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Obuba_peter

best novel you'll ever get around here of you are looking 4 something different not like those Chinese novels with complex settings , long names, to many types of power systems, pills, martial arts blah blah blah and worst of all complex ranking system which always start with qi condensation expert. I recommend this novel also I think for of Tricksters by the same author is better p.s I've practically read all the novels of this author and they are exceptional, kudos!

6mth
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CHAOS_FOOLISH

When does he stop being his sister's shadow and make his reputation without hiding his powers? ................................................................................................................................

7mth
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Imadragonrider

Awesome story! I just could not put it down! I loved the character development. The story was compelling and rewarding. I highly recommend this to anybody looking for a good read. Despite English not being the author's first language, it read quite well. But even when not, you could usually decipher it. Really, the most common problem was simply mixing up his/her or he/she. An editor would have helped. Honestly, I might not have even given this book a chance if I had initially known, but this book had me hooked before I realized the love interest(s) aspect would involve this harem concept. Still, I thought that it was beautifully handled, with mutual respect and honor. And a solid context for its existence. Truly, the prioritizing and care of family was simply excellent!

7mth
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Joshua_Moses_7430

It's nice enough but my problem is what's the holdup. You ended the novel with a cliff hanger but I've found nothing. I really loved the development of the character with the shady past, the cold vibe and everything. You did good but be fast with the continuation. So what's up ?????

8mth
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Somebody6666

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Ethan_Archer

Its starts out pretty chill. Then they introduce some evil young master type character that clearly deserves death, but for sone reason the mc doesnt kill him? Its not really explained that well. Also, I find it unrealistic the 2 high school kids cant report this guy and his family to authorities. On top of that theres supposedly 400mill people and somehow only 3 S Rankers in japan? Unrealistic again.

1yr
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wisefox

10/10. The only story I have read where a 'harem' makes sense and it does not feel forced or like fan service. It's really good and I wished it could have gone for longer.

1yr
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FatPenguin97

I've never really done a review, so I just wanted to point out some things I wish I had seen more of. While I do understand, the protagonist is the protagonist and a genius one at that. I do wish he'd have gotten hurt more often learning new abilities, considering they were often highly dangerous either just to him or to other i.e the sonic boom for his swords would likely affect the army just from the pressure alone but no one seemed to be affected by it as well. I understand he learned to control the direction, but he didn't have that beforehand and was still using it[I might be mistaken, tbh but I'm fairly certain I'm right] as well as just having a harder time overall. While it would have been filler especially if its super detailed though i really dont mind cause I'd love to see a character grow, I would've loved to see training arcs for the wives as well and definitely more niche abilities(Ayakas exploding bullets/arrows for Evan/Tasha or just upgraded abilities(Ayakas fire birds turning into the "homing missles") from them. On top of that it I'd have loved to see them and even the armies combo thier abilities together like how the assassins made a fire tornado against Kai/sanae or when chiyo kudo/Becca/kai made a field of ice spikes when they were in Russia. I'd love to see a more fleshed out version of the failed zodiacs as well. Perhaps some having more synergy with their animals being stronger in a certain aspect such as intellect, strength, speed, essentially being a zodiac that even the others would they they're one too that maybe some other scientist is making them. We never did get to meet Taurus, and the Zodiac project was successfully so why aren't there more? This is definitely more of a 2nd book option but yeah I'd have loved to see the governments thoughts on zodiac and what plans they had for them, what animals they wanted to use as well as Isabelle/Evan/Sofia/Kai learning to use the zodiac blood from an early age. Seeing how each base started would be cool as well, especially since they aren't similar in how they ask their students to gain experience. The U.S. base just throws them out there, working alongside an established army but also has them perform squad missions without the help of the army. The U.A base has them ease into it via simulation tubes and practical exams where the armies are, so it's relatively the safest option. The E.U base has exoskeletons. I would love to figure out the origin of that as well, so many students just fight solo or in small groups. The exoskeleton mainly helps with physical abilities, so they should have the biggest amount of brawler types as well. I'd like to see the first glimpses of S rank monsters as well. How they came to be because when you added the Brazilian wandering spider being afraid of lightning cause it almost died before the apocalypse, that was just a nice addition. I understand S ranks are generally the biggest, baddest, and smartest, but are they born that way? can a d rank monster just kill others and essentially "rank up" in order to become better? They can be trained because the sea princess trained a few A rank monsters to essentially suicide when attacking Kai so would there be instances of a single animal in a pack learning from battles they survived(not likely considering the status quo is mass genocide from the armies) and that animal being seen again in multiple battles till it becomes an s rank? I hope you write more books cause I'm definitely invested in this world. overall, I loved the book and hope others enjoyed it as much as I did.

