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Dragon Knight> Jet Fighter the story sucks after the MC goes to another world to be a jet fighter This man has no goals or motivations (no ambition at all!) and he lacks a real personality, the only trait he has is blind loyalty. its almost like someone else wrote the first part ...
Our MC transmigrated into modern day from a fantasy realm to end up as a fighter pilot. Ignoring discrepancies the transition from fantasy to modern is bit rough and the flow at times as well. Not for me, but give it a go.
i had fun reading the first 60 chapters here and went to read the raw and i was quite happy with all the mc luck the enemies and most of the tech improvements (there really could have been a bigger jump at the end against sci fi ememies i would have liked it if china sold some of the alloy formulas mc gave them for tech from other countrys and i would have liked to see a 7th gen fighter and more upgrades for gold coin and i feel adam could have been done better he had 2 emotions hey just forgot about and after the eden attack they should have declared all mechanichal entrys have to be autherised and millitary notified at all times solving the evil murder bots just setting up a stall infront of confused civilians and the ending is so lackluster i cant even tell if its an end i mean the mc could have died??? or maybe hes just going to turtle for as long as possablecan he escape can he save his small harem??? why did gold coin even split too small for lockheed it should have not allowed spliting itself for fear of exactly what happened happen also why did adam decide to betray he jumped into the hands of society completly more threatening then ours for the reason of survival also the (spears) should have had the metal eaten by gold coin in the first place for a different story it would have been more fun to see the enemy green then what happened
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Nice excellent addictive good story line and very good novel to read and also plenty of choice to pick and very imiginative. Make it fun to read while on holiday or during off day.
I'm really looking forward to more of this story. pretty niche genre but definitely a thrill so far. Haven't seen any real typos and the story has steady progression without useless filler chapters
interesting storry and a very new was of Plot... even If i would prefere If it would Play a litle Bit in the Future BC the Jet He is flying ATM is crap ^^
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Poop you poop popman apnn in Soho lang Jin land ma lund p p xD xD 😝😝😝 Yun Ching ping Ling tong. Samui go iiizixic iizixi😑😴😶 iziiziiisixii
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This was one of my favorite novels ive read on this app anD i would recommend this to people that love to read and Just Keep reading!!!!!!!!
so far so good can't wait too see what happens next, good page tuner. i do want to say happens but don't want spoiled but for anyone. just trust me a good read
good novel with vast world backgriounfd and interesting topic [img=recommend] i definitely recommend reading it which is a new topic within military background
This is obviously a stolen idea from when Astolfo was using the Metal Dragon Rager to fist (Astolfo_My_Waifu)'s rear entrance like holy shit atleast make the cover looking less than rider astolfo.
Get past the first 20 chapters then it became something that could keep you busy when you are bored (still there is a bit of sneaky annoying nationalism)
MC and surrounding characters have good interactions, the only off putting is the special mention of the "deliciousness of the dog meat" that they ate at a korean(lol) dog meat restaurant and the cliche gangster that should appear at a nearby military academy
I really enjoy this book because it's very unique in the sense of the genre. I hope people vote for it! Ok for the character: he changes and progresses like a normal human being but because of (small spoiler) his conflicting souls from transmigration, it's not very clear if he is a new person or not. Anyways a story about a pilot is rare and this one is enjoyable to read and it has nice translation too.
anyone reading this has to get passed book 1. At least skim it bc book 1 is before the actual story is. Before he becomes the op jet/dragon flyer that helps china become number 1. So hold ur comments till u get the full picture. oh yes and the number of run on sentences. dear god.
This is obviously a stolen idea from when lancelot was using the F-15 to fight gilgamesh like holy shit atleast make the cover looking less than berserker lancelot
The story of a reincarnated op "air force pilot/dragon knight" supposedly helping china reach the top of the world. Period. p.s.- How much op can a fucking pilot become ??
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Dragon Knight> Jet Fighter the story sucks after the MC goes to another world to be a jet fighter This man has no goals or motivations (no ambition at all!) and he lacks a real personality, the only trait he has is blind loyalty. its almost like someone else wrote the first part ...
