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A man is transmigrated in Douluo Dalu 3 world with the powers of Okhwang from God of Highschool. First novel, please cut me some slack. Trying to improve.
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Very good fanfiction which changes others with its originality, like a MC who does not know the world in which it is, powers quite interesting if they are developed. I only hope that the author will not be the type who abandoned his novel after 20-30 chapters because he really has the potential to be one of the best fanfiction of Douluo Dalu.
In my opinion, there is not much point in having an "MC" who has not read the two novels / stories, and who has no idea of the power he has or the world he is in, as the "MC" is now It is known how the story will unfold, the actions of the "MC" become a little predictable, which makes him boring. - More interesting, or better, would have been if the "MC" knew the power he had, and the world he was in, because he could take advantage of several opportunities that would benefit him, I think his actions would not be as predictable, since at Having knowledge, he would develop various plans, which would make his career interesting. - Instead of the third eye granting you an overwhelming power so suddenly and using another type of energy, it would have been better if it was your second martial spirit, having two super quality spirits (the eye and the sword), you would have a innate power of 20 !, their third eye and sword if they had the same abilities (the abilities they have would be their basic characteristics) and the two martial spirits can be used at the same time, but the power they can exercise is minimal by the current power of the MC, and the stronger the "MC" becomes, the more power he can use, until he reaches the "god" rank and the MC is if he is super cheated, in addition to his spirit / soul rings, giving additional abilities to his spirits than they originally have. I think this would have been better, in addition to creating a beautiful jade armor, entitled "Jade Emperor". - I don't know what the author thought, but in my opinion it would have been a better integration of the powers of the "Jade Emperor" in the world of Douluo Dalu as I explained,
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This is definitely one of the best fics out there so far, even if there is only a few chapters. It’s also one of the only soul land fics that doesn’t have a harem, which is great.
I’m too lazy to write a full review. Just know that it’s a good story if you like smart MC that doesn’t follow cliches.👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻to you author.(you get 5 thumbs up because I need to reach the character minimum)
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The story is phenomenally well written, and that is saying something considering how over powered the jade emperor’s powers are; the author has found a way to not limit his power but give it to him in a way, that grows with him. 123456789101112131415161718192021222324252627282930313233343536373839404142434445464748495051525354555657585960616263646566676869707172737475767778798081828384858687888990919293949596979899100
One of my favorite fanfictions of all time. Reason? It actually did the romance and badass moments right. Op mc? Check! Troll mc? Check! Secret Organizations for mc? Check! Likable female lead? Check! Fluff with female lead? Check!!!! Seriously author I admire that you didn't fall and listened to the harem readers and the haters of the female lead. Well anyways keep up the great work and plz stay with fluff cause i'm a bit scared of the note you left in one chapter asking if we like "tragedy".
One of the best soul land fanfic ever😍😍😍 ...............,....................................................... ...............,.......................................................
Haven't read soul land 3 yet but I like this FIC, the interaction between MC and his friends are funny, MC is also OP in his own right but his cultivation of his spirit is a bit slow compare to the other chars( for now). Also he can suddenly gain power up ( those doors) during which he'll be out of commission for days which is a bit worrying, the first two time the only one saw it is Gu Yue and she helped covering for him but if it happen in the middle place that's many people around then he can be in trouble. All in all though it's a very interesting read, thank for writing it author san.
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This is one of the rare few stories where the author is actually capable of writing not only a decent story but actually knows decent grammar and the story is not a crappy like the majority of fanfic that exist. All in all I find myself enjoying this and hope to see how it goes until the end. Keep up the good work.
Good just good like I'm not a critic or someone that is good a writing sentences so yeahh Writing Quality - well I don't know like I'm not really good at describing things so let's just say its good since ummm I can read it well? Like it has good grammar so it had to be good. Updating Stability - well its 1 chapter/day so its good and ummm don't really know what I should say more to this...... Story Development - well its not rushed so its good right? Yeah its good and ummm the mc does his own thing? Like he's not just some bystander doing nothing and ummm........**** I forgot what im gonna write.........anywayyyy......overall its good but uuuhhh buttt.......****.....yeahhhh just ignore this...... Character Design - well the mc is overpowered so yeahh its good and uhhhh he's mature and calm and mature and.............moving onnn.....uhh the characters are good yeahh good but they hating gu yue soooo its probably not good buttt who cares its not like she's not gonna change right? Yes yep good definitely best yeahhhh annddd uhhhh the other characters umm like they're just side characters and not main characters so no one will probably remember them......anndd I guess this is it? YeH yeah yeah so its done. World Background - well uhh I don't have a single fucking clue and. Uhhh......brain cells. .......its FOOKING GOOD SO ITS FOOJING GRWAT so its should be good and uhhh ****k ummm da **** am I supposed to write here? Like should I just copy paste the sypnosis? Yeahhhh I should...... SYPNOSIS - First novel, please cut me some slack. Trying to improve. So is that good? Its probably is so its good.....and uhh bye I guess? Overall - well its fucking good so u should read it I guess so yeah read it and suck it . .. Wait what? Uhhh. Ignore tthisssss🔜🔜🔜🔜🔝🔝 so yeah I think I did a good review I think? Yeahh......
Honestly this fanfiction is one of the best I've read on WN. It gives great references, there's lots of comedy, mc is op but doesn't really mess up the flow, the romance is one of the best parts (Even if they're just kiddos rn (At least MC 'is')) Huang Yu is a very good mc who fools around for giggles and ****. I hope the author doesn't abandon this story.
From what I've seen, he's an MC who doesn't know the plot or the power he has, which makes them good, but I hope he doesn't follow the path of the harem as many others do ...
I absolutely adore this fic...the pacing is good...there is a right balance of action, comedy and romance...and yea romance is actually good it's so fluffy and I love it...the world feels alive and the character interactions feels natural unlike in some novels where the interaction feel completely robotic.. keep up the great work author
I am not good at writing a review, but what can i say is this story is good overall, and here 5* for you author, i already read 100 chap and here i got a question for author before i continue, does the character from heaven (from what i understand, they are the family of the last jade emperor) will got NTRed?
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Incredible, something different from what I'm used to seeing, I was tired of seeing MC otaku or hunting women like pokémon, finally it's one without a harem, it's very refreshing