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friginbotics

I absolutely loved reading this story through all the highs and lows, it was such a thrilling roller-coaster and an amazing journey! Thank you so much for creating it Fixten! (now if only there was a sequel)

2yr
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facholyn

Love it. The story has a good pase and I feel that doesnt have filler chapters. A good read

2yr
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Hector4684521

why do the writers always have their mc with the "average looking" tag can you just have yous mc with an above average, super handsome or something like that nobody would be capable of having a harem without being goodlooking

2yr
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fixmalve

The characters are incredible cliché to the point that they are in no way real people. They don't act off, they act like they are all psychopaths without any humanity in them.

2yr
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Damian_samuel

For me this is best that I've read so far, everything is just top notch,you took ur time to research properly battle strategies were not the best but ît was beautifully written. A sequel (part 2) wouldn't be bad what do u think

2yr
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MrNewbie

The mc completely lacks any sort of personality ( other than being indifferent) and lacks any sort of initiative it's like reading about the life of a brick. The author seems to not have any idea of how social interactions works. The way they shout the name of the magic is extremely cringe and unnecessary and all female characters are extremely easy to hate. There are still many things that i haven't said but i feel is a waste of my time to speak about this novel even for another second

2yr
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Dennis_Mungai_8622

Not bad but eliminate the immorality in the book for the bible says we should take captive every thought to Christ thus eliminate the it out

2yr
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ProboscisMonkey

I haven’t read this yet but judging off the fact you wrote reincarnated to bonk in another world you are god tier author so 5 stars even though I haven’t read

2yr
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itsDanielJohnson

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2yr
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CatHam

4.2 stars Writing quality is good but i gave 4 stars because there are some mistakes are some places where the wording could have been better. Updating stability i give 5 stars for every novel because i cant just bother checking. Story development is 4 stars though if i could give 3.5 for it, i would. But it leans more to 4 than 3 so 4 it is. Mostly because it's incredibly predictable and feels like a bunch of isekai Cultivating faceslapping moments put together. Character design is 3 stars since as in story development it is also clique and repetitive. With the super powerful bro con m, being underestimated, some powerful guy daying he will be strong, harem with tsundere. And im guessing someone who knew him but he forgot them might come as well. All which love him btw. The only problem is its repetitive and instant harem. (if it came slowly it would be fine.) World background is 5 stars. Even though this particular world background is rather overused, this still has a uniqe aspect about it compared to other worlds with similar designs with it. Over all. I love the concept and the ideas behind the novel. Just that it wasn't executed well enough was the only flaw. I'm sure with more writing experience you can certainly write a good novel. One that i will give 4 stars on character design hopefully. Keep up the good work. Also, even if i wont read this, just know that there will be lots of people who genuinely love this novel. And i hope you keep writing for them, even if i wont read this i gave it as high a rating as I could as id rather not give 1 star and just ruin this review. I liked most of this novel, but some parts could use some fixing. I hope you have a wonderful day and never lose your motivation to write!

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2yr
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Jus7aguy

Decent story, a few of the action scenes may have gone into a little too much detail, and there was the occasional hand waving over a plot development, but it tells a good yarn and is an entertaining read. Only real complaint was having the MC name bounce between Kai and Theo, sometimes in the same sentence. As with most web novels, the lack of a decent proof-reader shows often in wrong words etc sometimes reversing the meaning of a sentence from what, from context, it was intended to be.

