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87.2% In the immortal Land I invented The Cell Phone! / Chapter 518: Fresh Out Of The Oven! Lin Keer's Complaints!

章 518: Fresh Out Of The Oven! Lin Keer's Complaints!

And the outside world is worried about a hundred years later.

When the Du family emperor threatened to descend with a celestial weapon.

In Tianyan Holy Land, Ye Chen, his master Nangong Wan, and his apprentice Lin Keer were on the top of the Holy Master Peak.

Sitting on the recliner very comfortably, enjoying the sun and looking at the sea of ​​clouds.

now.

The second application after this exit has already made a rough prototype.

And named it Xianwang Novel.

And web novels.

Ye Chen has also produced several localized books.

"Fingers Covering the Sky"!

Ye Chen modifies the environment of the earth.

Set as an ordinary star with no practitioners.

The protagonist Ye Hei is having a party with a group of classmates and friends.

Climb the first holy mountain.

As a result, the Kowloon dragged the coffin down, and a group of people entered the coffin, starting a magnificent journey of the emperor of the fairy world.

And "Fights Break the Sky"

Ye Chen directly changed the title of his book to Immortal Breaking the Sky!

The identity of the main character, the traverser, was directly deleted.

Because even in the original book, the protagonist's identity as a time traveler is meaningless.

Except for a few words at the beginning, it has no effect at all.

In addition to deleting the identity of the protagonist's time traveler.

Ye Chen also modified the background of Dou Po Sky.

The original Dou Qi background has been turned into a cultivation background.

The protagonist has become a genius with dual spiritual roots of fire and wood.

Relying on Grandpa Ring, a skill that can devour and fuse flames.

In the end, he became a fairy, left the world of cultivating immortals, and ascended to the world of immortals.

Except for these two male novels.

Ye Chen also changed a female video novel, Overbearing CEO Falls in Love with Me.

Of course, even the title of the book was changed.

After all, Xiu 377 Immortal World doesn't even have a company.

Where is the president from?

So it was directly changed to Overbearing Sovereign Falls in Love with Me!

The background of the story has naturally changed a lot.

It was directly changed to a first-class cultivating sect.

The suzerain inside is a top existence who is so cold and cold that no one can look down upon.

However, because the heroine was practicing flying swords, she accidentally destroyed the suzerain's favorite vase in the suzerain's palace, so she was noticed by the suzerain...

After that, all kinds of coquettish and sluts outside are completely despised.

He only fell in love with the heroine, the averagely talented, extremely stupid and cute outer disciple... …

From then on, a love story against heaven began!

In short, the routine is full.

Ye Chen directly asked Master Nangong Wan and Lin Ke'er to try it out to see if there is anything in the novel that is not suitable for the world of cultivating immortals.

Ye Chen thought so.

Master and Lin Ke'er would love to see the domineering suzerain fall in love with me even more.

However, what surprised Ye Chen was.

On the contrary, the two prefer to cover the sky with a snap of their fingers and break the sky with immortality.

As for the book that the domineering suzerain fell in love with me, both of them dismissed it.

Nangong Wan prefers the book "A Flick of a Finger Covers the Sky".

"The book that covers the sky with a snap of your fingers is indeed very interesting."

"A mortal world without the inheritance of practice, because of the sudden arrival of the Nine Dragons pulling the coffin, from then on across the stars, enter the world of cultivating immortals, and start the road of practice."

"It is indeed majestic."

"And the descriptions of the exercises and instruments in this book actually make some sense, which is quite mysterious."

"And the characters portrayed in it are also exceptional.

"For example, the Great Emperor Wushi who has his back to all living beings, who is the peak at the end of the immortal road, and when he meets Wushidao, he will become empty. This domineering and talent is probably better than real immortals.

"If there are such people among immortal cultivators, I'm afraid they will definitely be top-level existences."

"And the experience of the ruthless emperor is a bit embarrassing."

"In the world of cultivating immortals, mortals and little monks are just ants. It is perfectly normal to be driven by the big teacher to do hard labor. Many people die every year."

It is not uncommon for a human empress to be separated from her big brother for life and death. "

"And this werewolf empress is not weaker than the Great Emperor Wushi. She created her own skills, devoured countless heavenly talents, and finally made her decision. She is only one step away from becoming an immortal.

"There is also the dark turmoil, although there is no such thing in the world of cultivating immortals."

"But the longer a cultivator lives, the more reluctant he is to die."

"In the ancient time of Immortals, there were immortal cultivators who wanted to sacrifice half of the continent with blood in order to prolong their lives, but they were suppressed in the end."

"If you are a cultivator in the world of cultivating immortals, you can also proclaim yourself."

