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This story is very emotional and a first of its kind(I believe) on webnovel. The author has written the plot in a simple and clear way. But sometimes it becomes confusing when there is a change in the POV. Make the scenes a little slow and elaborate it more, if possible. Otherwise, the concept chosen for the story is mindblowing. Keep up the good work author.
This novel portrays about the harsh realities of life. It speaks about the truth and tells the exact happenings in the real world. This book is filled with lessons. The main character teaches the reader to how to follow their dreams despite of circumstances. I'm inspired by this book. This book is full of potential. Please keep writing and inspire your readers! Salamat!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
Nice story about a romance between a blind girl and a shy but popular boy. Sometimes the dialogue feels like it's trying too hard to be poetic and things feel a tad rushed in certain moments, but its a cool premise, and the characters are all likable and charming.
Okay! So far! It was quite good at the start but suddenly I felt lost due to some grammatical errors or maybe I missed some indicators. There were suprise appearances from random characters but so far it was good. Please don’t take any offense from what I said. Over time you’ll improve! I’m not the best but I’ll keep supporting you. More motivation for you author! I like the story!
The story has an excellent plot, an uncommon one in this website. There are no misspelled words or terms, and the writing is created uniquely. One thing I love about the book is how the author portrays the characters. You can really feel them, and somehow imagine how they look like thanks to the author's vivid descriptions. Quite exciting, this book is and it has a smooth pace so far since I've currently read ten chapters. Character Development, nothing to complain about this category either. As for the stability of updates, I'll just assume that you update everyday haha! Anyways author, you've done a good job and it is obvious to me that you have put a lot of effort into this. Keep up the good work! As for grammar, I'm bad at it too so I have no right to judge yours. Anyways! Keep writing!
Yeet!!! Just from the start It was already portrayed the main character's goal!!! Another yeet for you!!! Bullying is something I hate too, I was never bullied myself, but my friend was and It's really a sad past from me. But nah, who cares about my past anyways. Story Development was done nicely, not fast nor slow. Sophie's character is something all of us can relate to! You have a nice book so keep up the good work
I like the background of the main character as she is now struggling. The pacing of it is pretty good. I now know that she has a goal. This will be a good read and its carefully edited.
ok, let me collect my though. So the story is well written you can feel the emotion of the character how their life goes 180. I don,t like to see innocent people get bullied, etc. If this happened in my novel then the outcome will be a bloodbath. I hope that girl achieve something in her life. But it is realistic about the people in today's world as most people care about only their money and reputation. To writer => It's the well-written story that can easily say 9.3 out of 10. I did,t notice a major flaw and it truly is well written because you feel bad for the girl and want the things to improve for her. Overall It is great.
I have to honestly say the prologue almost brought me to tears and i cant wait to read more of the story and see where sofies life takes her.
Miss Write of the year goes to your author! I love your story! Don’t stop and keep updating, let’s work hard and get to the top, we can and do work hard, so don’t stop and keep updating!
Omg, this story is such a gem! I feel immense compassion for Sophie but I belive she will grow strong stand against who bully her and I hope the ML will support her in this fight. And looking forward to more character development and the blooming love story. Thank you for writing this story author loved it truely.
This has a nostalgic middles school vibes. I like it! Bullying must never be tolerated. I wish to see Sophie standing up to the bullies herself, instead of a knight in shining armor always doing the work. Go Sophie! I feel like you could work more on your grammar? I think it will be easy for you! Your work is going to look better :) Also, the abrupt changes in POV is quite confusing? For some reason, maybe I'm just stupid. Sorry! I want to see Sophie's character to develop and also her synergy with the ML! Please continue writing! You are a fantastic author!
As it is just the start, it id hard to review but still there are points which can say the novel is quite intresting. Grammar 👍. Good luck!
Looks like I’m the first review. So far so good, the work has established the goal of the character at the first chapter. It will be hard to review a book with only a chapter, but I guess I’ll be looking forward to it. Best of luck in your writing.