3yr
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StanLJP
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Fairly mediocre to say the very least. When I began reading this, I initially thought of it as a knock off “Irregular at Magic High-School” or something of the sort for obvious reasons, but I was proven wrong as I read further as this thought couldn’t be any further from the truth. Although I honestly would’ve preferred that in comparison to what this novel turned out to be. I think the plot’s progression was okay, but the battles were quite stale and often times unnecessarily dragged out. I mean, the novel itself is pretty much a big battle against one other race and I for the most part skipped most of those chapters as the fights weren’t all that interesting and predictable. Even the last dozen chapters or so just switched between povs of different fights, makijg for a pretty boring ending. The author tries to hype up the MC for his genius ability in warfare, but I really don’t think it brought any excitement to things whatsoever. What really ruined this novel for me was the characters and their interactions. More often than not, the conversations were incredibly dull and emotional scenes simply failed to invoke any reaction from me because it just felt too unnatural. The romance was even worse. It was just shoved down our throats with no real develmopment to speak of. Don’t think that there was anything particularly wrong with the girls, but it was done poorly. In all, this novel left me disappointed and I don’t really recommend reading it unless you simply have nothing better to do.

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3yr
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Reading_Raven

Fairly juvenile writing. I think this author has a good foundation/idea for a story, but the delivery and tone is lacking. I hope this member can review their work and possibly revise it.

3yr
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davechand

Fixten, I very much enjoyed your story and looked forward to every chapter. I was not ready for it to end however, maybe there is to be a 'part deux", sequel or maybe a trilogy (hint, hint, hint, I'll be watching for it).[img=update]

3yr
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MarthaMondragon

This book is all crazy. Omg.. Just after reading only 145 chapters I'm already burning. Like what?? The fact that Michelle and Kai had s*x. I'm team ayaka and what the heck. I really hope to reach and read the part at least when ayaka gets to confess her feelings to Kai and Oh my God... I really ain't support that Kai and Michelle relationship but Kai and ayaka 🖤🖤. Oh My God... Read this book and any team ayaka and kai here??

3yr
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Frank_Bejarano

Great book wish it didn’t end. The ending felt way to fast. But kept me super entertained for all the chapters. Listen to it on the eta to work and home. I am not sure if there is a new book sense it was left on a cliff hanger.

3yr
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Matheo_573

I've partly read it a long time ago. But now that i'm back, I can't use fast pass to read. Internet is silent on that. Can someone explain what's going on?

3yr
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Daoist311254

So every webnovel reader should know that there are a lot of stories where the main character is to op at the beginning to he has a godly ability. In this novel, the author was able to produce a well-powered main character derived from the simplest things in life. It has a good and sometimes fun story which is refreshing to read

3yr
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Zzz_808

not worth even for a little time[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

3yr
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Christian_Quirimit

5 stars!!! just today I finished reading this novel... I wonder if author-san would make another sequel... AUTHOR-SAN I BEG YOU TO MAKE A SECOND SEQUEL!!!! I BEG YOU!!!

3yr
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unBoludoMas

Mi opinión sobre esta novela siendo yo una persona muy quisquillosa con el tema del harén es que hay muchas cosas que le dan un bajón como las interacciones con las chicas al principio es muy cliche siempre e odiado a las primeras mujeres que aparecen en las novelas porque siempre pasa algo que las empareja con el prota en este caso Ayame es muy molesta no le agrada la personalidad que le dió el autor ya que le dió una personalidad de lente cerrada como " porque perdí, yo lo subestime y no hice todo lo posible, le demostraré que puedo vencerlo mostrar le mi valía" eso es muy cliche y para mí me arruina la experiencia de lectura también eso de que al derrotarla está atada a el porque pasó con todas sus generaciones se me hace muy molesto deje de leer la desde el capítulo 15 porque ya le parecía muy poca de mi agrado porque ya estaba haciéndome una imagen mental de como sería la historia teniendo demaciado cliché y prefiero no leer la que leerla y encontrarme que lo que pensaba era cierto. estaba buena la idea y yo siendo un gran fanático del harén siempre que Leo una novela me fijo principalmente en las chicas y el tamaño del harem

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SomethingElse1

It's alright for now but I wish the author would get a proofreader or something. Maybe they did later on in the story but early in, you can tell that the author struggles with details. A lot of details that are written in make absolutely zero sense, it might make sense to the author as they're the ones who wrote it but to the reader it is just nonsense. Definitely needs a lot of fixing up though I'm still early in the story.

