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it is very bad done by disgust to read this the development of the characters and very bad done and the narration is horrible----------_------------------------
This novel is good at first and became down until the last chapter. Reason: Mc has kaleidoscope from worm universe which op ability. The problem, Mc is fused with sasaki kojiro so his personality is take over by sasaki kojiro too much.If mc didnt fuse with that servant, well will read story about how sould reincarnated person survive in goddamn difficult world,not this on which this mc refuse to using his own using his kaleidoscope too the fullest for silly reason. So if youre fan of samurai who like fairness on anything, have lack of stat except mana, has cafe, has one wife with one children. This is for you. Note to author: If youre try to remake this one, make sure to not fuse with that servant because it will destroy this story. Paham gan. Lol
Are you posting on royal road, it's because I saw this there. And I was wandering if you were the same author, are if you are plagiarizing his work?
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This is a nice story, hopefully you never stop writing it you are also the only one that use sasaki kojiro from all the servant to fusing with as far as i know so it is interesting cause i only see gilgamesh, emiya, and king arthur for servant to fusing with. All in all good story keep it up
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A CYOA story about a man that chose to be FSN Assassin and Kaleidoscope at the same time. With him being in the DxD world for the majority of the time there. After that, it is about what you've to expect as he levels up and gets waifus.
😂😂😂😂😁😱😱😁😁😱😱 😂😂😁🙄😁😱😱😁😁😱😱 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭😁😱😱😾😾 😱😱😱😱😱😱😂😱😱😾😾 😱😱😱😱😱😱😂😱😱😾😾 🤗😁😱😱😂😁😁😁😁😁😁 🤔🤣😱😱😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 🤔😁😱😱😁😱😱😱😱😱😱 🤣😁😱😱😁😱😱😱😱😱😱 🤔🤗😱😱😁😱😱😁😁😱😱 🤣😁😱😱😁😱😱😁😁😱😱 😁😁😁😁😁😱😱😱😱😱😱 🤭🤭🤭😁😁😱😱😱😱😱😱 😱😱😁😱😱😁😂😂😂😂😂 😱😱😁😱😱😁😂😂😂😂😂 😱😱🤔😱😱😁😱😱😁😱😱 😱😱😱😱😱😁😱😱😁😱😱 😱😱😱😱😱😁😱😱😁😱😱 😱😱😱😱😱😁😱😱😁😱😱 😱😱🤔😱😱😁😱😱😱😱😱 😱😱😁😱😱😁😱😱😱😱😱 😱😱😁😱😱😁😱😱😱😱😱 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😱😱😾😾😾😱😱😁😁😁😁 😱😱😾😾😾😱😱😁😁😁😁 😱😱😱😾😱😱😱😁😁😁😁 😱😱😱😾😱😱😱😁😁😁😁 🤣😱😱😱😱😱😁😁😁😁😁 🤣😱😱😱😱😱😁😁😁😁😁 😱😱😱😾😱😱😱😁😁😁😁 😱😱😱😾😱😱😱😁😁😁😁 😱😱😾😾😾😱😱😁😁😁😁 😱😱😾😾😾😱😱😭😁😁😁
It is definitely a fun read to breeze through, In little areas of the story some parts of it seem to drag out for a while, making you just kinda skim through. Other than that the story has a nice "Daily Life" feel to its progress which is nice for a quick read while relaxing (If you can ignore some grammar issues) Overall not a lot of disappointment to be had when reading this~
Please don't drop this.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
So far it's one of the best novels of it's kind...Keep it up! 👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
This story is one of the most bland and generic fictions I have seen on this site. The main character has no motivation, no well defined goal, just existing and getting stronger to complete a ROB given mission, nothing above that. He has absolutely no personality, being just an amalgamation of shounen main character stereotypes. The way the story is written is just irritating, the author gives you the conclusion of an arc in the first chapter and then presents the events of the arc in a series of semi-flashbacks from the view of random characters and even these are spoiled withing the first few paragraphs. The romance is half-arsed, Yasaka just straight up come up to him and asks him if he would like to have her as his wife since she fell in love with him after the "When I saw you do........I suddenly felt the capacity to love after........time" cliché. There is nothing interesting about this story, reading it feels like rewatching a generic shounen anime for the 7th time since you have nothing better to do, you know the plot of the next arc before the current one finishes.
