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Ok I get revenge and all that stuff like the mc kills people who wronged him but when it comes to the family and friends he is a fucking control freak always messing in their lives like yeah they used to be family but now your a fucking mosquito bat help them a couple of times then get out of their lives I mean now they are all scared that a vampiric bat keeps killing people in their lives like leave them alone it's so fucking creepy how he stalks his family and friends the mc may seem nice and all but he is a fucking creepo that controls everyone he knows by killing their enemies.
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Get a editer it seems like it was run through Google translate. The words are rather jumbled and attempt at simile and metaphors are tricky to decipher. Gender words should be considered as reference to a species. Also the word larva was mistaken as ladies.
i gave u the 5 star for the promising story and the 120 chapter in 1 week . a man of focus indeed........................................................................................................
The novel is good but the orthography is bad, if the author improve his orthography (or gets a editor)and edits all the chapter I can see this novel in a much higher rank.
I cant understand the translation. Nothing matters if the translation is garbage. The expressions don't make sense, nothing makes sense. Those who stuck with it, I have to say super impressed.
Ok I get revenge and all that stuff like the mc kills people who wronged him but when it comes to the family and friends he is a fucking control freak always messing in their lives like yeah they used to be family but now your a fucking mosquito bat help them a couple of times then get out of their lives I mean now they are all scared that a vampiric bat keeps killing people in their lives like leave them alone it's so fucking creepy how he stalks his family and friends the mc may seem nice and all but he is a fucking creepo that controls everyone he knows by killing their enemies.
ネタバレを明かす Get a editer it seems like it was run through Google translate. The words are rather jumbled and attempt at simile and metaphors are tricky to decipher. Gender words should be considered as reference to a species. Also the word larva was mistaken as ladies.
i gave u the 5 star for the promising story and the 120 chapter in 1 week . a man of focus indeed........................................................................................................
The novel is good but the orthography is bad, if the author improve his orthography (or gets a editor)and edits all the chapter I can see this novel in a much higher rank.
I cant understand the translation. Nothing matters if the translation is garbage. The expressions don't make sense, nothing makes sense. Those who stuck with it, I have to say super impressed.