3yr
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Obuba_peter

best novel you'll ever get around here of you are looking 4 something different not like those Chinese novels with complex settings , long names, to many types of power systems, pills, martial arts blah blah blah and worst of all complex ranking system which always start with qi condensation expert. I recommend this novel also I think for of Tricksters by the same author is better p.s I've practically read all the novels of this author and they are exceptional, kudos!

6mth
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CHAOS_FOOLISH

When does he stop being his sister's shadow and make his reputation without hiding his powers? ................................................................................................................................

7mth
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Imadragonrider

Awesome story! I just could not put it down! I loved the character development. The story was compelling and rewarding. I highly recommend this to anybody looking for a good read. Despite English not being the author's first language, it read quite well. But even when not, you could usually decipher it. Really, the most common problem was simply mixing up his/her or he/she. An editor would have helped. Honestly, I might not have even given this book a chance if I had initially known, but this book had me hooked before I realized the love interest(s) aspect would involve this harem concept. Still, I thought that it was beautifully handled, with mutual respect and honor. And a solid context for its existence. Truly, the prioritizing and care of family was simply excellent!

7mth
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Joshua_Moses_7430

It's nice enough but my problem is what's the holdup. You ended the novel with a cliff hanger but I've found nothing. I really loved the development of the character with the shady past, the cold vibe and everything. You did good but be fast with the continuation. So what's up ?????

8mth
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Somebody6666

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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9mth
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Ethan_Archer

Its starts out pretty chill. Then they introduce some evil young master type character that clearly deserves death, but for sone reason the mc doesnt kill him? Its not really explained that well. Also, I find it unrealistic the 2 high school kids cant report this guy and his family to authorities. On top of that theres supposedly 400mill people and somehow only 3 S Rankers in japan? Unrealistic again.

1yr
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wisefox

10/10. The only story I have read where a 'harem' makes sense and it does not feel forced or like fan service. It's really good and I wished it could have gone for longer.

1yr
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FatPenguin97

I've never really done a review, so I just wanted to point out some things I wish I had seen more of. While I do understand, the protagonist is the protagonist and a genius one at that. I do wish he'd have gotten hurt more often learning new abilities, considering they were often highly dangerous either just to him or to other i.e the sonic boom for his swords would likely affect the army just from the pressure alone but no one seemed to be affected by it as well. I understand he learned to control the direction, but he didn't have that beforehand and was still using it[I might be mistaken, tbh but I'm fairly certain I'm right] as well as just having a harder time overall. While it would have been filler especially if its super detailed though i really dont mind cause I'd love to see a character grow, I would've loved to see training arcs for the wives as well and definitely more niche abilities(Ayakas exploding bullets/arrows for Evan/Tasha or just upgraded abilities(Ayakas fire birds turning into the "homing missles") from them. On top of that it I'd have loved to see them and even the armies combo thier abilities together like how the assassins made a fire tornado against Kai/sanae or when chiyo kudo/Becca/kai made a field of ice spikes when they were in Russia. I'd love to see a more fleshed out version of the failed zodiacs as well. Perhaps some having more synergy with their animals being stronger in a certain aspect such as intellect, strength, speed, essentially being a zodiac that even the others would they they're one too that maybe some other scientist is making them. We never did get to meet Taurus, and the Zodiac project was successfully so why aren't there more? This is definitely more of a 2nd book option but yeah I'd have loved to see the governments thoughts on zodiac and what plans they had for them, what animals they wanted to use as well as Isabelle/Evan/Sofia/Kai learning to use the zodiac blood from an early age. Seeing how each base started would be cool as well, especially since they aren't similar in how they ask their students to gain experience. The U.S. base just throws them out there, working alongside an established army but also has them perform squad missions without the help of the army. The U.A base has them ease into it via simulation tubes and practical exams where the armies are, so it's relatively the safest option. The E.U base has exoskeletons. I would love to figure out the origin of that as well, so many students just fight solo or in small groups. The exoskeleton mainly helps with physical abilities, so they should have the biggest amount of brawler types as well. I'd like to see the first glimpses of S rank monsters as well. How they came to be because when you added the Brazilian wandering spider being afraid of lightning cause it almost died before the apocalypse, that was just a nice addition. I understand S ranks are generally the biggest, baddest, and smartest, but are they born that way? can a d rank monster just kill others and essentially "rank up" in order to become better? They can be trained because the sea princess trained a few A rank monsters to essentially suicide when attacking Kai so would there be instances of a single animal in a pack learning from battles they survived(not likely considering the status quo is mass genocide from the armies) and that animal being seen again in multiple battles till it becomes an s rank? I hope you write more books cause I'm definitely invested in this world. overall, I loved the book and hope others enjoyed it as much as I did.