"I am afraid that in the world of cultivating immortals, there will be countless strong people who choose to proclaim themselves, thus ushering in darkness and turmoil. y

"The protagonist is also well portrayed, fighting for his life, sweeping away all enemies, and doing everything!"

"But I've read the whole book, and I have a few questions."

"Then what is the origin of Jiulong pulling the coffin?"

"And the protagonist, is it the reincarnation of Tuan Gao that the werewolf Emperor has been waiting for?"

"Actually, there are still many things that have not been written."

"This book can't be considered finished at all, why is it finished?"

In the end.

Master Nangong Wan inevitably felt a little dissatisfied, looking at Ye Chen, hoping that Ye Chen would complete those contents.

When Ye Chen heard this, he immediately smiled.

It's not without reason that the author who covered the sky with his fingers in the previous life was called a pit god in the Internet literature circle.

Because this person is the best at digging holes, and people can't stop watching them.

But the most hated thing is digging holes and not filling them.

After a book is finished, many pits are left unfilled.

With Ye Chen's current level, he can naturally fill in the pits.

But while it's possible, it's not necessary.

After all, many readers (ccaa) chased all the way to the end because of pitfalls.

If the hole is filled, it may not be so perfect.

Lin Ke'er, on the other hand, prefers the book Immortal Breaking the Sky.

"Master, you told me a part of this book before."

"It is indeed very good, especially the divorce at the beginning, which made me very angry.

"But now that I think about it carefully after reading it, that Nalan is not completely wrong. There is no problem with retiring the engagement. After all, why should he marry someone he doesn't know?"

"Her only fault was that she didn't talk about it in private, but in front of everyone, and didn't show the protagonist the slightest sympathy."

"The Emperor Huntian inside is also a hero, far superior to those evil cultivators in our cultivation world.

"However, the most exciting part of the whole book is the exercises that can devour strange fires, and all kinds of magical strange fires."

"Is there really such a magical strange fire in the world?"

After speaking, Lin Keer looked at Ye Chen.

And Ye Chen suddenly smiled and shook his head: "Of course not, it's just made up."

Lin Ke'er was still puzzled: "Why is the author named Chen Dong and E Dou instead of Shizun?"

Hearing this, Ye Chen smiled again.

This is called respecting the creative rights of others.

"Because these books were originally written by others, I just read them.

But Nangong Wan and Lin Ke'er didn't quite believe this explanation.

After all, Ye Chen was a mortal before.

Where can I get in touch with the people who write such stories.

And since then, he has been staying in Tianyan Holy Land.

If there are such people in the Holy Land, they will definitely know about it.

So the two women decided in their hearts.

This must be the story Ye Chen came up with.

The reason why Ye Chen didn't admit it was because although these novels were good, but Ye Chen's majestic combination period, writing these pretending stories seemed a bit out of place.

That's why a non-existent author was invented.

To this.

The two women were very understanding, so they didn't ask any more questions.

And Ye Chen asked: "Why don't you like this book about the overbearing suzerain falling in love with me?"

"I thought you guys would like this book better!"

Hearing this, Nangong Wan immediately rolled her eyes coquettishly: "This writing is too stupid!"

"He is a majestic suzerain, and he is also a genius. There are countless female cultivators who are equally talented."

"How could it be possible to fall in love with a stupid and unaware outer disciple?"

And Lin Ke'er nodded immediately: "Indeed!"

"How can an outer disciple be qualified to go to the front of the suzerain's hall to practice the sword?"

"Furthermore, Yu Jian broke the suzerain's favorite vase, which is definitely a serious crime. It could be expelled from the sect, or it could be destroyed.

"And because of this, she looks at this woman differently, how is this possible?"

"This book is too fake. To be honest, only those outer sect disciples with low cultivation bases who have never been in contact with the high-level sect, or casual cultivators would think so."

Ye Chen was immediately amused when he heard the complaints of the two women.

Ye Chen also understood.

Obviously, the two women are not the readers of this book, and the group will be so.

After all, one of the two women is the Supreme Elder in the mid-stage of Transformation God.

One is the saint of the First Great Holy Land.

They are all top figures in the world of cultivating immortals.

Naturally, I am not interested in this book.

Just like the earth, those senior women in the workplace will not like to read the book that the domineering CEO falls in love with me.

But that doesn't mean there's something wrong with the book.

Just like Lin Keer said.

Those outer sect female disciples and casual cultivators who have never met the suzerain and whose impression of the suzerain only exists in imagination, are the loyal readers of this book.

This is also normal.

After all, each book has its own corresponding readership.

It is impossible to have a book that everyone likes.

But it doesn't matter, as long as you can earn spirit stones...


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