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update please. I'm just like your mc getting bored waiting for updates of good fanfics. If you're from Philippines, then kabayan gawa ka ng novel about pinas with mix of everything. hahaha. btw good fic 👍
che la historia tenie buena pinta ¿fue abandonada o estás en pausa? jjkkkkjjjjrdispwookwissksjsiiikskdwkwiiksksksissikksisijdkiekedkekeiie esto de arriba solo es para poder publicarlo
this Is a completely new path that has never been taken you should definitely keep writing this overall I'm excited to see how you take this story
I like it so far ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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If you dropp this book i Will find you and I Will beat you UNTIL you CONTINUE i know where you live!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story is great man, don't give up, our MC is a man of Culture. Hope the mc restart the Eldian Empire it would be really intresting if Eren becomes the new Emperor😂.
.............................. ................................................. ................................................. ......EXP ;)
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why did u delete this chapter....?........…..pls re upload ...asap....nice work......................... ....................................,...................................
This is basically standard AoT fanfiction with OOC portrayals of the characters. Ignoring that, it moves along at a moderate pace that might be too slow if you want action, but should be fine if you like "slice of life" stories. It's a bonus if you liked the web novel "Bringing The Farm To Live In Another World." Grammar and spelling mistakes abound, but no worse than many original stories on the site. However, the author's writing style gets particularly annoying when it switches between first and third person with little or no warning, and from character to character. This is contrary to good writing in which one perspective is chosen and used throughout the text. For this story, I would recommend that the writer sticks to a third person narrative, in order to improve readability. If you don't have anything else to read, this is should be a decent filler while you're waiting for another chapter to get released. However, this story's release rate is rather slow, so don't expect too much. Either that or wait until there's a good number of chapters released before you start reading.
The labels moved me, I had expectations with the story but now I am totally disappointed. The MC seems like the typical filler character, well, the writing is not bad and it is understood correctly but there are many plot errors and there is nothing interesting that catches me. Peace and good luck to the author!
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Its a good book and I cant wait for more chapters but I hope the author is well and stays safe
where are you author........................................................... you have not updated for ages................................................................................................ did you drop......................................................................... plz tell us...............................................................................
It is truly an uncalled disappointment that this novel has been put into hiatus/drop (I do not know what is the status of this novel). The author has not updated yet and the story is so far engaging.........
You say that you hate when novels drop or go on hiatus without warning yet you do the same thing................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Hypocrite.
oh ****, here we go writing againg, i giorno giovanna have a drem, and it is more beautiful than my gold embroiled toilet paper because mudamudamudamudamudamudamuda
just exp farm i guess? is it legal, hope its not prohibited cause i really need more daily fast pass, filling."............................................
I enjoy this novel so far and hope you continue it. I have never been that big of a fan of AOT so will not speak on its quality as a fanfiction but I do love the story that the farm system originates from and am very excited to see new ways in which you develop it. I do think that the romance can be taken down a notch or two and focus on developing the world and story. This comes from someone who doesn't like overly romantic or harem centric stories so if that's what you are going for then please ignore my opinion. I rated you around average across the bored but if you work at developing your story and characters a little further as you move forward i feel confident that it will be worth a higher score in the future. Please keep writing this novel this is a style I love and feel there is far to few well done magical space system novels out there.
COOL................?....................?...............................................................................................................................
this is not fanfiction attack on titan ....................... this is fanfiction farmers system 😓😓😓 .............................. 😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤
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So I am editing this one. Chapters will be available again soon so just wait for it. Thank you. I also wanted to say that I will also make a few changes with it along the way so don't be surprise if ever you see one especially for my old readers .
update please. I'm just like your mc getting bored waiting for updates of good fanfics. If you're from Philippines, then kabayan gawa ka ng novel about pinas with mix of everything. hahaha. btw good fic 👍
che la historia tenie buena pinta ¿fue abandonada o estás en pausa? jjkkkkjjjjrdispwookwissksjsiiikskdwkwiiksksksissikksisijdkiekedkekeiie esto de arriba solo es para poder publicarlo
this Is a completely new path that has never been taken you should definitely keep writing this overall I'm excited to see how you take this story
I like it so far ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
If you dropp this book i Will find you and I Will beat you UNTIL you CONTINUE i know where you live!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story is great man, don't give up, our MC is a man of Culture. Hope the mc restart the Eldian Empire it would be really intresting if Eren becomes the new Emperor😂.
.............................. ................................................. ................................................. ......EXP ;)
good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
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why did u delete this chapter....?........…..pls re upload ...asap....nice work......................... ....................................,...................................
This is basically standard AoT fanfiction with OOC portrayals of the characters. Ignoring that, it moves along at a moderate pace that might be too slow if you want action, but should be fine if you like "slice of life" stories. It's a bonus if you liked the web novel "Bringing The Farm To Live In Another World." Grammar and spelling mistakes abound, but no worse than many original stories on the site. However, the author's writing style gets particularly annoying when it switches between first and third person with little or no warning, and from character to character. This is contrary to good writing in which one perspective is chosen and used throughout the text. For this story, I would recommend that the writer sticks to a third person narrative, in order to improve readability. If you don't have anything else to read, this is should be a decent filler while you're waiting for another chapter to get released. However, this story's release rate is rather slow, so don't expect too much. Either that or wait until there's a good number of chapters released before you start reading.
The labels moved me, I had expectations with the story but now I am totally disappointed. The MC seems like the typical filler character, well, the writing is not bad and it is understood correctly but there are many plot errors and there is nothing interesting that catches me. Peace and good luck to the author!
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
Its a good book and I cant wait for more chapters but I hope the author is well and stays safe
where are you author........................................................... you have not updated for ages................................................................................................ did you drop......................................................................... plz tell us...............................................................................
It is truly an uncalled disappointment that this novel has been put into hiatus/drop (I do not know what is the status of this novel). The author has not updated yet and the story is so far engaging.........
You say that you hate when novels drop or go on hiatus without warning yet you do the same thing................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Hypocrite.
oh ****, here we go writing againg, i giorno giovanna have a drem, and it is more beautiful than my gold embroiled toilet paper because mudamudamudamudamudamudamuda
just exp farm i guess? is it legal, hope its not prohibited cause i really need more daily fast pass, filling."............................................
I enjoy this novel so far and hope you continue it. I have never been that big of a fan of AOT so will not speak on its quality as a fanfiction but I do love the story that the farm system originates from and am very excited to see new ways in which you develop it. I do think that the romance can be taken down a notch or two and focus on developing the world and story. This comes from someone who doesn't like overly romantic or harem centric stories so if that's what you are going for then please ignore my opinion. I rated you around average across the bored but if you work at developing your story and characters a little further as you move forward i feel confident that it will be worth a higher score in the future. Please keep writing this novel this is a style I love and feel there is far to few well done magical space system novels out there.
COOL................?....................?...............................................................................................................................
this is not fanfiction attack on titan ....................... this is fanfiction farmers system 😓😓😓 .............................. 😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤😤
**************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
So I am editing this one. Chapters will be available again soon so just wait for it. Thank you. I also wanted to say that I will also make a few changes with it along the way so don't be surprise if ever you see one especially for my old readers .