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Just the fact that it’s a work CYOA got me excited, and the grammar is decent. ...........................................................................
I can see orphis coming for him for the fact he moved to another universe Isn't the demansion gap in between universes so I think see be able to sence it but not find him because of his mystery power
I don't know if canon inspired inventor could be use like yours... But I definitely appove of the OPness!!!!! Great job in using the charge and those knowledge!!! Although you didn't aim(or at least not yet, maybe?) For more of those thicc, but I'm good with only Yasaka.... Give a good fighting scene between the samurai and behemoth!! And use the NP in the menu by doing some challenge food item, the ten kg super fried rice that had few layer of flavour in it like a stack... Lowest level is sweet, second is salty, third is, spucy, foruth is bitter gourd, fifth is strawberry sour and sweet, six is seafood taste, seven is pork, very oily pork, eight is game meat deer(the taste is truly different, believe me), nine is egg flavour, ten and final stack is the freezy type.. Kind of like drinking coke frizzy bubbly taste(crab egg..)...
So far so good. Interesting prospect. Please keep it up. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
this is the only fanfic that i have found that uses inspired inventor and i love it for that the only one that i can see as better is one i thought up, where a sick neet died and gets two wishes and world of choice with the world being douluo dalu cause its my fav and the power inspired inventor and a celt's comfy trailer from the cyoa with most choices leaning to magic, i am not doing it cause i suck at writing so this is a close second for me
Hello there Luxvondeux. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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it is very bad done by disgust to read this the development of the characters and very bad done and the narration is horrible----------_------------------------
This novel is good at first and became down until the last chapter. Reason: Mc has kaleidoscope from worm universe which op ability. The problem, Mc is fused with sasaki kojiro so his personality is take over by sasaki kojiro too much.If mc didnt fuse with that servant, well will read story about how sould reincarnated person survive in goddamn difficult world,not this on which this mc refuse to using his own using his kaleidoscope too the fullest for silly reason. So if youre fan of samurai who like fairness on anything, have lack of stat except mana, has cafe, has one wife with one children. This is for you. Note to author: If youre try to remake this one, make sure to not fuse with that servant because it will destroy this story. Paham gan. Lol
Are you posting on royal road, it's because I saw this there. And I was wandering if you were the same author, are if you are plagiarizing his work?
Good fanfic........................................................ .....................................mm................ . ..................
PLEASW CONTINUE PLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUEPLEASW CONTINUE
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This is a nice story, hopefully you never stop writing it you are also the only one that use sasaki kojiro from all the servant to fusing with as far as i know so it is interesting cause i only see gilgamesh, emiya, and king arthur for servant to fusing with. All in all good story keep it up
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A CYOA story about a man that chose to be FSN Assassin and Kaleidoscope at the same time. With him being in the DxD world for the majority of the time there. After that, it is about what you've to expect as he levels up and gets waifus.
