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Speed read through the first 15 chapters. This is a story with a terribly shameless protagonist who looks after #1, himself. An amusing read while waiting for releases of other stories.
THE MC is fricking annoying.......the plot is not bad and is fast paced enough. I couldn't stomach it, but if you can ignore the MC then you are good....
I love that de fei is a reformed player killer that show a greater thought about the character. He seem a more well rounded character in some interestingly tough situations.
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The development is slow, but fast paced in the first chapters. Which isn’t bad it’s detailed but continues quickly. I don’t know if the book was translated it was an option for the rating. And if it then it’s extremely well done there isn’t much grammar that could be spotted or corrected. Maybe except for all the swearing 😂
This novel has a rating of 9.2 with 1000's of votes that is a damn high rating. This kind of rating is given to novels like "Lord of Mysteries". But it's from 2013 so you can't trust it. Most of the novel of that time has quite high ratings while not being that good.
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Just adding a review so I can finish a "quest" have a nice day and enjoy reading your web novels so.... good bye and stay safe from the virus :P
Okay...let me be blunt. 1. The first three chapters are important. 2. The first three chapters are very important. and 3. The first three chapters, while important, aren't that significant to the beginning of the story...sorta... This is a story about a guy who decides to turn professional gamer. Unfortunately, (refer to chaps 1-3) he did some very childish things when he was a kid fresh out of school. Now that he's older, he's trying to ignore that part of his life with the latest, hottest VRMMO. Then karma comes and bites him in the...y'know... ^_^ You might not like the MC. His personality is abrasive and brash and hasn't really mellowed that much from that prologue, but he's a very realistic character and very entertaining. You might feel snarly about how he treats his sister's BF, but if she was my sister, I'd act the same way. Basically, this is an entertaining VRMMO story about a sorta reformed troll trying to trod the straight and narrow (and failing rather humorously). Totally hope it gets a full pickup because I did laugh quite a bit while reading of his misadventures (Katrina...lol...).
First three chapters named prelude show MC being a spiteful youth, seem to have upset other readers. However main story starts after this and he’s now calmer but still devious. Background settings of the story appears to be some derivative of the Heroes of Might and Magic universe.
i iike this novel. i like protagonist. story enjoyable but patroitis. i very like game about mekanisme, class, npc etc. i was reading this novel in other website but stopped.. i hope editor pick this novel.
A solid start to a book. Worth a look into, if nothing else. It does follow the usual trope of "weakling gets strong, acts dumb to well known tropes, we all cringe," sometimes. But it still is enjoyable to read.
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It's a very good book but I didn't read it I'm sorry you did all of that work but it just didn't interest me but I hope I speck for most people who read this that it is a very good novel
Very good VRMMO novel. (+)After read 60 chapters I view a "Overgeared" vibe with a trash mc. This mc is very arrogant not like Grid but he think about all the elements in this game. This Vrmmo game is interesting with complexe attribut, ambiance and good Npc/quest/aventure system. For now the chinese nationalism is not present but I think he will appear later. (-)They are too long explains for skills. The mc is mainly a man who WANT MONEY and it's really frustrating when he tries to sell all rare items that he finds. So this is a VRMMO novel with a trash /arrogant /strategist mc who looking for money at all costs.
I love this story. Please put it up soon. I can't wait for more chapters of this novel. Was already addicted after the tenth chapter or so. Hopefully, others will see it the same as me :))))))))
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Extremely unlikable MC. Not recommended at all unless you want to be brain dead. A trash among trash novels. After reading a few pages your IQ will drop by a few levels.
The novels protagonist isn't likable from the start which isn't a good sighn even if the story is good later on a unlikable mc that leaves a bad taste in your mouth is quite a red flag for me sorry qidian has picked quite uninteresting novels atleast for me if you guys like it great for you just not my cup of tea
I’m up to 1639 chapters in the MTL it is a pleasure to see it here and my demand accepted! If you like build up, this story is for you. That’s this story as well as its MC’s strength. Dafei is not some sort of PVP god, he uses everything at his disposal: weapons, NPCs, terrains, other players and logic. He dies sometimes, the spies in his rank are not magically busted, you don’t feel the plot armor. When he wins, it feels like he owned his victory. The author is very patriotic towards China and he makes his country looking stronger by making other countries stong rather than weak, game of alliances (and some favoritism, but it his country and his story, eh). For what might turn you down, the MC is harem seeking. But he’s honest about it and act like any guy would: he’d rather have girls than guys in his army. Surprisingly enough the girls actually have personality even when they’re NPCs. They’re not his, he can loose them. Sometimes they exploit him. The MC also like to talk to you about him, but without breaking the fourth wall, he’s like: Your bro (that’s him) is... If you like the MC in The Demon’s cage, you will like him.
I guarantee Webnovel will put this trash novel in the voting section for release. Whichever novel with the most soulstones used will be selected as editor choice? Yeah fucking right. They do a process where they release 8 books and then take away the novels that are highly rated since they don't want to put too many high quality books up at once. They want to maximize profit by milking money of trash novels and a few good ones. Only when 1 highly rated novel is done, will they put another out.
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Speed read through the first 15 chapters. This is a story with a terribly shameless protagonist who looks after #1, himself. An amusing read while waiting for releases of other stories.
THE MC is fricking annoying.......the plot is not bad and is fast paced enough. I couldn't stomach it, but if you can ignore the MC then you are good....
