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Decent...................... ..... ................................................................................................
it has potential if you ask me its great so far granted it only has 2 chapters at the point im writing this and seems to have had several months between chapter 1 and 2 but that might have something to do with how many storys the author has on his profile i dunno seems like he needs to focus on one at a time before starting a new one if you ask me
Good idea but made in wrong way. Mc is in the body of ulquiorra and shows no fightining instincts or fighting techniques. System has too much power which shows when in selectivly alows martian to see mc memories. Batman accepted MC into the team just because when considering how bloody bleach was, the way mc explained his race and memories that martian has seen, MC would be closed in a cell right away. Also propably the worst is the way it's writen where i can't see MC as more then a side character. It's like im reading a fanfic that shows original from side characters pov and i know it even without reading the original...
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
is there a love interest.............................;#<##:#&#^#&#^#;#%#&##;#*##*##;##(#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&##&#&#&#&#&&#&##&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#&#
It has potential however it was ruined with the stupid decisions made by the author. The mc has a gamer system and needs kills to improve his level yet he joins the young justice league. THis is also one of those typical novels where the mc knows the future and then gets too strong for his team and starts acting on his own and pretending just for cannon to progress. It’s really bad because no one seems to notice anything especially Batman who doesn’t act like Batman at all. In This novel it’s like everyone is an idiot and can’t think for themselves
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
keep going kratos will be proud ............................................................................................................
protagonist is uquiorra but is knocked out by batman and tells all his secrets to him, plus a fanfic shit on this site Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx