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I liked it, though as an English speaker, there were some grammar errors, but great story as most of the characters had different personalities and desires, it came together by making it feel as they couldn't really be without each other.
sadly I'm not a fan of slice of life, it's really good and this really deserves support so I gave you a five star review. I'm out and peace suckers!
Awesome book! Dont know what else to Write bUt if u see this review you should probably Read this.
Still waiting for the hheadmistress's turn✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁
I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within. If you don't mind, please read my web novel and don't forget to give a review: - Let Me Choose You - Who Are You - Facing Into The Sky Thanks🤍🤍🤍
Very good. The harem is thought out, so they won't just like the mc for no reason. The mc has issues himself, like his past and his uncle. Basically its good. pls don't include principal in harem. srsly tho, shes like 15 yrs older, and is basically a aunt
Good story grear author overall perfect can't wait wait for next chapters and future development so gonna support this srory uwuuwuwuwuwuwuu
I can't support it with spirit stones because I have my own novel to support. All I can do is support by giving you a five stars. Keep it up!!!!!
Good! Will this end up in a harem? Hope it would maybe the principal will join too. 😂😂😂😂😏😏😏😏👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫😆😆😆😆
I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!
I like this story , i hope u update it sooner 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Giving the 5 star to this story because i love it, like it and adore it. Maybe not a constant and daily update but i can still wait for it. Don't forget to update this book author. For the grammar it's okay there seems to be no mistake if i am not wrong because English is not my first language overall i quite like the story. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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This started off well but it lost me at the transition between the beach scene with Himawari and their relationship at the carnival the next day. And the fact that she slapped him for his response to what she said peeved me too. Not making me feel confident for the rest of the novel.
ネタバレを明かす I liked it, though as an English speaker, there were some grammar errors, but great story as most of the characters had different personalities and desires, it came together by making it feel as they couldn't really be without each other.
sadly I'm not a fan of slice of life, it's really good and this really deserves support so I gave you a five star review. I'm out and peace suckers!
Awesome book! Dont know what else to Write bUt if u see this review you should probably Read this.
Still waiting for the hheadmistress's turn✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁🏁
I'm admiring the story and plot... The characters are comprehensive for the story. This story just makes me wanna wriggle and feel tingly within. If you don't mind, please read my web novel and don't forget to give a review: - Let Me Choose You - Who Are You - Facing Into The Sky Thanks🤍🤍🤍
Very good. The harem is thought out, so they won't just like the mc for no reason. The mc has issues himself, like his past and his uncle. Basically its good. pls don't include principal in harem. srsly tho, shes like 15 yrs older, and is basically a aunt
Good story grear author overall perfect can't wait wait for next chapters and future development so gonna support this srory uwuuwuwuwuwuwuu
I can't support it with spirit stones because I have my own novel to support. All I can do is support by giving you a five stars. Keep it up!!!!!
Good! Will this end up in a harem? Hope it would maybe the principal will join too. 😂😂😂😂😏😏😏😏👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫🤫😆😆😆😆
I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!I need more!!!
I like this story , i hope u update it sooner 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Giving the 5 star to this story because i love it, like it and adore it. Maybe not a constant and daily update but i can still wait for it. Don't forget to update this book author. For the grammar it's okay there seems to be no mistake if i am not wrong because English is not my first language overall i quite like the story. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:S･ﾟ✧P *:･ﾟ*:･ﾟA✧ *:･ﾟ*:R･ﾟ✧K*:･ﾟL*:･ﾟ✧S*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･ﾟ*:･✧
This started off well but it lost me at the transition between the beach scene with Himawari and their relationship at the carnival the next day. And the fact that she slapped him for his response to what she said peeved me too. Not making me feel confident for the rest of the novel.
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