I love that de fei is a reformed player killer that show a greater thought about the character. He seem a more well rounded character in some interestingly tough situations.
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The development is slow, but fast paced in the first chapters. Which isn’t bad it’s detailed but continues quickly. I don’t know if the book was translated it was an option for the rating. And if it then it’s extremely well done there isn’t much grammar that could be spotted or corrected. Maybe except for all the swearing 😂
This novel has a rating of 9.2 with 1000's of votes that is a damn high rating. This kind of rating is given to novels like "Lord of Mysteries". But it's from 2013 so you can't trust it. Most of the novel of that time has quite high ratings while not being that good.
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Just adding a review so I can finish a "quest" have a nice day and enjoy reading your web novels so.... good bye and stay safe from the virus :P
Okay...let me be blunt. 1. The first three chapters are important. 2. The first three chapters are very important. and 3. The first three chapters, while important, aren't that significant to the beginning of the story...sorta... This is a story about a guy who decides to turn professional gamer. Unfortunately, (refer to chaps 1-3) he did some very childish things when he was a kid fresh out of school. Now that he's older, he's trying to ignore that part of his life with the latest, hottest VRMMO. Then karma comes and bites him in the...y'know... ^_^ You might not like the MC. His personality is abrasive and brash and hasn't really mellowed that much from that prologue, but he's a very realistic character and very entertaining. You might feel snarly about how he treats his sister's BF, but if she was my sister, I'd act the same way. Basically, this is an entertaining VRMMO story about a sorta reformed troll trying to trod the straight and narrow (and failing rather humorously). Totally hope it gets a full pickup because I did laugh quite a bit while reading of his misadventures (Katrina...lol...).
First three chapters named prelude show MC being a spiteful youth, seem to have upset other readers. However main story starts after this and he’s now calmer but still devious. Background settings of the story appears to be some derivative of the Heroes of Might and Magic universe.
i iike this novel. i like protagonist. story enjoyable but patroitis. i very like game about mekanisme, class, npc etc. i was reading this novel in other website but stopped.. i hope editor pick this novel.
A solid start to a book. Worth a look into, if nothing else. It does follow the usual trope of "weakling gets strong, acts dumb to well known tropes, we all cringe," sometimes. But it still is enjoyable to read.
Great story you will Surely like it 🥂🍻🥂🍻🥂🍻🍻🍻🥂🥂🍻🥂🤜💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎🍻🥂🍻🥂🍻🥂🍻🍻🍻🥂🍻🥂🥂🥂🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🍻🥂🥂🥂🥂🍻🥂🍻🥂🍻🥂🥂🍻🥂🍻🥂🍻🤜🍻🥂🍻🥂🍻🥂🍻🥂🥂🍻🥂🥂
It's a very good book but I didn't read it I'm sorry you did all of that work but it just didn't interest me but I hope I speck for most people who read this that it is a very good novel
Very good VRMMO novel. (+)After read 60 chapters I view a "Overgeared" vibe with a trash mc. This mc is very arrogant not like Grid but he think about all the elements in this game. This Vrmmo game is interesting with complexe attribut, ambiance and good Npc/quest/aventure system. For now the chinese nationalism is not present but I think he will appear later. (-)They are too long explains for skills. The mc is mainly a man who WANT MONEY and it's really frustrating when he tries to sell all rare items that he finds. So this is a VRMMO novel with a trash /arrogant /strategist mc who looking for money at all costs.
I love this story. Please put it up soon. I can't wait for more chapters of this novel. Was already addicted after the tenth chapter or so. Hopefully, others will see it the same as me :))))))))
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Extremely unlikable MC. Not recommended at all unless you want to be brain dead. A trash among trash novels. After reading a few pages your IQ will drop by a few levels.
The novels protagonist isn't likable from the start which isn't a good sighn even if the story is good later on a unlikable mc that leaves a bad taste in your mouth is quite a red flag for me sorry qidian has picked quite uninteresting novels atleast for me if you guys like it great for you just not my cup of tea
I’m up to 1639 chapters in the MTL it is a pleasure to see it here and my demand accepted! If you like build up, this story is for you. That’s this story as well as its MC’s strength. Dafei is not some sort of PVP god, he uses everything at his disposal: weapons, NPCs, terrains, other players and logic. He dies sometimes, the spies in his rank are not magically busted, you don’t feel the plot armor. When he wins, it feels like he owned his victory. The author is very patriotic towards China and he makes his country looking stronger by making other countries stong rather than weak, game of alliances (and some favoritism, but it his country and his story, eh). For what might turn you down, the MC is harem seeking. But he’s honest about it and act like any guy would: he’d rather have girls than guys in his army. Surprisingly enough the girls actually have personality even when they’re NPCs. They’re not his, he can loose them. Sometimes they exploit him. The MC also like to talk to you about him, but without breaking the fourth wall, he’s like: Your bro (that’s him) is... If you like the MC in The Demon’s cage, you will like him.
I guarantee Webnovel will put this trash novel in the voting section for release. Whichever novel with the most soulstones used will be selected as editor choice? Yeah fucking right. They do a process where they release 8 books and then take away the novels that are highly rated since they don't want to put too many high quality books up at once. They want to maximize profit by milking money of trash novels and a few good ones. Only when 1 highly rated novel is done, will they put another out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.