Ah, only twenty chapters in this book so far. all the books you write are so good. I can't wait for the next chapter.... 👁️👄👁️ please let it be soon
This story is very emotional and a first of its kind(I believe) on webnovel. The author has written the plot in a simple and clear way. But sometimes it becomes confusing when there is a change in the POV. Make the scenes a little slow and elaborate it more, if possible. Otherwise, the concept chosen for the story is mindblowing. Keep up the good work author.
This novel portrays about the harsh realities of life. It speaks about the truth and tells the exact happenings in the real world. This book is filled with lessons. The main character teaches the reader to how to follow their dreams despite of circumstances. I'm inspired by this book. This book is full of potential. Please keep writing and inspire your readers! Salamat!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
Nice story about a romance between a blind girl and a shy but popular boy. Sometimes the dialogue feels like it's trying too hard to be poetic and things feel a tad rushed in certain moments, but its a cool premise, and the characters are all likable and charming.
Okay! So far! It was quite good at the start but suddenly I felt lost due to some grammatical errors or maybe I missed some indicators. There were suprise appearances from random characters but so far it was good. Please don’t take any offense from what I said. Over time you’ll improve! I’m not the best but I’ll keep supporting you. More motivation for you author! I like the story!
The story has an excellent plot, an uncommon one in this website. There are no misspelled words or terms, and the writing is created uniquely. One thing I love about the book is how the author portrays the characters. You can really feel them, and somehow imagine how they look like thanks to the author's vivid descriptions. Quite exciting, this book is and it has a smooth pace so far since I've currently read ten chapters. Character Development, nothing to complain about this category either. As for the stability of updates, I'll just assume that you update everyday haha! Anyways author, you've done a good job and it is obvious to me that you have put a lot of effort into this. Keep up the good work! As for grammar, I'm bad at it too so I have no right to judge yours. Anyways! Keep writing!
Yeet!!! Just from the start It was already portrayed the main character's goal!!! Another yeet for you!!! Bullying is something I hate too, I was never bullied myself, but my friend was and It's really a sad past from me. But nah, who cares about my past anyways. Story Development was done nicely, not fast nor slow. Sophie's character is something all of us can relate to! You have a nice book so keep up the good work
I like the background of the main character as she is now struggling. The pacing of it is pretty good. I now know that she has a goal. This will be a good read and its carefully edited.
ok, let me collect my though. So the story is well written you can feel the emotion of the character how their life goes 180. I don,t like to see innocent people get bullied, etc. If this happened in my novel then the outcome will be a bloodbath. I hope that girl achieve something in her life. But it is realistic about the people in today's world as most people care about only their money and reputation. To writer => It's the well-written story that can easily say 9.3 out of 10. I did,t notice a major flaw and it truly is well written because you feel bad for the girl and want the things to improve for her. Overall It is great.
I have to honestly say the prologue almost brought me to tears and i cant wait to read more of the story and see where sofies life takes her.
Miss Write of the year goes to your author! I love your story! Don’t stop and keep updating, let’s work hard and get to the top, we can and do work hard, so don’t stop and keep updating!
Omg, this story is such a gem! I feel immense compassion for Sophie but I belive she will grow strong stand against who bully her and I hope the ML will support her in this fight. And looking forward to more character development and the blooming love story. Thank you for writing this story author loved it truely.
This has a nostalgic middles school vibes. I like it! Bullying must never be tolerated. I wish to see Sophie standing up to the bullies herself, instead of a knight in shining armor always doing the work. Go Sophie! I feel like you could work more on your grammar? I think it will be easy for you! Your work is going to look better :) Also, the abrupt changes in POV is quite confusing? For some reason, maybe I'm just stupid. Sorry! I want to see Sophie's character to develop and also her synergy with the ML! Please continue writing! You are a fantastic author!
As it is just the start, it id hard to review but still there are points which can say the novel is quite intresting. Grammar 👍. Good luck!
Looks like I’m the first review. So far so good, the work has established the goal of the character at the first chapter. It will be hard to review a book with only a chapter, but I guess I’ll be looking forward to it. Best of luck in your writing.
Ah, only twenty chapters in this book so far. all the books you write are so good. I can't wait for the next chapter.... 👁️👄👁️ please let it be soon