quirk test, you made MC into a government dog. This is a bit uncomfortable for me. Yeah... I just hope that the MC will do anything freely, without worrying that someone will curb it...
NOICE. SMORT. An interesting story. The author is improving his writing quality gradually. Happy with the story. I look forward to the future of this story.
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I wanna be the very best like no surgeon ever was To find them is my goal To treat them is my test Surgeon sat! Djbedjdnnendjdndndjdjdidd9oddx
Realy good for a newbie writing liking it so far summon Cthulhu "Ph'nglui mglw'nafh Cthulhu R'lyeh wgah'nagl fhtagn!" somnia aeternae vocare possit aeternam tenebrarum obscurum. ut omnes moriuntur magnificentiam aeternae adorare.
Bonjour auteur, je suis ravi de le lire..........................................................🙃🙃🙃🙃😉😉😉🙃🙃😉😄😄😄😁😁😁😆😆😆😆😉😉😉🙃🙃
Assez intéressant. Si ça peut t’aider avec ton œuvre je te conseille d’utiliser un site qui s’appelle « Deepl » c’est comme Google traduction mais en bien mieux.Car ça te donne des traductions bien meilleur aux lieu des traductions mots à mots que l’on peut retrouver sur Google trad Hâte de voir la suite😁
its definitely not bad, 4 for writing as you can see that the writing at the beginning is a bit winged. 4 for stability of updates as author isn't chinese and can pump out 1000 chapters 4 story dev, as i like the concept of the zenith squad and the fact that mc isnt going through the normal *become a hero* thing that fanfics do, please not there is some polygamy in the story. 3 for character design as i personally like villain mc's and mc's that arnt normal world background 5 i mean it is a mha fanfic...
Nada tiene sentido Nada va de acuerdo con la trama principal ni nada Un niño de 4 0 5 años se une al gobierno y los padres lo dejan haciendo misiones peligrosas (quién en su sano juicio dejaría a un bbe hacer estas cosas 👎👎👎👎👎👎
"Deep **** midoriya". With just that sir I'll give you 5 stars and add this to my library, keep the chapters coming.. 102939484884848399292(("+8_838(("(8_884)(('(88_(4!'((_!('_(!_(:9_)($($("8'8(_(
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卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1 : Still a kid
- 1 The basics 4 years ago
- 2 Bad experience 4 years ago
- 3 Still hating this 4 years ago
- 4 Blackmailing? no! 4 years ago
- 5 Golden opportunity 4 years ago
- 6 Is he from 'men in black'? 4 years ago
- 7 Joining the 'men in black' 4 years ago
- 8 She is... 4 years ago
- 9 The team 4 years ago
- 10 Presentations 4 years ago
- 11 The beginning 4 years ago
- 12 The first year 4 years ago
卷 2 : Not a kid anymore
- 13 First mission details 4 years ago
- 14 Simple operation 4 years ago
- 15 Fierce battle 4 years ago
- 16 Quite pathetic 4 years ago
- 17 Bonding time with the girls 1/2 4 years ago
- 18 Bonding time with the girls 2/2 4 years ago
- 19 Past #1: Suzuki 4 years ago
- 20 Simple deal 4 years ago
- 21 Angry mini bomb 4 years ago
- 22 It's fun, isn't it? 4 years ago
- 23 Two more to go 4 years ago
- 24 Late as always 4 years ago
- 25 Fun with Kiku (R-18) 4 years ago
- 26 Babysitting Momo 4 years ago
- 27 You are the famous Jaegers? 4 years ago
- 28 Complete victory 4 years ago
- 29 Past #2: Relationship, fight and a mysterious sister 4 years ago
- 30 Meeting All-Might 4 years ago
- 31 A threat to who? Not me. 4 years ago
- 32 Erza the lewd woman (R-18) 4 years ago
- 33 Healing the cripple pedo 4 years ago
- 34 Little talk with the police 4 years ago
- 35 It's a weird feeling 4 years ago
- 36 Just. A. Monster. 4 years ago
- 37 Worthy opponent 4 years ago
- 38 A new threat (R-18) 4 years ago
- 39 Trial of battle 1/2 4 years ago
- 40 Trial of battle 2/2 4 years ago
- 41 Not a chapter (Not dropped) 4 years ago
- 42 Dropped 3 years ago
Still a new book, and i quite liked how it goes Ope-Ope no mi is such a good Quirk for him Being able to Operate freely on anything inside his 'Room' Potentials are too great . Can use techniques of Law from One Piece and more since this is BNHA, and i think medical field is too advanced compared to One Piece. WISH YOU GOOD LUCK IN WRITING THIS MASTERPIECE (Weapon - Scalpel : no matter how short or long his weapon with a single swing his cut range is as big as his 'Room' this was shown when Law covered entire Lab Mt. In punk hazard That was inside his 'Room' field, so no matter how small his weapon it can easily make big cuts as long as it is within his 'Room'. )