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Cringe story I remember reading but never reviewed because of how utterly unimpressive it was. I remember the MC getting some kind of cringe 9 pagoda sword and everyone thinking him to be a failure somehow when the fact that it has 9 stages instead of 7 like the 7 stage pagoda spirit should already be enough to make everyone hyped. The author basically forces situations where the MC is looked down on just so he can write his gay "I am a victim" story.
Начало ФИКа понравилось больше всего. С середины книги началась авторская муть, где ГГ стал OP и MS. Ему было волне достаточно крутого меча. Окей, автор дал ему двойные скилы от его чехла для меча. Всё. Нахрена было давать ему ещё плюшек? Это перебор. Это дичь, чушь и бред. И конечно ПАФОС. Автор жить не может без Пафоса.
very bad fanfic on all fronts, pity that we can't give a lower score very bad fanfic on all fronts, pity that we can't give a lower score
No original novel Same with nine treasurer sword novel Yxtxtikggooggiohodhpfjjfufhogiititiddhdgugdghoidiggifoohigohohigigigigdiohfoidigfoofighiouigidfhogohigigohfoohhf[img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=coins][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
is this small harem like 9 treasure sword? or multi ship? just want to know before I read this. I rarely can get invested in something unless it's harem since when a fic gets bad or turns out to be trash just gotta think of the harem :P
I Really like this story In the beginning of the story it had some grammar mistakes but i could read over them ......................
An amazing story I read this when it had less than 10 chapters and then forgot about it glad I did cause I can binge read 40 odd chapters haha. gj author and don’t drop. ……………………………………. ……………………………………. ……………………………………. ……………………………………. …………………………………….
This fanfic is sofar one of the best fanfics I have come across. Keep up the good work author 😌👍. You have got my interest and support for this fanfic.
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the star tells wha you need to know . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .
i want to ask even this au , is this fanfic to different from origunal?? ☁☁☁☁☁☁☁⚡ ☁☁☁☁☁☁⚡☁ ☁☁☁☁☁⚡⚡☁ ☁☁☁☁⚡⚡☁☁ ☁☁☁⚡⚡☁☁☁ ☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁☁ ☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁☁☁ ⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡ ⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡ ☁☁☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁ ☁☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁ ☁☁☁⚡⚡☁☁☁ ☁☁⚡⚡☁☁☁☁ ☁⚡⚡☁☁☁☁☁ ☁⚡☁☁☁☁☁☁ ⚡☁☁☁☁☁☁☁ Shocked!
Great job. One of the best books I've ever read. I hope the author will not give up writing! Good luck! ^o^^o^^o^^o^^o^^o^^o^^o^🥣🥣🥣🥣🥣......
You can delete this if you want, I just had to drop this here. There's occassional grammar issues, but overall, it 'barely' affects the reading experience, so it's a good read for me personally. But as the guy said a month or so ago, why was it at that early age? It doesn't make sense. PS: I'm too tired to make a review rn so like. :^ )
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Good imagination and character development and the details regarding the new characters introduced to support the MC are also good. Don’t know how the story will progress but till now it’s good
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The grammar can be improved. But the overall development of the story is going in a good direction. Hopefully the Author does not drop this. I really enjoy reading this fan-fic.
tu fanfiction esta genial no la dejes caer, el mc esta genial nada mas que cuando se encuentre con tang sang y su maestro no se ponga de lame botas pero gracias por tu fanfic
So This is pretty good but it has a few problem the grammer is weird at some point same for the conjugaison is hella weird sometimes too . English is probaly not the first language of the author so i dont blame him that mutch i hope he trys to correct his mistake . Apart from this the story is good and has potential just repeating my self i really hope he corrects his mistake so bye
This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it.
There's always a suspension of belief when reading fanfiction, but letting an untrained 5 year old who was hidden at birth leave the clan to travel alone, specially in a dangerous world like this? Good luck with the story, it is fun if you turn off your brain, but otherwise, you won't be able to enjoy it. Pros From the little I read, the characters were beginning to be fleshed out Grammar and structure is good Cons I said it already, so no need to repeat
One of best Soul land fanfic I have read. No System. Not reincarnated but still a genius. I only hope that author won't drop it.[img=update]
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Cringe story I remember reading but never reviewed because of how utterly unimpressive it was. I remember the MC getting some kind of cringe 9 pagoda sword and everyone thinking him to be a failure somehow when the fact that it has 9 stages instead of 7 like the 7 stage pagoda spirit should already be enough to make everyone hyped. The author basically forces situations where the MC is looked down on just so he can write his gay "I am a victim" story.
