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You shouldn't have delete the previous story and made a new one...i liked re-reading the story ,,😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
Good grammar and creativity! The pic is as awesome as the idea and it would have been in my Library but .....it isn't ...srry author ☹. The reason is simple ....helping stupid characters ..or maybe it is just one of the reasons! I mean ....who helps Issei creating his Harem even if he is the heir of the God of Love ! You could have also made a better introduction to the Character and how he got to the World ! It is just my opinion and I hope you understand it ;) Write me if you changed your mind and decided that helping Issei is as usless and meaningless as these religious wars ! I HATE ISSEI ! Most usless and retarded character in the whole anime business!
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Its just wish fulfillment...read first 3 chps and you'll understand, all the relationships are shallow [MC is OP or goodlooking and chicks fall in love], MC is retarded and stupid [ex: flat out says he is a god,],....MC seems to be a collector [just collects shallow women]/....MC is shallow and pathetic...its just a normal pervert FF. IF i am harsh..remember its just what I thought, just my OPINION....you are entitled to your views...for me its cliche garbage **: the stars are there for the picture....honestly thought it was going to be about a mafia SI MC in an anime world[a story much better than this ****]
You shouldn't have delete the previous story and made a new one...i liked re-reading the story ,,😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
Good grammar and creativity! The pic is as awesome as the idea and it would have been in my Library but .....it isn't ...srry author ☹. The reason is simple ....helping stupid characters ..or maybe it is just one of the reasons! I mean ....who helps Issei creating his Harem even if he is the heir of the God of Love ! You could have also made a better introduction to the Character and how he got to the World ! It is just my opinion and I hope you understand it ;) Write me if you changed your mind and decided that helping Issei is as usless and meaningless as these religious wars ! I HATE ISSEI ! Most usless and retarded character in the whole anime business!
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD VIBESSSSSSSSSSSSSS😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😀😀😀😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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Good harém harém harém harém para botar good GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDD DDDDDDDDDDD GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDD DDDDDDDDDDD
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Its just wish fulfillment...read first 3 chps and you'll understand, all the relationships are shallow [MC is OP or goodlooking and chicks fall in love], MC is retarded and stupid [ex: flat out says he is a god,],....MC seems to be a collector [just collects shallow women]/....MC is shallow and pathetic...its just a normal pervert FF. IF i am harsh..remember its just what I thought, just my OPINION....you are entitled to your views...for me its cliche garbage **: the stars are there for the picture....honestly thought it was going to be about a mafia SI MC in an anime world[a story much better than this ****]
Still waiting 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