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I am only into the 1st 2 chapters and I cannot get enough of it. I luv ur way with words.. I luv the bits of sufferingggg...... Its sensational. I am gonna continue this book. I just had to write this review 1st. I am in awe.
HANDS DOWN ONE OF THE BEST BOOKS IVE READ OF THIS FANTASY GENRE! i love how ur cover truly shows how much of a bloody and blissful saga it may be full of obstacles, I'm hoping to finish reading further because so far, THE WORLD BUILD IS THE MOST IMPRESSIVE THING IN THIS REALM OF YOURS BECAUSE WOW.
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I cant believe my eyes. They have read a masterpiece. Omo writer, you have done a great job. Imma envy your writing now. I sense a lot of emotions and feelings you depicted in novel. I loveeeeee it. There are no words to describe my feelings when J read it. Your book is worth reading. Highly recommended.
I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.
omo!!! bl!!! me love this. just the synopsis itself is enough to hook me. the writing is good. I love the characters. even tho there is rood for improvement, author-nim is working hard... keep going~~~
The synopsis itself is different. Normally FL gets betrayed in many novels and they do their comeback. But here even though it's a bit similar but the way the author put in different and hooking. It makes one crave to read more. All the best author.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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I love this story. I love the way the author describes his character and background. Can't wait to read more. [img=coins][img=exp] I totally recommend it .
First of all, I love how you describe your world background. It's so detailed that induces us, readers, to picture out what the world really looks like in your story. The characters too, well portrayed if I may say. Now, for the critic, I'd rather suggest you proofread the chapters. The thought is there, the flow is there. But sometimes, these ideas are either chunk, misspelled, or unrelatedly joined together in a sentence which makes us, readers, confused. But, if you fix that, I'm sure this story will come out splendidly than it already is! I commend you for your work author! Great job!
The genre of this novel is in line with its plotline! The story is great! And the questions in the synopsis will what be the readers be hooked on this! Great job!
I like the way you write it, the way you write is detailed but I've seen some minor spelling mistakes but its okay. And reading it more, the way you write it improves which is good. Keep writing :))
This story is really my type of genre so I really love this. I would say that every story has an ending but not everyone happy to their ending and that's the reality of life. But when it comes to fiction, you have the power to give a happy ending. So this story is very great! I hope more chapters to come.
The story is amazing! The author presented the characters and world background very well. It has some great plot twist! Really like it. Good job author!
The concept is excellent. It's a female MC but even as a male reader, it doesn't matter to me. What's important is the pace is good and the world sucks you in. I hope the author writes faster!
I love a story that depicts life; Movies and stories may have happy endings but life doesn’t always bless you with one. Right from the beginning I was bery hooked with the story. Loved the descriptions. It made me feel like I was in the story. Great work Author!!!!
I sense that you are one imaginative person. As I read your first few chapters, I can see that you're trying very hard to be as descriptive as possible. The amount of effort you put in this is commendable. Your novel seems very interesting too, I'm hooked. Though, we can't deny that there are plenty of grammatical and spelling errors. Some paragraphs are just difficult to read because of the mistakes. If you have time, you should go back to your chapters and do a bit of editing here and there. If you do fix your errors then I know, your story will come to be wonderful. Good job to the author! Keep updating <3
The story was quite interesting, it was a unique of starting the story in a war battle grounds . it's true all endings are not always happy.
I am interested in this book. The details are all on point and I can understand it clearly. The only feedback I can give you for your book is to fix some grammar and punctuation here and there. Once you fix that everything should be perfect! I would definitely recommend this book to everyone who is interested in a female lead!!
Aurora fighting girl, I can see how MC is struggling with no voice just to be tossed from one place to another. From war and now into the something like being traded off in by her own sis. Can't wait for the fighter update!!
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The story plot is very intriguing. There is a big potential for this story. Minor issue though, I hope you use Grammarly to help you take care of some spelling or technical issues. Over-all I enjoyed it!
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This book starts out in a very dark place. I love the idea behind it and how the author describes the MCs surroundings. It takes the reader right into the scene. My only negative critique is the English which at some parts makes it hard to understand what is happening. To the author: Keep working on it!
First off you do have a good story line with a good set of characters. However, your tense work and your grammar could really use some work. For me it broke the immersion more than once. Maybe use spell check or grammarly. Personally I'm not a fan of text talk like tho. All in all a good book though that I can't wait to read more of.
Okay the way you are the taking the story is really awesome and the way you are still holding daisy life even tho she's in Aurora body is just wowww...and the bloody Daisuke is also hot and I look the way that you gave the background details... Just awesome...I hope you really updated....just love your Book and story ..good one Lucky
Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
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See i am a guy who usually isn't into female main characters but this story has such a well crafted one that i am hooked. And it isn't just the MC who is well written, but everyone else. I guarantee you that this story is a great read.
Not big on female MC, but I like this one, grammar is good and updates are quick in coming. Looking forward to the new chaps. .................................
Never read a romance never before with a female mc as the main character. This is certainly a refreshing new take. It's entertaining to read, making one roll to the next chapter unconsciously. (at least for me) Some parts have wrong grammar but it's alright to be honest.(everyone's been there) It's a fairly good read. Looking forward to further plot advancements
Hello author San... UR story has potential.. And u have a imaginative.. Mind. UR story is.. Good, hooked the readers.. Sink into world of fantasy u create... A magic.. And mermaid blessing.. Concept is new.. I LIKE UR STORY very much.. BUT U BADLY IN NEED OF A PROOF READER AND EDITOR.. AND BEHIND Every Original novel success is A Fixed Chapter Release Shedule AND the story is pacing forward not going round and round in circles.. Good luck👍👍😊😊
I am only into the 1st 2 chapters and I cannot get enough of it. I luv ur way with words.. I luv the bits of sufferingggg...... Its sensational. I am gonna continue this book. I just had to write this review 1st. I am in awe.