Our MC transmigrated into modern day from a fantasy realm to end up as a fighter pilot. Ignoring discrepancies the transition from fantasy to modern is bit rough and the flow at times as well. Not for me, but give it a go.
i had fun reading the first 60 chapters here and went to read the raw and i was quite happy with all the mc luck the enemies and most of the tech improvements (there really could have been a bigger jump at the end against sci fi ememies i would have liked it if china sold some of the alloy formulas mc gave them for tech from other countrys and i would have liked to see a 7th gen fighter and more upgrades for gold coin and i feel adam could have been done better he had 2 emotions hey just forgot about and after the eden attack they should have declared all mechanichal entrys have to be autherised and millitary notified at all times solving the evil murder bots just setting up a stall infront of confused civilians and the ending is so lackluster i cant even tell if its an end i mean the mc could have died??? or maybe hes just going to turtle for as long as possablecan he escape can he save his small harem??? why did gold coin even split too small for lockheed it should have not allowed spliting itself for fear of exactly what happened happen also why did adam decide to betray he jumped into the hands of society completly more threatening then ours for the reason of survival also the (spears) should have had the metal eaten by gold coin in the first place for a different story it would have been more fun to see the enemy green then what happened
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
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Nice excellent addictive good story line and very good novel to read and also plenty of choice to pick and very imiginative. Make it fun to read while on holiday or during off day.
I'm really looking forward to more of this story. pretty niche genre but definitely a thrill so far. Haven't seen any real typos and the story has steady progression without useless filler chapters
interesting storry and a very new was of Plot... even If i would prefere If it would Play a litle Bit in the Future BC the Jet He is flying ATM is crap ^^
It alright gjsjdjfjdjdjdjfjfhfirei so rkfjtkekdjdjfkrjrjjddjekskfjfjdiriritjfjfjrjdjcidjdigjejgnfkrkfgjgirjfjfrjvjfjvirifjgjfjfjgjandidifjfjfjfjfjdjfjdjdifufjrndnjrjfjfjrjrjei
Poop you poop popman apnn in Soho lang Jin land ma lund p p xD xD 😝😝😝 Yun Ching ping Ling tong. Samui go iiizixic iizixi😑😴😶 iziiziiisixii
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which sentence below is a compound sentence when the trainwhich sentence below is a compound sentence when the trainwhich sentence below is a compound sentence when the trainwhich sentence below is a compound sentence when the train
This was one of my favorite novels ive read on this app anD i would recommend this to people that love to read and Just Keep reading!!!!!!!!
so far so good can't wait too see what happens next, good page tuner. i do want to say happens but don't want spoiled but for anyone. just trust me a good read
good novel with vast world backgriounfd and interesting topic [img=recommend] i definitely recommend reading it which is a new topic within military background
This is obviously a stolen idea from when Astolfo was using the Metal Dragon Rager to fist (Astolfo_My_Waifu)'s rear entrance like holy shit atleast make the cover looking less than rider astolfo.
Get past the first 20 chapters then it became something that could keep you busy when you are bored (still there is a bit of sneaky annoying nationalism)
MC and surrounding characters have good interactions, the only off putting is the special mention of the "deliciousness of the dog meat" that they ate at a korean(lol) dog meat restaurant and the cliche gangster that should appear at a nearby military academy
I really enjoy this book because it's very unique in the sense of the genre. I hope people vote for it! Ok for the character: he changes and progresses like a normal human being but because of (small spoiler) his conflicting souls from transmigration, it's not very clear if he is a new person or not. Anyways a story about a pilot is rare and this one is enjoyable to read and it has nice translation too.
anyone reading this has to get passed book 1. At least skim it bc book 1 is before the actual story is. Before he becomes the op jet/dragon flyer that helps china become number 1. So hold ur comments till u get the full picture. oh yes and the number of run on sentences. dear god.
This is obviously a stolen idea from when lancelot was using the F-15 to fight gilgamesh like holy shit atleast make the cover looking less than berserker lancelot
The story of a reincarnated op "air force pilot/dragon knight" supposedly helping china reach the top of the world. Period. p.s.- How much op can a fucking pilot become ??
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