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friginbotics

I absolutely loved reading this story through all the highs and lows, it was such a thrilling roller-coaster and an amazing journey! Thank you so much for creating it Fixten! (now if only there was a sequel)

2yr
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facholyn

Love it. The story has a good pase and I feel that doesnt have filler chapters. A good read

2yr
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Hector4684521

why do the writers always have their mc with the "average looking" tag can you just have yous mc with an above average, super handsome or something like that nobody would be capable of having a harem without being goodlooking

2yr
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fixmalve

The characters are incredible cliché to the point that they are in no way real people. They don't act off, they act like they are all psychopaths without any humanity in them.

2yr
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Damian_samuel

For me this is best that I've read so far, everything is just top notch,you took ur time to research properly battle strategies were not the best but ît was beautifully written. A sequel (part 2) wouldn't be bad what do u think

2yr
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MrNewbie

The mc completely lacks any sort of personality ( other than being indifferent) and lacks any sort of initiative it's like reading about the life of a brick. The author seems to not have any idea of how social interactions works. The way they shout the name of the magic is extremely cringe and unnecessary and all female characters are extremely easy to hate. There are still many things that i haven't said but i feel is a waste of my time to speak about this novel even for another second

2yr
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Dennis_Mungai_8622

Not bad but eliminate the immorality in the book for the bible says we should take captive every thought to Christ thus eliminate the it out

2yr
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ProboscisMonkey

I haven’t read this yet but judging off the fact you wrote reincarnated to bonk in another world you are god tier author so 5 stars even though I haven’t read

2yr
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itsDanielJohnson

[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
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CatHam

4.2 stars Writing quality is good but i gave 4 stars because there are some mistakes are some places where the wording could have been better. Updating stability i give 5 stars for every novel because i cant just bother checking. Story development is 4 stars though if i could give 3.5 for it, i would. But it leans more to 4 than 3 so 4 it is. Mostly because it's incredibly predictable and feels like a bunch of isekai Cultivating faceslapping moments put together. Character design is 3 stars since as in story development it is also clique and repetitive. With the super powerful bro con m, being underestimated, some powerful guy daying he will be strong, harem with tsundere. And im guessing someone who knew him but he forgot them might come as well. All which love him btw. The only problem is its repetitive and instant harem. (if it came slowly it would be fine.) World background is 5 stars. Even though this particular world background is rather overused, this still has a uniqe aspect about it compared to other worlds with similar designs with it. Over all. I love the concept and the ideas behind the novel. Just that it wasn't executed well enough was the only flaw. I'm sure with more writing experience you can certainly write a good novel. One that i will give 4 stars on character design hopefully. Keep up the good work. Also, even if i wont read this, just know that there will be lots of people who genuinely love this novel. And i hope you keep writing for them, even if i wont read this i gave it as high a rating as I could as id rather not give 1 star and just ruin this review. I liked most of this novel, but some parts could use some fixing. I hope you have a wonderful day and never lose your motivation to write!

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2yr
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Jus7aguy

Decent story, a few of the action scenes may have gone into a little too much detail, and there was the occasional hand waving over a plot development, but it tells a good yarn and is an entertaining read. Only real complaint was having the MC name bounce between Kai and Theo, sometimes in the same sentence. As with most web novels, the lack of a decent proof-reader shows often in wrong words etc sometimes reversing the meaning of a sentence from what, from context, it was intended to be.

