Is always Happy After Ending?

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ghaziyan

Hello author San... UR story has potential.. And u have a imaginative.. Mind. UR story is.. Good, hooked the readers.. Sink into world of fantasy u create... A magic.. And mermaid blessing.. Concept is new.. I LIKE UR STORY very much.. BUT U BADLY IN NEED OF A PROOF READER AND EDITOR.. AND BEHIND Every Original novel success is A Fixed Chapter Release Shedule AND the story is pacing forward not going round and round in circles.. Good luck👍👍😊😊

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love_kakie

I am only into the 1st 2 chapters and I cannot get enough of it. I luv ur way with words.. I luv the bits of sufferingggg...... Its sensational. I am gonna continue this book. I just had to write this review 1st. I am in awe.

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Gaureeey

HANDS DOWN ONE OF THE BEST BOOKS IVE READ OF THIS FANTASY GENRE! i love how ur cover truly shows how much of a bloody and blissful saga it may be full of obstacles, I'm hoping to finish reading further because so far, THE WORLD BUILD IS THE MOST IMPRESSIVE THING IN THIS REALM OF YOURS BECAUSE WOW.

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Jwcwwd

Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you

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bibiyenini

The genre of this novel is in line with its plotline! The story is great! And the questions in the synopsis will what be the readers be hooked on this! Great job!

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Madyan_wani

I cant believe my eyes. They have read a masterpiece. Omo writer, you have done a great job. Imma envy your writing now. I sense a lot of emotions and feelings you depicted in novel. I loveeeeee it. There are no words to describe my feelings when J read it. Your book is worth reading. Highly recommended.

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SuBe_

omo!!! bl!!! me love this. just the synopsis itself is enough to hook me. the writing is good. I love the characters. even tho there is rood for improvement, author-nim is working hard... keep going~~~

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Ms_Anonymous

The synopsis itself is different. Normally FL gets betrayed in many novels and they do their comeback. But here even though it's a bit similar but the way the author put in different and hooking. It makes one crave to read more. All the best author.

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oyslyness

I love this story. I love the way the author describes his character and background. Can't wait to read more. [img=coins][img=exp] I totally recommend it .

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phoenixhyperion

First of all, I love how you describe your world background. It's so detailed that induces us, readers, to picture out what the world really looks like in your story. The characters too, well portrayed if I may say. Now, for the critic, I'd rather suggest you proofread the chapters. The thought is there, the flow is there. But sometimes, these ideas are either chunk, misspelled, or unrelatedly joined together in a sentence which makes us, readers, confused. But, if you fix that, I'm sure this story will come out splendidly than it already is! I commend you for your work author! Great job!

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meixiaolian

I like the way you write it, the way you write is detailed but I've seen some minor spelling mistakes but its okay. And reading it more, the way you write it improves which is good. Keep writing :))

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liyanpark1013

This story is really my type of genre so I really love this. I would say that every story has an ending but not everyone happy to their ending and that's the reality of life. But when it comes to fiction, you have the power to give a happy ending. So this story is very great! I hope more chapters to come.

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Lami274

The story is amazing! The author presented the characters and world background very well. It has some great plot twist! Really like it. Good job author!

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AnaBanana11111

The concept is excellent. It's a female MC but even as a male reader, it doesn't matter to me. What's important is the pace is good and the world sucks you in. I hope the author writes faster!

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Dvanzy6

I love a story that depicts life; Movies and stories may have happy endings but life doesn’t always bless you with one. Right from the beginning I was bery hooked with the story. Loved the descriptions. It made me feel like I was in the story. Great work Author!!!!

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varean

I sense that you are one imaginative person. As I read your first few chapters, I can see that you're trying very hard to be as descriptive as possible. The amount of effort you put in this is commendable. Your novel seems very interesting too, I'm hooked. Though, we can't deny that there are plenty of grammatical and spelling errors. Some paragraphs are just difficult to read because of the mistakes. If you have time, you should go back to your chapters and do a bit of editing here and there. If you do fix your errors then I know, your story will come to be wonderful. Good job to the author! Keep updating <3

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CKM_Manga_World

The story was quite interesting, it was a unique of starting the story in a war battle grounds . it's true all endings are not always happy.

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lgfjhkgk

I am interested in this book. The details are all on point and I can understand it clearly. The only feedback I can give you for your book is to fix some grammar and punctuation here and there. Once you fix that everything should be perfect! I would definitely recommend this book to everyone who is interested in a female lead!!