HANDS DOWN ONE OF THE BEST BOOKS IVE READ OF THIS FANTASY GENRE! i love how ur cover truly shows how much of a bloody and blissful saga it may be full of obstacles, I'm hoping to finish reading further because so far, THE WORLD BUILD IS THE MOST IMPRESSIVE THING IN THIS REALM OF YOURS BECAUSE WOW.
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ネタバレを明かす I cant believe my eyes. They have read a masterpiece. Omo writer, you have done a great job. Imma envy your writing now. I sense a lot of emotions and feelings you depicted in novel. I loveeeeee it. There are no words to describe my feelings when J read it. Your book is worth reading. Highly recommended.
I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.
omo!!! bl!!! me love this. just the synopsis itself is enough to hook me. the writing is good. I love the characters. even tho there is rood for improvement, author-nim is working hard... keep going~~~
The synopsis itself is different. Normally FL gets betrayed in many novels and they do their comeback. But here even though it's a bit similar but the way the author put in different and hooking. It makes one crave to read more. All the best author.
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
ネタバレを明かす I love this story. I love the way the author describes his character and background. Can't wait to read more. [img=coins][img=exp] I totally recommend it .
First of all, I love how you describe your world background. It's so detailed that induces us, readers, to picture out what the world really looks like in your story. The characters too, well portrayed if I may say. Now, for the critic, I'd rather suggest you proofread the chapters. The thought is there, the flow is there. But sometimes, these ideas are either chunk, misspelled, or unrelatedly joined together in a sentence which makes us, readers, confused. But, if you fix that, I'm sure this story will come out splendidly than it already is! I commend you for your work author! Great job!
The genre of this novel is in line with its plotline! The story is great! And the questions in the synopsis will what be the readers be hooked on this! Great job!
I like the way you write it, the way you write is detailed but I've seen some minor spelling mistakes but its okay. And reading it more, the way you write it improves which is good. Keep writing :))
This story is really my type of genre so I really love this. I would say that every story has an ending but not everyone happy to their ending and that's the reality of life. But when it comes to fiction, you have the power to give a happy ending. So this story is very great! I hope more chapters to come.
The story is amazing! The author presented the characters and world background very well. It has some great plot twist! Really like it. Good job author!
The concept is excellent. It's a female MC but even as a male reader, it doesn't matter to me. What's important is the pace is good and the world sucks you in. I hope the author writes faster!
I love a story that depicts life; Movies and stories may have happy endings but life doesn’t always bless you with one. Right from the beginning I was bery hooked with the story. Loved the descriptions. It made me feel like I was in the story. Great work Author!!!!
I sense that you are one imaginative person. As I read your first few chapters, I can see that you're trying very hard to be as descriptive as possible. The amount of effort you put in this is commendable. Your novel seems very interesting too, I'm hooked. Though, we can't deny that there are plenty of grammatical and spelling errors. Some paragraphs are just difficult to read because of the mistakes. If you have time, you should go back to your chapters and do a bit of editing here and there. If you do fix your errors then I know, your story will come to be wonderful. Good job to the author! Keep updating <3
The story was quite interesting, it was a unique of starting the story in a war battle grounds . it's true all endings are not always happy.
I am interested in this book. The details are all on point and I can understand it clearly. The only feedback I can give you for your book is to fix some grammar and punctuation here and there. Once you fix that everything should be perfect! I would definitely recommend this book to everyone who is interested in a female lead!!
Aurora fighting girl, I can see how MC is struggling with no voice just to be tossed from one place to another. From war and now into the something like being traded off in by her own sis. Can't wait for the fighter update!!
ネタバレを明かす The story plot is very intriguing. There is a big potential for this story. Minor issue though, I hope you use Grammarly to help you take care of some spelling or technical issues. Over-all I enjoyed it!
ネタバレを明かす This book starts out in a very dark place. I love the idea behind it and how the author describes the MCs surroundings. It takes the reader right into the scene. My only negative critique is the English which at some parts makes it hard to understand what is happening. To the author: Keep working on it!
First off you do have a good story line with a good set of characters. However, your tense work and your grammar could really use some work. For me it broke the immersion more than once. Maybe use spell check or grammarly. Personally I'm not a fan of text talk like tho. All in all a good book though that I can't wait to read more of.
Okay the way you are the taking the story is really awesome and the way you are still holding daisy life even tho she's in Aurora body is just wowww...and the bloody Daisuke is also hot and I look the way that you gave the background details... Just awesome...I hope you really updated....just love your Book and story ..good one Lucky
Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
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ネタバレを明かす See i am a guy who usually isn't into female main characters but this story has such a well crafted one that i am hooked. And it isn't just the MC who is well written, but everyone else. I guarantee you that this story is a great read.
Not big on female MC, but I like this one, grammar is good and updates are quick in coming. Looking forward to the new chaps. .................................
Never read a romance never before with a female mc as the main character. This is certainly a refreshing new take. It's entertaining to read, making one roll to the next chapter unconsciously. (at least for me) Some parts have wrong grammar but it's alright to be honest.(everyone's been there) It's a fairly good read. Looking forward to further plot advancements
Hello author San... UR story has potential.. And u have a imaginative.. Mind. UR story is.. Good, hooked the readers.. Sink into world of fantasy u create... A magic.. And mermaid blessing.. Concept is new.. I LIKE UR STORY very much.. BUT U BADLY IN NEED OF A PROOF READER AND EDITOR.. AND BEHIND Every Original novel success is A Fixed Chapter Release Shedule AND the story is pacing forward not going round and round in circles.. Good luck👍👍😊😊