3yr
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StanLJP
LV 15 Badge

Fairly mediocre to say the very least. When I began reading this, I initially thought of it as a knock off “Irregular at Magic High-School” or something of the sort for obvious reasons, but I was proven wrong as I read further as this thought couldn’t be any further from the truth. Although I honestly would’ve preferred that in comparison to what this novel turned out to be. I think the plot’s progression was okay, but the battles were quite stale and often times unnecessarily dragged out. I mean, the novel itself is pretty much a big battle against one other race and I for the most part skipped most of those chapters as the fights weren’t all that interesting and predictable. Even the last dozen chapters or so just switched between povs of different fights, makijg for a pretty boring ending. The author tries to hype up the MC for his genius ability in warfare, but I really don’t think it brought any excitement to things whatsoever. What really ruined this novel for me was the characters and their interactions. More often than not, the conversations were incredibly dull and emotional scenes simply failed to invoke any reaction from me because it just felt too unnatural. The romance was even worse. It was just shoved down our throats with no real develmopment to speak of. Don’t think that there was anything particularly wrong with the girls, but it was done poorly. In all, this novel left me disappointed and I don’t really recommend reading it unless you simply have nothing better to do.

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Reading_Raven

Fairly juvenile writing. I think this author has a good foundation/idea for a story, but the delivery and tone is lacking. I hope this member can review their work and possibly revise it.

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davechand

Fixten, I very much enjoyed your story and looked forward to every chapter. I was not ready for it to end however, maybe there is to be a 'part deux", sequel or maybe a trilogy (hint, hint, hint, I'll be watching for it).[img=update]

3yr
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MarthaMondragon

This book is all crazy. Omg.. Just after reading only 145 chapters I'm already burning. Like what?? The fact that Michelle and Kai had s*x. I'm team ayaka and what the heck. I really hope to reach and read the part at least when ayaka gets to confess her feelings to Kai and Oh my God... I really ain't support that Kai and Michelle relationship but Kai and ayaka 🖤🖤. Oh My God... Read this book and any team ayaka and kai here??

3yr
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Frank_Bejarano

Great book wish it didn’t end. The ending felt way to fast. But kept me super entertained for all the chapters. Listen to it on the eta to work and home. I am not sure if there is a new book sense it was left on a cliff hanger.

3yr
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Matheo_573

I've partly read it a long time ago. But now that i'm back, I can't use fast pass to read. Internet is silent on that. Can someone explain what's going on?

3yr
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Daoist311254

So every webnovel reader should know that there are a lot of stories where the main character is to op at the beginning to he has a godly ability. In this novel, the author was able to produce a well-powered main character derived from the simplest things in life. It has a good and sometimes fun story which is refreshing to read

3yr
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Zzz_808

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Christian_Quirimit

5 stars!!! just today I finished reading this novel... I wonder if author-san would make another sequel... AUTHOR-SAN I BEG YOU TO MAKE A SECOND SEQUEL!!!! I BEG YOU!!!

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unBoludoMas

Mi opinión sobre esta novela siendo yo una persona muy quisquillosa con el tema del harén es que hay muchas cosas que le dan un bajón como las interacciones con las chicas al principio es muy cliche siempre e odiado a las primeras mujeres que aparecen en las novelas porque siempre pasa algo que las empareja con el prota en este caso Ayame es muy molesta no le agrada la personalidad que le dió el autor ya que le dió una personalidad de lente cerrada como " porque perdí, yo lo subestime y no hice todo lo posible, le demostraré que puedo vencerlo mostrar le mi valía" eso es muy cliche y para mí me arruina la experiencia de lectura también eso de que al derrotarla está atada a el porque pasó con todas sus generaciones se me hace muy molesto deje de leer la desde el capítulo 15 porque ya le parecía muy poca de mi agrado porque ya estaba haciéndome una imagen mental de como sería la historia teniendo demaciado cliché y prefiero no leer la que leerla y encontrarme que lo que pensaba era cierto. estaba buena la idea y yo siendo un gran fanático del harén siempre que Leo una novela me fijo principalmente en las chicas y el tamaño del harem

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SomethingElse1

It's alright for now but I wish the author would get a proofreader or something. Maybe they did later on in the story but early in, you can tell that the author struggles with details. A lot of details that are written in make absolutely zero sense, it might make sense to the author as they're the ones who wrote it but to the reader it is just nonsense. Definitely needs a lot of fixing up though I'm still early in the story.

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