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This is in fact amazing, although I don’t know when it is going to be updated again. This story got my attention really quick.
Incredibly entertaining story! A protagonist with powers extremely similar, if not the same as Alastor! This story has great potential. The writing quality is top-notch, the story development is good, the character design is great, and the world background is already linking things together. Easily placing this in my library to keep up with updates.
İts good. İ didnt know harzen hotel before or alastor. Alastor insanity are little good listen it while reading it. İts pretty good but it looks like author deviated. And dropped it as well. Not like his fault. Bringing out charachters like alastor is too hard especially in books and novels
I'm a simple man. I see Alastor fanfic = I click Especially when he makes a deal with people that they will surely either regret or be thankful for.
Continue plz! This story is awesome don’t give this one up It has a lot of potential as a showman, but o have a question? Will there be romance and if so who are the choices so we could choose or we help u choose.
Why don't you write often? You are a good writer and your story is also progressing in a good way. I like your Fan-Fic and I am just in the 3rd chapter. Please write more chapters if you have time.
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work
I need moar chaptaaaah!... I need moar chaptaaaah!... I need moar chaptaaaah!... I need moar chaptaaaah!... I need moar chaptaaaah!... I need moar chaptaaaah!...
Great fanfic so far very interesting. Please don't drop it I can feel this being very popular with where it is heading.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~\\\~~\\\\\~~~~~~~~~~\~~\\~~\~~~~~~~~~
I love the overall concept of the story. I wish you would update more often,but in all I love the story. Keep up the good word. DO.NOT.DROP.
Moree moree 1 chap/day... ............................................................................................................................................
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This is in fact amazing, although I don’t know when it is going to be updated again. This story got my attention really quick.
Incredibly entertaining story! A protagonist with powers extremely similar, if not the same as Alastor! This story has great potential. The writing quality is top-notch, the story development is good, the character design is great, and the world background is already linking things together. Easily placing this in my library to keep up with updates.
İts good. İ didnt know harzen hotel before or alastor. Alastor insanity are little good listen it while reading it. İts pretty good but it looks like author deviated. And dropped it as well. Not like his fault. Bringing out charachters like alastor is too hard especially in books and novels
I'm a simple man. I see Alastor fanfic = I click Especially when he makes a deal with people that they will surely either regret or be thankful for.
Continue plz! This story is awesome don’t give this one up It has a lot of potential as a showman, but o have a question? Will there be romance and if so who are the choices so we could choose or we help u choose.
Why don't you write often? You are a good writer and your story is also progressing in a good way. I like your Fan-Fic and I am just in the 3rd chapter. Please write more chapters if you have time.
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work
I need moar chaptaaaah!... I need moar chaptaaaah!... I need moar chaptaaaah!... I need moar chaptaaaah!... I need moar chaptaaaah!... I need moar chaptaaaah!...
Great fanfic so far very interesting. Please don't drop it I can feel this being very popular with where it is heading.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~\\\~~\\\\\~~~~~~~~~~\~~\\~~\~~~~~~~~~
I love the overall concept of the story. I wish you would update more often,but in all I love the story. Keep up the good word. DO.NOT.DROP.
Moree moree 1 chap/day... ............................................................................................................................................
Shameless author here don't mind me! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOLOLOLOLOLLLOOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
História ótima ma jwjdjwjnsnsjsnfnakkdnrnfbskqjfndinjfjwjxnwmsodjbwndjrkwbjfkwnahjshabxjsjabxjqhxjslJdbdifnsjjdrijsbwjskdbsbxksbsbkxjsdndishjfkfksndbfidnzbciskapanf fkziadnfjdjwkfbbfbsjakdfbxbueisj