😂😂😂😂😁😱😱😁😁😱😱 😂😂😁🙄😁😱😱😁😁😱😱 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭😁😱😱😾😾 😱😱😱😱😱😱😂😱😱😾😾 😱😱😱😱😱😱😂😱😱😾😾 🤗😁😱😱😂😁😁😁😁😁😁 🤔🤣😱😱😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 🤔😁😱😱😁😱😱😱😱😱😱 🤣😁😱😱😁😱😱😱😱😱😱 🤔🤗😱😱😁😱😱😁😁😱😱 🤣😁😱😱😁😱😱😁😁😱😱 😁😁😁😁😁😱😱😱😱😱😱 🤭🤭🤭😁😁😱😱😱😱😱😱 😱😱😁😱😱😁😂😂😂😂😂 😱😱😁😱😱😁😂😂😂😂😂 😱😱🤔😱😱😁😱😱😁😱😱 😱😱😱😱😱😁😱😱😁😱😱 😱😱😱😱😱😁😱😱😁😱😱 😱😱😱😱😱😁😱😱😁😱😱 😱😱🤔😱😱😁😱😱😱😱😱 😱😱😁😱😱😁😱😱😱😱😱 😱😱😁😱😱😁😱😱😱😱😱 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😱😱😾😾😾😱😱😁😁😁😁 😱😱😾😾😾😱😱😁😁😁😁 😱😱😱😾😱😱😱😁😁😁😁 😱😱😱😾😱😱😱😁😁😁😁 🤣😱😱😱😱😱😁😁😁😁😁 🤣😱😱😱😱😱😁😁😁😁😁 😱😱😱😾😱😱😱😁😁😁😁 😱😱😱😾😱😱😱😁😁😁😁 😱😱😾😾😾😱😱😁😁😁😁 😱😱😾😾😾😱😱😭😁😁😁
It is definitely a fun read to breeze through, In little areas of the story some parts of it seem to drag out for a while, making you just kinda skim through. Other than that the story has a nice "Daily Life" feel to its progress which is nice for a quick read while relaxing (If you can ignore some grammar issues) Overall not a lot of disappointment to be had when reading this~
Please don't drop this.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
So far it's one of the best novels of it's kind...Keep it up! 👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
This story is one of the most bland and generic fictions I have seen on this site. The main character has no motivation, no well defined goal, just existing and getting stronger to complete a ROB given mission, nothing above that. He has absolutely no personality, being just an amalgamation of shounen main character stereotypes. The way the story is written is just irritating, the author gives you the conclusion of an arc in the first chapter and then presents the events of the arc in a series of semi-flashbacks from the view of random characters and even these are spoiled withing the first few paragraphs. The romance is half-arsed, Yasaka just straight up come up to him and asks him if he would like to have her as his wife since she fell in love with him after the "When I saw you do........I suddenly felt the capacity to love after........time" cliché. There is nothing interesting about this story, reading it feels like rewatching a generic shounen anime for the 7th time since you have nothing better to do, you know the plot of the next arc before the current one finishes.
xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xp
Just the fact that it’s a work CYOA got me excited, and the grammar is decent. ...........................................................................
I can see orphis coming for him for the fact he moved to another universe Isn't the demansion gap in between universes so I think see be able to sence it but not find him because of his mystery power
I don't know if canon inspired inventor could be use like yours... But I definitely appove of the OPness!!!!! Great job in using the charge and those knowledge!!! Although you didn't aim(or at least not yet, maybe?) For more of those thicc, but I'm good with only Yasaka.... Give a good fighting scene between the samurai and behemoth!! And use the NP in the menu by doing some challenge food item, the ten kg super fried rice that had few layer of flavour in it like a stack... Lowest level is sweet, second is salty, third is, spucy, foruth is bitter gourd, fifth is strawberry sour and sweet, six is seafood taste, seven is pork, very oily pork, eight is game meat deer(the taste is truly different, believe me), nine is egg flavour, ten and final stack is the freezy type.. Kind of like drinking coke frizzy bubbly taste(crab egg..)...
So far so good. Interesting prospect. Please keep it up. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
this is the only fanfic that i have found that uses inspired inventor and i love it for that the only one that i can see as better is one i thought up, where a sick neet died and gets two wishes and world of choice with the world being douluo dalu cause its my fav and the power inspired inventor and a celt's comfy trailer from the cyoa with most choices leaning to magic, i am not doing it cause i suck at writing so this is a close second for me
Hello there Luxvondeux. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
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