Начало ФИКа понравилось больше всего. С середины книги началась авторская муть, где ГГ стал OP и MS. Ему было волне достаточно крутого меча. Окей, автор дал ему двойные скилы от его чехла для меча. Всё. Нахрена было давать ему ещё плюшек? Это перебор. Это дичь, чушь и бред. И конечно ПАФОС. Автор жить не может без Пафоса.
very bad fanfic on all fronts, pity that we can't give a lower score very bad fanfic on all fronts, pity that we can't give a lower score
No original novel Same with nine treasurer sword novel Yxtxtikggooggiohodhpfjjfufhogiititiddhdgugdghoidiggifoohigohohigigigigdiohfoidigfoofighiouigidfhogohigigohfoohhf[img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=coins][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
is this small harem like 9 treasure sword? or multi ship? just want to know before I read this. I rarely can get invested in something unless it's harem since when a fic gets bad or turns out to be trash just gotta think of the harem :P
I Really like this story In the beginning of the story it had some grammar mistakes but i could read over them ......................
An amazing story I read this when it had less than 10 chapters and then forgot about it glad I did cause I can binge read 40 odd chapters haha. gj author and don’t drop. ……………………………………. ……………………………………. ……………………………………. ……………………………………. …………………………………….
This fanfic is sofar one of the best fanfics I have come across. Keep up the good work author 😌👍. You have got my interest and support for this fanfic.
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ネタバレを明かす the star tells wha you need to know . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .
i want to ask even this au , is this fanfic to different from origunal?? ☁☁☁☁☁☁☁⚡ ☁☁☁☁☁☁⚡☁ ☁☁☁☁☁⚡⚡☁ ☁☁☁☁⚡⚡☁☁ ☁☁☁⚡⚡☁☁☁ ☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁☁ ☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁☁☁ ⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡ ⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡ ☁☁☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁ ☁☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁ ☁☁☁⚡⚡☁☁☁ ☁☁⚡⚡☁☁☁☁ ☁⚡⚡☁☁☁☁☁ ☁⚡☁☁☁☁☁☁ ⚡☁☁☁☁☁☁☁ Shocked!
Great job. One of the best books I've ever read. I hope the author will not give up writing! Good luck! ^o^^o^^o^^o^^o^^o^^o^^o^🥣🥣🥣🥣🥣......
You can delete this if you want, I just had to drop this here. There's occassional grammar issues, but overall, it 'barely' affects the reading experience, so it's a good read for me personally. But as the guy said a month or so ago, why was it at that early age? It doesn't make sense. PS: I'm too tired to make a review rn so like. :^ )
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Good imagination and character development and the details regarding the new characters introduced to support the MC are also good. Don’t know how the story will progress but till now it’s good
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The grammar can be improved. But the overall development of the story is going in a good direction. Hopefully the Author does not drop this. I really enjoy reading this fan-fic.
tu fanfiction esta genial no la dejes caer, el mc esta genial nada mas que cuando se encuentre con tang sang y su maestro no se ponga de lame botas pero gracias por tu fanfic
So This is pretty good but it has a few problem the grammer is weird at some point same for the conjugaison is hella weird sometimes too . English is probaly not the first language of the author so i dont blame him that mutch i hope he trys to correct his mistake . Apart from this the story is good and has potential just repeating my self i really hope he corrects his mistake so bye
This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it. This humble reader sincerely begs the Author to continue the story and not drop it.
There's always a suspension of belief when reading fanfiction, but letting an untrained 5 year old who was hidden at birth leave the clan to travel alone, specially in a dangerous world like this? Good luck with the story, it is fun if you turn off your brain, but otherwise, you won't be able to enjoy it. Pros From the little I read, the characters were beginning to be fleshed out Grammar and structure is good Cons I said it already, so no need to repeat
One of best Soul land fanfic I have read. No System. Not reincarnated but still a genius. I only hope that author won't drop it.[img=update]
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is the dropped if not where can i read more