Reviews of Naruto’s God Tree’s Fruit in Other World by o0Zero0o - Webnovel

(hello, I'm Russian, so the review was translated into English with the help of google translator, but since you went to the MLT book page, this is not a problem for you, right?) There will be spoilers, a lot. First, I'll say right away that Objectively, this novel does not have a single plus, so I'll start right away with the minuses: 1. Of course this is machine translation. (unexpected, isn't it?) 2. Templates: it feels like the author has set himself the goal of sculpting his work entirely from templates. Look: MC is transported to the world of cultivation with the fruit of the divine tree Naruto, in the body of a weak, blind, nine-year-old (!!!) boy who was the son of a servant and a powerful bati-aristocrat. After the death of his mother, the boy's eyes were gouged out (for some petty shit), he was ****ed up and driven to another "weakest continent". There are only seven continents, and guess what? The mother told the boy that she was from some other continent, which is not among the known seven continents, what could this mean? Interesting? Of course not. MC merges with the soul of the kid and of course vows to take revenge. MC eats the fruit and gains Naruto's chakra and bloodlines. Cool? Yes. Powerful? No. The fact is that the MC has not completely digested the fruit, and it sits in his stomach, requires herbs and spiritual plants. The gy has a byakugan and a tenseigan in his eyes, there is a rhinnesharingan between the eyebrows, projecting the power of the office, the MC can use a rinnegan and a sharingan. This is kind of powerful. But here we have a typical Chinese situation: MC has a heavenly treasure that he cannot use due to his weakness. The rinnesharingan is closed, the rinnegan is dead weight, the byakugan cannot see beyond 0.6 miles, the sharingan has one tomoe, only the tenseigan is good for something. The chakra is very small, although it would be logical if the MC would receive something like Hashirama's special physique. Although it is obvious that the author wanted to even out the balance in this way, so that the MC from the very beginning would not be the strongest and would not break the plot. The author needs to stick to the stereotyped shit "MC pumps up muscle - -> victory over the main boss - -> change location - -> meeting an arrogant master - -> MC pumps up muscle". The environment of the MC is simply enchanting, everywhere traitors, arrogant bastards trash. Even children did not escape this fate. Children under ten years old scoff at their victims in all seriousness, joke maliciously, grin, throw idioms, kill orphans and well-to-do babies. The "good ones" are incredibly useless and weak bastards who have to be rescued every 5 minutes. I especially hate the brother and sister couple, incredibly honest kind, willing to do anything for the MC. They appear suddenly at the beginning of the story. I could hardly believe my eyes as the author shamelessly shoved these bastards in the face of the reader. Where were you when the eyeless MC was beaten by a bunch of bastard kids? They are, like the "main good fellows", incredibly useless and the MC will have to pull them along. It turns out they came from the same continent as the MC, and this is presented as the reason for their strong friendship (although they learned about this much later). What is the first arc: the Lin clan selects students from 300 orphans. They are directed to the "area" behind the "fiery flowers". MC learned that these flowers suck out the "spiritual root" from people and this whole production is carried out with the aim of fertilizing the flowers. And what did he come up with? Pull out as many flowers as possible so that fewer toddlers suffer ... In the course of the plot, it turns out that the people of the Lin clan are even more bastard than we thought, and in general they are not people. The little ones that our MC wanted to "protect" also do not deserve compassion. But our MC keeps on looking for flowers ... Get the **** out of there. 3. One can feel the "invisible hand of the author", that is, the plot does not go in the direction of the logical development of events, but in the direction that the author wanted, in the direction of templates. The author seems to be afraid to do something new, to take a step aside. If it weren't for Naruto's elements, I would have quit even earlier.