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Hey guys Author Here I wanted to describe the story The mc is a manipulative guy who will use the people around him to obtain benefits. This isn't a harem but there will be a romance late in the story. So if you don't like this type of mc don't read it.
It greatly amuses me how many people are like oh my god why didn't you take kushina. Well the author is setting up a manipulative character and clearly stated he just wanted to learn seals from her. So people who are complaining are honestly idiot's. I enjoy this story so if your gonna to write a review for a story least make it fair and use your honest opinion. Not saying he gave up on kushina so now I'm giving the story one star review. Reviews and comments should be used as constructive criticism and to inform people of what they are getting into. This author does a good job with his story. His character is not some radical power hunger irrational character that most people make when trying to go for a manipulative character. I enjoy his slow but fast development the author uses. Another big plus is that the author has a steady releases. For those who read this thank you for reading and hope you end up enjoying this great fanfic like me.
It was a verry good series I am looking forward to the next part i hope you do not drop the fanfic i would like to see this series completed and I am also thinking of visiting more of your fanfics
Plz continue this book it’s great............................................................................................................
Yea so.. this story has a lot of potential. But same problem for me that he didn't get paired with the red-hot habanero. I understand that you want to follow the canon but why say that you want to make her fall for the mc. Then make her leave the mc in the next chapter. In the synopsis you wrote that there will be someone who has a place in mc's heart if not kushina then who is it? If its not tsunade then im sure the MC will be a lolicon.. *slowly picks up phone and call FBI*
The main character doesn't own up to how his character was designed... Poorly executed in my own opinion... It showed promise at the beginning but failed to deliver... Though I won't know how it'll go for others as I dropped this early on...
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It's a good naruto fanfic. I just wish there were more chapters. The author should write more often. Kudos to you author san. Post more chapters
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I like this very mucchh dont listet to other people. :::::: _::::::7 :::::::7 :_:_:_:_: :_:_:_:_: :_:__: _:_:_:__: _:_:_::_:_ :__:__:............................................................................................
Yea so.. this story has a lot of potential. But same problem for me that he didn't get paired with the red-hot habanero. I understand that you want to follow the canon but why say that you want to make her fall for the mc. Then make her leave the mc in the next chapter. In the synopsis you wrote that there will be someone who has a place in mc's heart if not kushina then who is it? If its not tsunade then im sure the MC will be a lolicon.. *slowly picks up phone and call FBI*
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I like This 👍👍👍👍 ............................................................................................................................................
disappointed especially in chapter 8 leaving kushina for others. disappointed especially in chapter 8 leaving kushina for others disappointed especially in chapter 8 leaving kushina for others disappointed especially in chapter 8 leaving kushina for others disappointed especially in chapter 8 leaving kushina for others
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I like this a lot MC is very manipulative hehe wonder what his summons would be. what animal best suits a mafia boss? giant wolfs would be cool as fk
Hey guys Author Here I wanted to describe the story The mc is a manipulative guy who will use the people around him to obtain benefits. This isn't a harem but there will be a romance late in the story. So if you don't like this type of mc don't read it.
It greatly amuses me how many people are like oh my god why didn't you take kushina. Well the author is setting up a manipulative character and clearly stated he just wanted to learn seals from her. So people who are complaining are honestly idiot's. I enjoy this story so if your gonna to write a review for a story least make it fair and use your honest opinion. Not saying he gave up on kushina so now I'm giving the story one star review. Reviews and comments should be used as constructive criticism and to inform people of what they are getting into. This author does a good job with his story. His character is not some radical power hunger irrational character that most people make when trying to go for a manipulative character. I enjoy his slow but fast development the author uses. Another big plus is that the author has a steady releases. For those who read this thank you for reading and hope you end up enjoying this great fanfic like me.
It was a verry good series I am looking forward to the next part i hope you do not drop the fanfic i would like to see this series completed and I am also thinking of visiting more of your fanfics
Plz continue this book it’s great............................................................................................................
Yea so.. this story has a lot of potential. But same problem for me that he didn't get paired with the red-hot habanero. I understand that you want to follow the canon but why say that you want to make her fall for the mc. Then make her leave the mc in the next chapter. In the synopsis you wrote that there will be someone who has a place in mc's heart if not kushina then who is it? If its not tsunade then im sure the MC will be a lolicon.. *slowly picks up phone and call FBI*
The main character doesn't own up to how his character was designed... Poorly executed in my own opinion... It showed promise at the beginning but failed to deliver... Though I won't know how it'll go for others as I dropped this early on...
👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
It's a good naruto fanfic. I just wish there were more chapters. The author should write more often. Kudos to you author san. Post more chapters
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I like this very mucchh dont listet to other people. :::::: _::::::7 :::::::7 :_:_:_:_: :_:_:_:_: :_:__: _:_:_:__: _:_:_::_:_ :__:__:............................................................................................
Yea so.. this story has a lot of potential. But same problem for me that he didn't get paired with the red-hot habanero. I understand that you want to follow the canon but why say that you want to make her fall for the mc. Then make her leave the mc in the next chapter. In the synopsis you wrote that there will be someone who has a place in mc's heart if not kushina then who is it? If its not tsunade then im sure the MC will be a lolicon.. *slowly picks up phone and call FBI*
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I like This 👍👍👍👍 ............................................................................................................................................
disappointed especially in chapter 8 leaving kushina for others. disappointed especially in chapter 8 leaving kushina for others disappointed especially in chapter 8 leaving kushina for others disappointed especially in chapter 8 leaving kushina for others disappointed especially in chapter 8 leaving kushina for others
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I like this a lot MC is very manipulative hehe wonder what his summons would be. what animal best suits a mafia boss? giant wolfs would be cool as fk